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Reviews For Parachute
Reviewer: Avaanne (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

You've left me very curious after the prologue.  I liked the prologue.  Sometimes authors give away too much and tell most of the story before its had a chance to naturally unfold; however, you've managed to dangle just enough to keep me interested.  Yay.  I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is going to be a great story!!!!!  A prologue and a chapter and I am already hooked!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Okay, their first meeting was really heartbreaking.  I can't imagine finding a toddler in alley.

One question though. Why didn't she take him to the police?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! She was upset so called her dad first, since he's a cop. The next chapter is about their visit to the SPD, actually. :)

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: sarah01 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, this is such an interesting story. Please update it soon, I'm really looking forward to seeing how you develop the story and finding out what happened to Jack.

 

I know that some people on this site upload stories that have already been posted on other fanfic sight. Is this the case with this story. I really want to know what happens next. :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! You're definitely right about it being updated further along elsewhere. :)

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic start :) Can't wait to see how Bella's relationship with little Jack goes. I can only imagine what would have happened to him had she not heard his little cries and ignored the others to go down that alley.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh. its so cute and sad at the same time. i believe i may become a regular reader of this story it is so good. i also like the banner. did you make it yourself? a fresh fruit smoothie for the author because its tasty.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! As for the banner, a reader on FFnet named hologramGal made it for me when she was inspired by the story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

great chapter! im soo hooked! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Prologue

great first chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it! Please update soon! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: aami_cullen (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is actually really good so far. Please write more. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

this is gonna make me cry!!! i can already tell!  OF course it hits home alittle cause my boy is Jack and he just turned 4!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I have a son myself! He just turned 6. :)

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!

<3 Shel

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is a great beginning.  Looking forward to the rest.....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!    

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting story! i can't wait to read more.

My heart melts for the little booger. I'm assuming Jack is Edward's child? What could possibly have led to him abandoning him on the streets? I can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! We''l find out what happened soon enough! ;-)

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!    

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: anduril1134 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh... if I were in that situation I would just sit there and hold the kid and then start crying. And then go spoil him rotten... :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: AmPo (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1




Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: Justcurious8 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi. I absolutely LOVE this story. I have so many questions, but I'll wait awhile to see if they get answered. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Please UPDATE SOON!!!
~E

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: jtab04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really like this story. I wonder what actually happened to the little boy to land him in that position. I am hoping that Edward didn't abandon him. Maybe he got lost? Custody issue?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: blondebella (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

I never read stories if they are not already like 10 chapters in, but this sounded so good, and it really is. I can't wait for the next chapter.

:))



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Jack!!!  I LOVE this story so far!!!  Update again soon please!!!  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

I absolutely love it!

Wow. I wonder what happened to Jack and what Charlie is going to do...Hmm....Posters maybe? What else is Jack going to tell Bella about how he got in the alley? What is Bella going to do?

I love it and can't wait for more!!

 

-lionandthelamblove7



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love it so far : )

Very sweet chapter. I can't wait to read more! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh my god! That just breaks my heart. I cant wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oooh, interesting start! I'm guess he's Edward's son, but I wonder what happened and how he got abandoned. I guess I will have to wait for more to find out! Awesome work! I'm looking forward to reading more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Prologue

Well I like the beginning so far : )



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Geez, I just want to hug Jack and tell him it's all going to be okay.  I can tell this is going to be a heart wrenching story.  I hope you believe in HEA.  I'll be sticking around to find out.  Awesome start.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!

I've been posting a new chapter every Friday on FFnet, it's up to chapter 5 there as we speak. The story will be caught up here as soon as chapters have a chance to be validated!  

<3 Shel    

 

P.S. Yes, I am totally a HEA girl!

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