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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 1: One Shot

The only comfort in this sad story is knowing that Esme  finally gets her happy ever after. It just takes nearly dying and being transformed by the one she has dreamed of all these years. A small price to pay, to be with your love forever, literally. It still is one of the saddest stories, partly due to the time period. Women didn't have a lot of the options they have now, we have come a long way since the 1920's, thank heaven.



Author's Response:

I have to admit, this is definitely one of my sadder pieces. You only find happiness in it if you know Carlisle is going to save her, haha. Yes, I'm so very thankful that we've come a long way. Thanks for reviewing!

 

~Twivamp :)

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Shot

This was really sad! I was going to read this when it was updated, but then I forgot.. but now I remembered.

I feel so sorry for Esme, I can't even begin to understand what it must feel like to lose a child, especially when she is on her own.

The memory of when she met Carlisle was so sweet. It made me smile when she got her words mixed up! Aww.

Save me, Carlisle, from this terrible madness, Esme thought desperately before throwing herself over the edge of a cliff she had just stumbled across.

That is so fitting with what happened! Carlisle did save her from the madness!



Author's Response:

You sound like me. I think "Oh, I have to do this!" and then all of the sudden you're doing something else and three weeks later you're all, "Oh, I have to do this!" Lol.

I know what you mean. That's why I used my dog, lol, 'cause I'm pretty sure I haven't lost a child. xD

I seriously love Carlisle/Esme, but I, of course, love Jasper/Alice more.

Oh, and to be a bit off topic, I bet it wasn't hard not (oh, double negatives) for you to avoid saying 'Jalice' in this review. :P

 

~Twivamp :)

Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Shot

Very nice job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and rating!

 

~Twivamp :)

Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1: One Shot

wow. i'm in total awe. this was comepletely amazing! i loved the description of how carlisle and esme first met. how old was esme when that happened? anyway, that was just incredible. you're a great author :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Esme was 16, if I'm not mistaken. Thanks for the review and many compliments!

 

~Twivamp :)

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