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Reviewer: VampireLady96 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 11:42 AM · On: Afterwards
Very sweer. I loved the irony of Carlisle words when Charlie told him to get some sleep. I'm sorry for Alice though finding out about her past isn't easy.
Author's Response: I have to admit I had fun writing the conversation between Carlisle and Charlie.
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 09:08 AM · On: Afterwards
We don't usually give Alice the credit she deserves for dealing with that difficult information about her past without the kind of "poor me" party that Edward and Rosalie usually have.
Author's Response: Yes, personally I think Alice does react to the news as best can be expected. The next chapter will show a little bit more or her reaction.
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 09:27 PM · On: Afterwards
Edward just can't give himself a break and lay down that burden of guilt. Then too, there's the whole "I know better than you" thing going on. Poor guy, I wish he'd take a breath and relax and trust Alice's visions. It will all work out!
Author's Response: I think nearly everyone has thought that at some point, but the entire Saga would have been a lot shorter if he had!
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 07:19 PM · On: Afterwards
poor edward, poor alice, poor bella (who doesn't know what is coming), poor everybody, but rose is a witch, lol
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Afterwards
Great update! i love to read in Carlisle's POV. I also love the running joke about Esme and driving. The last part with Charlie asking Carlisle questions and Carlisle's inner dialogue was funny. That said, I'm looking forward to the next chapters. After prom, are you going to cover any of the "missing" summer, or are you going to skip to New Moon territory. I really can't wait to read your version of the Cullens during that time.
Author's Response: There's two more chapters to go until we enter New Moon territory, one of which will be a 'missing' summer chaper set shortly after the prom.
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 04:23 AM · On: The Hunt
You did a fantastic job with the other points of view during this chase/hunt. Damn that wonderful, genious Stephenie Meyer for not finishing Midnight Sun. It's always bothered me that Alice didn't see Bella planning her escape at the airport. But I guess she wasn't even considering the possibility of Bella trying to do something like that until she started pulling it in Eclipse all the time.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: VampireLady96 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 01:03 AM · On: The Hunt
I liked this chapter it had a lot of action in it. Edwards love gave him all control he needed. That was really sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 10:20 PM · On: The Hunt
I never tire of this story in all the many different permutations. Guess I'm easily entertained, just give me a Bella and Edward story and I'm a happy old woman! Carlisle and Esme, the foundation of this family, have been endlessly interesting to read about, as have the stories of their"children". As far as I'm concerned, you may keep writing about them to your heart's content, and mine!
Author's Response: Thanks you very much and thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Sugargirl (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 08:42 AM · On: God and His Angels
"Wow, God's fucking one of his angels. They certainly don't tell you that in the Bible." -->> that made me laugh for about an hour :D
Author's Response: Hehehehe, Emmett is such fun to write :) I have no idea where the idea to have him wake up and think he was part of a mixed sex harem of angels came from, but I knew it had to be written :D
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Sugargirl (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 06:34 AM · On: Understanding & Misunderstanding
I think you definitely write Rosalie in character, and I love your little twist in the story when Esme was trying to tell Rosalie what happened to her in her human life. This story amazes me more and more with every chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely reviews :)
I hope you continue to enjoy the story :)
Reviewer: Sugargirl (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 05:56 AM · On: Anniversary
I love sappy endings, so I loved Part Two :). I'm so excited I'm finally able to really enjoy this story, I kind of read some parts of it a while ago, but now I'm just totally sucked into it.
Reviewer: Sugargirl (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 05:26 AM · On: A Year Later
I love how they're always like "No, we definitely can't do this", "It's improper" and then just go for it anyway :)
Reviewer: Sugargirl (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 05:21 AM · On: Alaska
This chapter was so great! And the whole Succubus-Edward situation is hilarious :)!
Reviewer: Sugargirl (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 10:29 AM · On: Snow Angels
Bahaha, I love Carlisle's "problem" :)
Reviewer: twilightluvaX3 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 11:13 PM · On: No, Carlisle!
Hahaha, no I get the scolding third person voice as well. Especially when I am angry at my parents and am screaming curses and obscenities at them in my head XD
~~The rating is for the whole story so far. I only found it today, but I LOVE IT heaps!!~~
Author's Response: Good to know it's not just me!
Hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story :)
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: VampireLady96 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 05:45 AM · On: Welcome
I know that deleted scene I love it and I really don't know which idiot removed it. Really interesting the way you showed nosy Esme. I nearly laughed at that.
Author's Response: I imagine hearing all about Bella and being the only one not to have seen her was killing her - she's allowed to be a little bit nosy!
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 03:32 PM · On: Welcome
Liked the deleted scene with Carlisle and Esme. Loved Esme's POV.
Author's Response: I love the deleted scene too - it had to be in there!
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Welcome
It was wonderful to get this from Esme's loving mother perspective. It brought a little tear to my eye at her joy seeing him come out of his darkplace and actually he happy. She never gets enough time in the books. She doesn't even get her own car!
Author's Response: Indeed, she doesn't!
Haha, in this story Esme's lack of car has become a running joke about her hatred of driving and lack of knowledge about all things motoring!
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Welcome
esme's pov of meeting bella was great
Author's Response: Thanks and thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 10:39 AM · On: Welcome
so very cuuute X3 squeee!
few typos though :(
-come to terms
-shoot not shot
-even Carlisle could be bad as time ?
well anyway, utterly entertaining >^-^<
Author's Response: Thanks, all fixed now :)
Thnaks for the review :)
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 10:31 AM · On: Welcome
That was one of my favorite scenes, too, especially when Carlisle called Esme a hopeless romantic. What the heck, she is! You changed this part of the storyline just a bit and it works just fine, kind of makes it your own. The next part always makes me anxious, with Bella in danger and Edward trying to keep her safe. Thanks for posting so quickly, see you later! Maybe we'll see Rosalie sweeten up just a bit? Yeah, right!
Author's Response: It's one of my favourite scenes too :D
Indeed, the next chapter is an anxious one!
I think we all know it takes Rosalie awhile to sweeten up!
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Marya_1918 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 10:17 AM · On: Welcome
Thank you for another beautiful chapter. It is very interesting to see things through others' eyes. I loved Esme's thoughts. Can't wait for the rest of the story.
Author's Response: Thanks and thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: LizzyDarcy (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Home at Last
I love the way you portrait Alice and Jasper, it's GREAT!!!
However I find Edward and Alice's way to communicate problematic: if Edward is supposed to decide to say something to converse silently with Alice, he knows that he won't have to actually say it out loud. So Alice isn't supposed to see him saying that...
Author's Response: Hmmm... that's a very good point. I suppose he has to imagine himself saying it outloud therefore Alice's see it. Anyway, in my mind, Edward gets fed up after awhile because it's too much effort and they try and find a different method of communication.
Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: VampireGroupie (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Bella Swan
As always, you are an amazing writer.
Author's Response: Thanks and thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: VampireLady96 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 05:26 AM · On: Bella Swan
It was about time. Depresive Edward was driving everyone insane. I can't wait for Bella to come to Cullens house. I hope it will be from Carlisle or Esme's view. I always wondered how would that look like from thei point of view.
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