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Reviews For Into the Light

Reviewer: joyful (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 07:52 AM · On: One-Shot

that was such a cute story...

Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:09 AM · On: One-Shot

i wanted to cry my eyes out through most of it but they had a happy ending!!!!so beautiful!!!

Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 06:29 AM · On: One-Shot

ohh wow.. I really liked it. That was great

Reviewer: jhharp08 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:22 AM · On: One-Shot

i actually liked it, it would be cool if you made this an actual long story and not just a one shot.

Reviewer: ec1luver1 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 10:35 AM · On: One-Shot

what exactly do i need to send you to make it work? I see that you have another banner on a different story. Can you find out which code that was. In the meantime try this.

<a href="http://s234.photobucket.com/albums/ee120/93sportsgirl93/?action=view&current=MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee120/93sportsgirl93/MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpg" border="0" alt="Banner for Into the Light"></a>

Author's Response:
Hi, thanks for the effort! I think the other banner uses "direct link".

Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:33 PM · On: One-Shot

This would make an awesome multi-chapter fic. I really think that you need to flesh this out.

Reviewer: ec1luver1 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 10:45 AM · On: One-Shot

I saw that what i sent you didn't work. So I uploaded the banner to photobucket. The html code is also on that site.

http://s234.photobucket.com/albums/ee120/93sportsgirl93/?action=view&current=MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpg

Hopefully this works. Good luck and great story.

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 01:32 AM · On: One-Shot

Cute story. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:59 AM · On: One-Shot

interesting ending but wouldnt edward not realise by scent of smell that bella and alice were different lol

Author's Response:
Hmm... he's human, if they were to use the same shampoo I think they would smell quite similar haha! Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:41 AM · On: One-Shot

Whew..i was worried there for a minute ;)

Reviewer: EternallyJayded (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 04:03 AM · On: One-Shot

Awww. So sweet. It was really great.

Maybe a bit rushed at the end, but I probably think that because I wanted more. :D

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 11:22 PM · On: One-Shot

okay... this could be expanded into a full story so easily... so many details missing!!

but I absolutely love the idea!

Author's Response:
Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 08:24 PM · On: One-Shot

Great story! :P

Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 07:08 PM · On: One-Shot

Let me just say that I'm glad you wrote this because I enjoyed it. The problem was I was too invested in the characters and wanted things to play out differently, so I was ultimately frustrated and disappointed. I guess I thought that the story should have been longer, or that there would be more impediments to them being together, or even that the whole story should have diverged and taken a different path. But then it wouldn't be your story anymore, so, there's not really any need to fix it since there's nothing exactly wrong with it.

Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 06:01 PM · On: One-Shot

Thank you for writing this fic. I really enjoyed. I love how selfless Bella is. How she took over Alice place while Edward lost his vision, temporarily. I will admit that I would love to read an out take of this story. If that is not in the works, thank you for sharing it with us.

Author's Response:
Thank you! I don't actually have an out-take, but what did you have in mind? I wouldn't mind writing a short chapter to go with this one :)

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 05:35 PM · On: One-Shot

I couldn't imagine how you would tell such a story in a one shot but you did it beautifully and you didn't leave Alice hanging! You gave her Jasper in the end and Bella and Edward are truly fairy tale material!! Job well done!! Great writing! *hugs* Joanie

Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: JSVaughn (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 05:13 PM · On: One-Shot

That was beautiful.

Author's Response:
Thank you :)

Reviewer: ec1luver1 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 04:18 PM · On: One-Shot

hey nice story. I really liked it. Inspiring. Really.

I made a banner for it. My second banner making so pardon if it doesn't look good.

Here's the link stuff if you want it. If that doesn't work let me know.

<a href="http://www.mybannermaker.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i.imgur.com/L4P9c.jpg" alt='Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!' border=0 /></a><br>Copy this code to your website to display this banner!<br><textarea cols="40" rows="2"><a href="http://www.mybannermaker.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i.imgur.com/L4P9c.jpg" alt='Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!' border=0 /></a><br></textarea>

Author's Response:
Thanks for the banner! :)

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