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Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 8

Is this ever going to update? At least let us know?

Spikey

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 8

Update soon??

Reviewer: sekoehler (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 8

I'm liking this fic.  Poor Edward just seems to be paying dearly for one bad choice....albeit, a really, really big choice.  I'm curious to see how everything unfolds.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 8

And my mind tells me that someone should have slapped Edward...

It's not like he didn't see things coming...

Divorce her. At least say that you don't feel about her anymore what you felt once for her. You don't have to cheat on her, too. It's been enough for her, that's evident, but think about this: just divorce, or divorce because of cheating. Which smack will be bigger?

Looking forward to more.

Spikey

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 8

Now I can understand what tore them apart! Now I see why Edward doesn't leave!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 8

update soon!

Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 8

Well, sounds like Edward got trapped, to keep Tanya happy.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 8

Nice to get the back story :) Puts everything in perspective

Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 8

wow...he should have listened to his gut instinct.
can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: E_B (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 8

good, but more bella/edward ! ASAp

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 8

So much sadness.  She's so broken and he marries her out of obligation, not wanting to hurt her more, hoping that she will find his way back to him.  You gotta love Edward - he's a good man.  He was faced with such a terrible decision - walk away or stay, knowing deep in his heart that she would never come back.   Tragic all the way around.

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 8

I kind of feel bad for Tanya (and of course Edward too).  Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 8

I kind of feel bad for Tanya (and of course Edward too).  Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: poohlicous (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 7

I've just found your story, and I'm really diggin it. Unlike some of the other reviewers I don't think the sudden makeout session was out of context. Looking forward to your next update.

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 7

I know I'm killing time. I know he's sitting on the couch downstairs. I know he has a glass of wine in his hand and I know that he's probably close to finishing the bottle.

She can't even face him anymore... Killing time indeed. Why does *she* stay with him? There doesn't appear to be any more love on her side either, though of course you can argue that we can't really know until we perhaps see a side of her during a conversation? But then again, they don't have those any more.

It looks soft and I almost get back into bed and run my fingers through it.  I know he'd be willing, I know as soon as I want it he'll give it to me.

Maybe not any more... Hehe.

I make a mental note that I want to check into getting new window treatments for the living room. They could definitely use it.  I try to remember when the last time I bought something new for the house. I can't remember and it makes me sad.

Why bother at all? You don't bother with Edward either. And why only take care of the house? The person next to you each night is the one you're supposed to take care of.

Why is she not working for Edward's firm? Or is she her own CEO?

Spikey

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

Oh, this had better end well... Again, Edward, kick the wife out if your life has turned into just bunking together.

Spikey

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 5

Hi again,

The shock of Bella being here wore off a few minutes after she walked out the door. I spent the rest of my workday making sure there was no evidence left behind for Tanya to find.

Part of me wants to say that Tanya doesn't come to the office, so she won't notice anything over there, but there's also his shirt and collar and stuff to worry about, so...

Every Tuesday, huh?

Spikey

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

So Alice is Edward's sister. Mostly Alice is a character that just 'knows' things, so does this one see beyond the charade, see that there's no more love between E & T?

Emmett's his brother, probably with Rosalie? Tanya mentions in chapter 7 that she's probably only one friend, and that friend is stretching things a bit, not a real person to talk to? So Rosalie and Tanya are not friends?

Spikey

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hi again.

My nights continued the way they normally did, vanilla.  Nothing more than what was absolutely necessary.

Well, there's vanilla, and there's vanilla.

Have you read Fifty's version of vanilla yet? Master of the Universe? By Snowqueens Icedragon? It had better not be that kind of vanilla. :P

It's a slow burn at the beginning, but once they get going there'll be no stopping them.

Trust me:)

Not even Tanya? Phew, that's a comfort!

Spikey

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

Divorce papers, Eddie, divorce papers. Before you start cheating. Then she can't be too mad. I mean, if she finds out that you're having an affair when you're initiating the separation, she might surpise you with the strength of her feelings...

Spikey

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ellow.

I wish I would've known back then. I wish I would've known what would come of that night for my marriage. Maybe I could have changed everything, maybe I could have made things work.

But I was caught in the moment, and everything hit me at once. And I just couldn't anymore...couldn't pretend to be happy in a situation that no one could be happy in...

From the sound of the summary, you'd think the affair and everything would go perfect, without Tanya finding out, but this sounds a bit foreboding? Not so good after all?

I read the story already, and Edward was thinking of how stuff would be split up in case of a divorce. Would that mean that Tanya's going to get nasty?

Edward, just either talk to her about what she sees in her future, or just put the divorce papers on the table.

Spikey

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 7

Awwwww, its so sad that Bella sees what Tanya doesn't and that Bella can appreciate Edward.  I can't wait for them to attemp to be friends!

Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, Edward is in one hell of a miserable existence

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

interesting perspective from tanya. It seems she does care for him in some ways but she's just married to her career! I don't get the impression that there is hatred or resentment there from her though I could be wrong!
Looking forward to b&e's relationship to start again on the right foot!

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 7

interesting perspective from tanya. It seems she does care for him in some ways but she's just married to her career! I don't get the impression that there is hatred or resentment there from her though I could be wrong!
Looking forward to b&e's relationship to start again on the right foot!

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