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Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

so go to a party and not go interesting concept lol

Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice fluff!

Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

This doesn't really seem like a one-shot. It seems like a chapter one, or in this case a story with no resolution. Not that it was bad or anything, just seems like it needs more to be complete.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, it was very much appreciated! As this story is just a little interlude before the end of Twilight, it will have its completion in the "Epilogue" of that book. For that reason it doesn't really have its own storyline - which is why it is indeed "meaningless fluff". So I can see what you mean, dear elislyn.

Thank you for reading and taking your time for feedback!

Reviewer: Twilight Fangirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice, really good, so the next part would just be the Epilogue in the book right? Thanks for sharing this, I enjoied it a lot!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review, it was very much appreciated! Yes, next chapter would be Epilogue, it is meant to fit in the storyline. Thank you!

Reviewer: catharticone (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful little interlude that nicely fills in that gap between chapters.  You captured the characters' personalities well, and I enjoyed the touches of humor, too.  Well done!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review - it means more than you know! I am quite fond of this little piece as I had so much fun in writing it. Thank you for taking time reading it!

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