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Reviews For Betrayed
Reviewer: JaneS345 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Betrayal (One-shot)

You are a wonderful writer. No one writes about Didyme so it's great to see a quality short look into her death.



Author's Response:

Thank-you very much. I did consider doing a longer story, but in the end stuck to the one shot. Maybe other people may be inspired to write more of her life!

Reviewer: SunKing (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Betrayal (One-shot)

I read last night as I validated, and I was truly impressed.  You really did Didyme and Marcus justice in this one, and you made Aro the believable villain.  So well done.  I think the most chilling aspect was the mirror between the beginning and the end of the vampire life- "Then there was darkness and burning again."  An absolutely perfect final sentence, if anyone were to ask me.  

Beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thank-you very much! I think Didyme is quite a tragic figure in all this and I enjoyed imagining her last moments. Poor Marcus. I hate to think what his existence has been like since she died. He was never really a villain, despite his association with Aro and Caius.

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