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Reviewer: melaniemarks (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh my goodness!  I don't want to wait!  Jack is such an awesome kid! I swear, he's pretty and sweet and beyond intelligent. I love him a lot.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: Stef_Btvs (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hi!!! I love your fic, this chapter is very good, I love the way that Jack is with Bella, and how she is with him, they´re lovely. Jack is just too much, a great kid, I love his friends too, they are funny.

Is a great step in their life together the fact that they moved out of Charlie´s house and got their own house, that car idea is not so bad either, lol.


I just can´t wait to read the next chapter, Angela just found his family, is too much. I already read the teaser, I hope that is a nightmare and not real (pretty please)


Greetings XD



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh, I knew it was going to end there but it was still evil.  I love Bella with Jack, and I have a feeling there's going to be some rough chapters before things get better again.  Edward's not generally known in fan fic for acting with the most level of heads! lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 7

I love it! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

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Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh my gosh!!!  Please, please, please update again soon!!!  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 7

AAAGH!

You're killing me, here!  :)

I love your story.  And I love the idea for the "Jack Attacks" books.  I wish somebody would write them in real life!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

Duh duh dunnnnnnnn *cue dramatic music*

How could Jack be his age that he is now, and have been with Bella for what, 5 years and his parents not have come forward urgently looking for their son? I'm still confused, although I'm sure Edward has a good reason for why he hasn't been all over the media etc...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ooh. My heart is in my throat. I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: Teaste (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 7

I wonder how meeting the parents will go?  Will they be kind to Bella or will Edward be a jerk?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 7

omGGG!! this is super exciting!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: pugsmomma (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 7

Another amazing chapter - can't wait to meet The Cullens!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: Rie (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh heck no! There is no way I can wait til friday! Fine then...but I won't be happy.....
hahahaha Awesome story! Great chapter..as usual :D

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 7

but... i dont want jack to go. *pout*



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 7

OMG honey...that must have been scary for Bella to have a child with a broken bone...its a good thing she has experience with that kind of thing. It turned out well in the end and I am glad they came thru it ok.

Gasp! Oh my goodness...Angela found Jack's family...that is definatly a heart racing event...your got my heart pumping in anticipation...wow!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

Grrr I can't believe Renee would say such a thing...it's a good thing she was out of the picture as I have a feeling things would not have been as good. What a horrible thing to say in front of Jack. I am thankful Phil is a bit more civil. I can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

wow I live this story I am constantly checking to see for an update



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great Stroy! Finally catching up to the prologue..can't wait till the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: audio science (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 7

Yess! I can't wait to meet them all!

Although I like Bella, she just gets on my nerves sometimes. I can't wait for Edward!



Author's Response:

{ Why does Bella get on your nerves? Anything in particular? Message me back and let me know, I'm really curious! <3 }

 

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Edward's coming! Edward's coming! Oh I can't wait! I just love Jack though. He stole my heart :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: kjoyp (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

Not disappointed you skipped the wedding.  Kinda glad actually.  I'm so anxious for Jake and Bella to meet Daddy.  I guess Daddy's not going to get any warning?  Let's not give anyone a heart attack, ok?  Waiting anxiously for my most favorite of stories to update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 7

I can't wait for the next chapter. I have been waiting for this part since the preface. Great chapter, I really like how you keep the story moving. not too fast and not too slow. just right. I am in love with Jack. Such a great kid. And I love Bella's success. I can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: churro_ettes (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

nooooooooo. i hate cliff hangers i wish this chapter went on forever



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: Nikki0684 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

I have been waiting to see the story in its present tense. I can't wait to read the next chapter, I just love this story, thank you :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 7

dun dun dun.....we knew it was coming



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: Dahlia Raynes (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

I love your story. I can't wait until we get to see everyone who is missing still. I assume Edward is Jacks daddy. Plus did Angela really find them? So many questions! Please update soon, I can't wait!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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