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Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 33

Can't wait to hear what Bella thinks of the compromise. I like your Bella better than S.M.'s - she's more considerate of Edward's feelings.

Author's Response:
Okay, so, it's not just me who noticed that! I have been reluctant to mention it, because I didn't want to upset any diehard fans of the books, but I a little bit like 'movie Bella' better for that reason.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 33

Cute!!!

Author's Response:
Thanks!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 33

ok I'm hoping Bella isn't against the marriage idea given her parents are only newly separated. We'll see :)
Should be interesting to see the "consulting" process... and to see how this changes Alice & Bella's friendship among others.

Author's Response:
(GRIN)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 33

that old chestnut!

Author's Response:
Huh??

Thanks for reading and reviewing and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: kjoyp (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 33

:-) Squee!!! He asked her!!! :-D

Author's Response:
Squee! :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 33

Ready for more

Author's Response:
The next chapter should be up fairly soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating!

MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 32

wow to go from such a high to such a series of rapids & lows was hard enough to read... it certainly felt close to home though minus the vamp & wolf aspect :)

Author's Response:
Yeah, it was hard to write, too. I actually cried a few times when writing this fic.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Sunflower (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 32

Yay! Glad to see you updating.

Author's Response:
This fic is actually finished, and posted in its entirety on fanfiction.net. If you're interested...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6059067/1/Two_Weeks

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 32

The only good Jake is a dead one

Author's Response:
LOL! Um, okay. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating!

MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 32

poor bells, its all a little complicated!

Author's Response:
Yeah, but things won't be so very complicated for too much longer. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 32

Oh poor Charlie. Sometimes you can't help who you love.

Author's Response:
Yeah. :(

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 32

Back to an unwanted reality... Come on Bella think about Roses coment!!! hehehe I know she has so much on her mind right now but right now it would be so easy for her to run away out of "anger" for the divorce which would be the perfect time to be changed. Sigh wishful thinking! LOL Post again soon!!

Author's Response:
Wishful thinking, LOL! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 32

Can't say I'm any happier with your version of Jacob than S.M.'s. He's ratting Bella out because he wants to sabotage her relationship with Edward, sucking up to her parents. He's not looking out for Bella but for himself. Well done, again.

Author's Response:
Yeah, I didn't want Jacob to be an obstacle (love triangle stuff), but I also didn't want him too 'likeable'. I think I found a good middle ground with him. Hopefully others agree.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: SiobhanDeRoiste (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 32

aww poor charlie :(

Author's Response:
Yeah, I know, right? :(

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating!

MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: RockinThatAfroPic (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 28

this has been my favoirte chapter too :)

Author's Response:
Awesome! Glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: RockinThatAfroPic (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 13

edward is so cute! the jam thing makes me laugh, i feel the same way about that kind of stuff :)

Author's Response:
LOL, yeah, I've had a lot of great feedback about Edward and the jam. (smile)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 31

i love it! :D

Author's Response:
Wonderful! So glad you did!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 31

wow edward has ballls,,,,not that he would care what that teacher thought but i agree with bella,..it would be much of a bother,,,doesnt edward realize that by asking to sit next to bella he would draw attention to himself lol i thinhk i would die of embarrassment no matter how hot he was ,,,,hmm glad that jessica is more relaxed now,....curious how the relationship will; unfold now

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 31

ahh classic Edward "Excuse me, I'm new here" :) nicely done!

Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: maddierose (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 31

lovveeee :D

well i hope they talk soon about what rosalie had said...anywho...love this story and btw i love eric's name for edward :DDD

peace love edward :D

Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you're loving it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 31

enjoying the story

Author's Response:
Glad to hear it. Thanks for letting me know, and for the awesome star rating!

MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 31

Great work I love how you have Bella po dering Roses statemnet To bad Edward kind of distracted her from her train of thought.... I think when she finally figures it out were going to be "took you long enough!" hahaha Post again soon!

Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you're loving it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 30

hrm I know Bella's doing well at spotting the ways that she and Edward can avoid too much attention, like thinking about possible futures involving marriage... but I think having the hot guy that left his home-school/boarding school arrangement to go school with his girlfriend/soulmate is going to be VERY attention-grabbing? hehe

Oh and I wonder if Bella will put things together regarding Rose's problems with her? I'm guessing it'll be a little while longer since she still hasn't quite figured out she can be Changed...

Author's Response:
Attention grabbing, LOL. Yeah, A little bit. (smile)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 30

wow!

Author's Response:
Um, is that a good 'wow'? If so, thanks! (smile)

If not... I'm sorry.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 29

It's going to be interesting to see just whom reveals to Bella how she can get her HEA with Edward that doesn't involve her growing old enough to look like her gran... almost thinking it'll be Jasper - just so he can get away from the funky depression he's getting off Bella right now?

And because I think Bella would really talk to him, almost the same as Alice. His own background would certainly give her the "worst case" scenario of how her vampire life would "feel"...

Author's Response:
I think you have some surprises coming. (huge grin)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY

Jana~

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