Reviewer: biblepam (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
I meant to comment re: this when I reviewed on FF.. At the beginning of this post, while Bella was charting, Edward came in and washed his hands.. gasp!!! a Dr. out on the floor, washing his hands?? wow... does not happen near enough!! I also loved the line,' I like to be in control of my spontaneity.'.. that was epic.... Pam B.
Reviewer: babyariel (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
i love how this story goes... i even can't stop smiling :D update please... !
Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
So glad I found this story! I love it! I read your other story and loved it too so I'm glad to see this one! Love the back and forth between Edward and Bella. I love how you write and cannot wait for another update! They need a kiss soon! Its funny cuz as I'm reading I feel those butterflies that Bella must be feeling! Your writing is great!!!!
Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
Love the banter!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
LMAO! Loved it :)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
Love the bantering between Edward and Bella. Especially their text messages. Bella ignoring Edward's messages until the following morning and only then to get a cup of coffee from the doctor's lounge. Getting very comfortable with each other. Edward wants to know what Bella has planned for their date. She hasn't planned anything, does things on the spur of the moment. Will be interesting to see what they do on their date Friday. Alice and her prediction. You'll have beautiful children. Just about sums up where they are both heading. Both are attracted to the other and enjoying each others' company. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
Gotta love the all knowing Alice. HMMMM! Edward showing Bella the secret stash. ME thinks he really likes her. AND WHY ARE THERE NOT MORE PEOPLE READING THIS? IT ROCKS.
Reviewer: Mkmmsm (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
Loved the flirting!!!! PLEASE post again soon!!!
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
I really like this!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
Mmmm... Milky Way coffee...
Great chapter, as always!
Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor
*sigh*
Doctor-ward was so cute this chapter.....Awwwwwww
Reviewer: rosita (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 - I Could Really Use a Drink Right Now
Very interesting chapter!
Reviewer: rosita (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 2 - I Prefer Cornflakes
She drive after 3 drinks? oh,oh no good.
Great chapter.
Reviewer: VampireRockStar (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
Great add...I think this story is just so cute! I love what you have done with the characters. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
Great chapter.. love the interaction between these two, I think they definitely have some chemistry going on. Loved the strip monopoly game and them each individually checking each other out, though Mike is just plain creepy! Thought it was really sweet of Edward to put Bella to bed and give her a goodnight kiss. Hoping Bella will take him up on his offer to take her out with their winnings.
So pleased I found this fic and looking forward to the next update. T x
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
Well its great to see them interacting outside of work. That was one hell of a monopoly and it was so much fun reading. Mike is really creepy in his staring ways. Dude needs to back off...
Hmmm I wonder what our dear doctor thinks of Bella now...snicker
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
i was so giddy when i saw the update in my inbox, i am such a huge fan of your writing. I really like how the work comradery (sp?) is coming into play and how even though Edward is a doctor he isnt a snob he's friends with nurses. i am on the edge of my seat wondering how this all will evolve
as always great job!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
I'd like to play Doctor with Edward :)
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 2 - I Prefer Cornflakes
Great work by Emmett, I just knew it was going to be Edward.. I loved it x
Reviewer: humblejumble (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
Awww. I hope they get together soon!
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Prologue - Never Date a Doctor
Enjoyed the first chapter, looking forward to reading on. x
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
wow wow wow
i love this story sooooooo much
YOU REALLY HAVE TO UPDATE IT MORE OFTEN, IM BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
Bella arriving at the party after her horrid day at the hospital. Bella secretly wondering where Edward is and why he hasn't shown up yet. She makes herself a drink. Mike arrives with his co worker Bree. He latches himself to Bella. Making her a strong drink. Trying to get her drunk. He convinces her to go outside on the patio. Mike asks her if she has a boyfriend. She tells him she has broken up with boyfriend and currently not looking for one. While they are talking Edward joins them on the patio. Mike goes into to refresh his drink, Edward joins Bella on the loveseat. Love the bantering between them throughout the entire evening. Mike is upset that Edward was sitting next to Bella. Alice the ever matchmaker draws Mike away. Edward remakes her drink to avoid her being drunk. Eventually everyone returns inside for a team play monopoly. Edward and Bella win. But one of the deals was both Bella and Edward had to pay Emmett their shirts for his property. Embarrassing for Bella. I can't blame her for that. It was sweet of Edward to tuck Bella into bed with Alice. For a minute there I thought he was going to kiss her goodnight on her forehead or something. The man is very interested in her. The comment about getting together and spending their winnings. Bella said she doesn't date doctors. He said it isn't a date, but in reality that is what he is considering it. He likes Bella. Being friends gives him the opportunity to get to know Bella better. He teases her about hot doctors, anything to get a rise out of her. It's funny. Looking forward to future chapters of good/funny bantering between Bella and Edward. Also Emmett and Bella too. He teases her so well. Can't wait for Edward and Bella to get back at Emmett with Rose. Funnier if they are all there to watch from the back the fireworks.
Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
Interesting way to play monopoly!!!
Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Truce...Again
Awwwww, the end is cute.
And I loved the "strip-monopoly" LOL
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