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Reviewer: samantha0078 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

When Edward said that he had to figure out the rest of the poem before he dies, my eyes kinda started to water.

Im looking forward to seeing how Bella, and Edward act together. With Alice she was so involved in his life, it didn't really seem like he was living it. Hopefully when Bella arrives he'll have more control over it, and doesn't have to just go along with everything.



Author's Response:

That poem is actually very special to me, as it was what my mother read to me when I was little. It's really funny actually, because that was all I remembered. We had this book, but we must have given it away, and you can't find the poem anywhere online. But my mom and I were on a mission and I got a call from her one day and she had figured out the rest! So I'm incorporating that into the story, lol.

Bella will definitely give Edward more freedom, but it's gonna be awkward... Thanks fr the great review! It means alot!

Reviewer: gggg (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 1: Regrets

What about the vest treatment?



Author's Response:

Not all people get that treatment. Edward might get it eventually, but for now, the doctors aren't pushing it on him.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

Love the Alice and Jasper meeting!



Author's Response:

One of my fav parts! They're my favorite Twilight couple!! So glad you liked it as well. =]

Reviewer: E_B (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

OMMMMGG I LOVE THIS...

great stuff

keep em coming !

 



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

Wow...I am so relieved Edward is doing better and that he is back home. That poor guy is under a microscope so much it must be a releif to get back to something a bit more comfortable.

EEEppppp I am so excited about Alice and Jasper meeting but what does this mean now that she is transferring? Holy Toledo...

Ohhh and Bella will join us soon...I am beyond exstatic!



Author's Response:

Edward is definitely more comfortable back home, but not for long. Bella will make things a tad awkward for him.

And it totally sucks that Alice is leaving! But I promise Alice and Jasper are meant to be, so no worries there, lol. I'm so thankful for all your support! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

You're going to kill me with this story, I just know it. UGH. The angst. You're going to have me bawling by the time you wrap this up. lol



Author's Response:

Consider yourself warned... this is a drama after all. lol. I hope you do enjoy whatever I throw at you, though! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

Love it



Author's Response:

So glad you do! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: LostHalo (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

I love Alice and Jasper! Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I love em too. My fav couple in the books! Thanks for the support!

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

My heart breaks everytime he talks about dying and leaving his family.  Alice is going to be able to keep him around forever just by determination alone.  So looking forward to Bella next chapter.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Alice is very stubborn, but when it comes to Edward, it's definitely a good thing. I hope you enjoy the next chapter! Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: foxster70 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

I must admit I wasn't too sure about this story, but I have read what you have so far and its very good.

I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you have decided to stick around. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: britablue (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

I loved this chapter but then any chapter where Jasper comes in is a good chapter to me =) Anywho I found your story a week or two ago and I'm totally in love with it... Keep up the great work *cheers*



Author's Response:

Team Jasper?!?! Me too! Love him... anyway, glad you're liking the story. It's always nice to hear the crowd cheering. lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

great chapter.. i am completely in love with this story. 



Author's Response:

Aww. I'm seriously blushing right now. It makes me so happy to hear you enjoy it that much! Thanks for the lovely review =]

Reviewer: GenTonic08 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

Great chapter...can't wait for Bella to appear....he has obviously met her before and he does not seem to really like her...maybe his mind will change later on..:)



Author's Response:

I would say they might have met before, but nothing memorable. He doesn't exactly dislike her, but dislikes the idea of a stranger taking care of him. And his mind just might change later on *winks* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

i am glad that alice got to meet jasper  love how cute they are together and i can't wait till bella gets there i bet there will be some real big fights at first lol



Author's Response:

I love me some AliceXJasper!!! Glad you thought they were cute, that's what I was going for =]

Bella will definitely make Edward's life interesting. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

awwe so he wasnt so bad about her coming i thought it was going to be bad.. yay she is coming... and alice and jasper meet, its so sad thats she's leaving though...



Author's Response:

He's still hesitant, but sees the reason for her. I wish Alice didn't have to leave right after she met the most awesomest man in the world, but that's just the way the cookie crumnbles. Thanks for the review! Hope you enjoy the next chapter.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

I like Jasper in the story! Can't wait for Bella to get here too!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you're all caught up!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 4: Things Turned Inside Out

Noooo ...



Author's Response:

I know, I know. Just keep reading. lol!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accepted

My hearts breaking for edward!  Loving the story!



Author's Response:

Aww, it's a tough life for him. But things will start looking up, I promise!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 2: It's Nice to See You, Too

I hope for better things for Edward!



Author's Response:

Better things, coming up! Haha.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 1: Regrets

So sad!



Author's Response:

I know =[

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

omg i love your story amazing



Author's Response:

Hehe. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

Lurker here! Great story, but very sad. I don't know much about CF, seems I don't hear all that much about it any more. By the way what is the life expectancy of someone with this disease? Has much been done about its treatment in the past 10 years? Just wondering.



Author's Response:

Hello! Glad you came out of the woodwork! Ahaha. CF patients used to only live very young- like childhood, teens, early twenties. But now, they have been doing more advanced treatments and patients are known to live into ther fifties!

Thanks for reviewing! It means alot.

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

Poor Edward (oh dear, all my reviews start this way...). This time, I feel sorry for him because he can't be as independent as he wishes to be. I guess living on your own just isn't an option if you need someone once or twice a day to do chest percussions...

That's an interesting character trait of your Edward, by the way - on the on hand, he wishes to live HIS life and be independent, and on the other hand, he doesn't see any reason for actually living and doing anything. And his overprotective family doesn't make it any easier, they just add guilt to his pile of emotional issues, because he feels obliged to do what he can to make them happy.

I hope that the certain someone you mentioned is going to help him work through all of it and maybe find a place in life which he feels is worth staying in.



Author's Response:

Poor Edward indeed (And I'm pretty sure I start every response with that, lol...)

You hit the nail right on the head. He wants to live... if he can be on his own. But with his family in his business all the time, he just feels like a burden. We all know that SMeyer's Edward is extremely conflicted... I'm just bringing that to my Edward.

And you have hit the nail on the head... a second time. Bella and Edward might not get off at first, but patience is the key =]

Thank you so much for always leaving such wonderful reviews! Your support never fails to amaze me!

Reviewer: beng_326 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 6: Arrangements

it gets romantic huh! can't wait for edward & bella to meet. hope the next update will not take long to come...



Author's Response:

Oh yup it does. Just you wait *winks* Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: yurrrri (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Was This The End?

love it is so amazing and so sad im crying and  im so sad i never know of this illness i fell so sorry to know there is people who suffer like this and hope to god the all this people have a happy good long life to live ........ and your story is amazing love it.  



Author's Response:

It's got to be a tough life, and my heart is out for all people who suffer any illness. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! Thanks so much for the wonderful support!

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