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Reviews For Doctor's Orders
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Avoidance, Apologies, and an Ice Cream Fetish

Bella, Bella, Bella...what's the matter with you, girl?! lol Jump on that shit like it's white on rice :) If you don't, I will.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

I'm really enjoying this so far.  I am very intrigued by their relationship.  I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

Oh Bella, Bella, Bella, piss or get off the pot. She's killing me. I just want her to jump Edward.

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

completely hooked on this story. i am enjoying it very much.

Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

another fantastic chapter.

i cant wait for more

Reviewer: Lililu (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Prologue - Never Date a Doctor

As a fellow nurse I appreciate your portraying our profession as more than bubble headed,money grubbing sluts,because that is how we are seen way too often. I agree about the Dr.'s,too. Some are wonderful,some are horrible,and most fall somewhere in between. I am looking forward to reading more of your story.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

Oh how the mighty have fallen...lol...Bella fights the inevitable. Fate is pretty persuasive and I have to laugh at those two. Nothing hotter than Dr. Hottie stealing kisses in the break room...sigh. I loved it. Ohhh and now we have a Dr. Ellis tossed into the mix. Things are starting to get more complicated...

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

I am all caught up and I love the story!   I can't believe its taken me this long to find it and read it but so worth it I could barely walk away from my comp!   I know I am so bad for reviews but I promise to be the best R&R.  I really look forward to more so post again soon!!!

Reviewer: kristalee14 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

it's grey's mixed with twilight. youve got me hooked. cant wait for the next update! xo

Reviewer: cemyers3 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

Loved it!  I hope Bella get's over her silly feelings about being single very soon....It's driving me nuts!!!  I want to see them together!  Can't wait for the update!!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

I love the story! Very sexy! Hope we get an update soon!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

well i hope for her sake its nothing to worry about ! 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Slow Days Make For Fine Wooing

Mmm...Edward's cookie breath :)

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

Just give in Bella. Stop fighting, it just isn't going to do any good.

Reviewer: Lechanteur (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

ohhh they are too cute!

i love this playful edward

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

I am really enjoying your story!!  The only thing I hate is that now that I have caught up now I have to wait for updates to see what happens next!  arrrrggghhh, I hate that.  I have 40-11 incomplete stories right now, you think I'd learn not to start a new one, but I do cause this one sounded pretty good and it is!  Just keep the updates coming and it will be alright! ;)  (I personally have only experienced one doctor, my anesthesiologist with my first child has the nerve when my nurses told him to turn down the dosage alittle cause I couldn't feel to push said and I quote, "She just needs to put a little more butt muscle into it and not be lazy'. Needless to say it took me 3 1/2 hrs to get him out because of HIM!  How many babies has he had to push out of his body, huh?)  I know it takes a long time to become a doctor but it doesnt make them king of the hospital and all.   I'd love to become a nurse, but days like Bella had would absolutely drive me insane and I'm a very non confrontational person!  But I probably would do the same as Bella and let him know he is wrong.  Education doesn't always makes us smart.  Am I right? Maybe?

Again, love your story and sorry for the ramble and life story.  Til next update!

Hugs, Stephanie

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

Bella needs to realize Edward is not Alec.  Alec changed after he became a doctor.  Edward is already a doctor and is nothing like Alec.  He's kind, funny, smart, a really good kisser, etc...  Bella likes him and he likes her.  Going on outings (dates) can be fun.  The comedy club was a really good idea.  Sitting close and laughing at jokes.  Talking about the idiots up front that get picked on.  My girlfriend and I went on a cruise and during the comedy show on board ship, the comedian picked on me.  Made breast jokes, which made me blush horribly.  I was 25 at the time.  My girlfriend and a couple from our dinner table all laughed themselves into tears.  I wanted to hide under the table.  I can laugh now, but not then.  So Bella was smart to sit at the back in the dark where she wouldn't be singled out and made a joke for everyone to laugh at.  Kissing Edward would be quite fun.  I'm surprised she stopped so early.  Edward did say they would do what felt right and not when it didn't feel right.  She could have kissed him a lot longer, but her resistance was weakening.  Another date in their future.  Holding hands, kissing, etc... just being together having fun.  That's what it is all about.  Getting to know the person, that's what dating is for.  Bella needs to know Edward and not compare to what happened to her before.  Should be quite interesting if he does text her later in the evening and the next time they are working together.  Especially when Dr Hale and Emmett play into the picture.  They were betting on how things were going between them.  Rosalie sending Emmett out on his ear.  Serious connecting between them.  I have a feeling the connection is due between them.  Behind all  that anger is a much deeper feeling towards the other.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

Well that was one hell of a first "outing/date" The comedy club was a spectacular idea and Oh lord, the first kiss...yowsa. Fabulous my dear! I can't wait to see if they do more kissing in the future...lol...I have a funny feeling Edward will be changing alot of Bella's notions...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor

OMG...that was just to funny. I love that Bella ignored Edward for at least a day. Snicker...I bet Dr. Cullen has not had that happened before. And like Bella, I would do anything for a good cup of coffee. I bow to your brilliance in using Milky Way coffee, those damn things are my cryptonite. Can't wait for the date...

Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

WoooooHoooooo!

Hot Doctor in the House!!!!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

Okay, Bella needs to face reality. She wants Edward!

There. Anyhoo...

Great chapter, as always!

Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

dont make bella mess it up. i love them so much together

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

Aww...I'm happy for them :)

Reviewer: malie (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 - A Lovely Day for an Outing

that was good story i hop bella lets edward in her life they make good togather please HURRY WRITE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: malie (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Trials and Tribulations of Dating a Hot Doctor

i lov it keep the good written up but please hurry soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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