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Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 8

I was so glad she was not able to hide the facts from Jack    it may have caused problems between her and her son down the road   any way you look at this the pain will come  she has  had him for 5 years and think of all

the joy he has given her  but flip the coin and just think of all the pain his father has been in for the 5 years he was missing  she need to get her police reports together and approach the dad so he know she had no part in taking him that she found him and that she did everthing in her power to find his real family      poor jack  what a choice to have to make between the only mother who ever loved him and a memory of a father he doesnt really remember  I want to cry    



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS today!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: JayJayHale (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 8

Okay I'm not sure if I've reviewed this (If I haven't...I'm sorry) so...

 

First of all I love that you have made Tanya the good guy. Before I wrote my fic I had never seen ANYONE make Tanya out to be a friend of Bella...now I'm begining to see more of a liking to her which makes me so happy because I don't think she's a bitch. (I don't think this is because of my fic...I'm not THAT up myself lol...but it is nice)

Victoria is a nice touch cause I think she IS a bitch hehe!

Second of all...claps for you for making me like Little Bit. It is really difficult making a child likeable in this Fandom. Most people are just into BxE and you walk a fine line of making a child so too childish or too annoying. Even though I don't nesessarily adore him...I do enjoy the relationships of him to others.

Thank you as well for not emphasizing certain character traits. Alice is hyper but not overly, Tanya is a bitch but still likeable...everything is subtle and I love it.

This is not a story I would have usually gone for but I was bored and all I can say is thank god for boredom lol!

Keep writing

JayJayHale



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS today!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 8

HOLY SHIT, I love this story, can't wait for an update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS today!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 8

Fantastic chapter. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS today!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: breaking dawn 84 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 8

LAS COSAS SE COMPLICAN 

PERO ENDWARD SIGUE CASADO CON A MUJER O ESTAN DIVORCIADOS????

ESPERO QUE LAS COSAS SALGAN BIEN BELLA NO SE MERECE SUFRIR ASI Y JAS TAMPOCO 



Author's Response:

{Hiya! I don't speak a word of Spanish, sorry! Well, I can count to ten but that's about all, lmao! Babelfish sucks sometimes, but I think you're asking about if they're still married? No, they're not. Things are definitely complicated, but it will all work out!}

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS today!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: ImaFampire (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 8

One of the most unique stories I've read. It's absolutely great. I was captivated right from the beginning. I can't wait for you to continue. Jack is a great character that you added. It's fabulous. Continue soon, please!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS today!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: arian134 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 8

i really love this chapter jacks so advanced for his age. update soon please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS today!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 8

OOOOOHHHH That Victoria! Someone needs to lynch her ass up for what she did. I don't care how high that bitch was...NO EXCUSE! :) Sorry I had to vent. And Jack...that little guy won my heart.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS today!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 8

more please :) -laurell

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS today!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 8

I have been having a shitty week! So happy you updated! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: Dahlia Raynes (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh no! I'm absolutely hooked. I can't believe that she might lose him. But at the same time she and Edward need to get into the same room soon or this isn't much of an E/B fic, right?

Great work so far. I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

True, but I didn't want to just classify it as a Bella story, because it will turn into an E&B love story. =) 

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 8

WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   So ummm yeah... not alot to say for this chapter. It pretty much left me speechless.  Except for Tanya's  but then I would have to kill you bit.... that sh*t was just hilarious!!!  Great writting, looking forward to the next update!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: Milliehud (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

Edward next??? hehehehehehhehe i can't wait till he comes into the picturee!!! it's gonna be EPIC! 



Author's Response:

{Eh, sorry! No Edward yet!}

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

love this story :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: kjoyp (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 8

Well this is no where near the 500th review but outtakes I would be interested in would be several things from E's POV like a day in his life with 3 year old Jack, His "Where's my son" discussion with Victoria, a day in his life before just before Jack returns, obviously meeting Jack 5 years later and most everything after that point.  And a Victoria POV on what the **** happened when she lost her son.  Love to hate that one.  Maybe a Jack POV for the trip with Victoria and the days he was missing up until he meets Bella and even the first few days with Bella.  That one ought to make a person cry I think.  So much wonderful material to choose from.  Happy writing!

 

My favorite line:

She looked over at Jasper.

"Do what you have to. I'm going to look into arrangements for visiting Chicago. You make sure that I don't lose my baby, Jazz."

 

:-)



Author's Response:

{Those are some very good suggestions! Thank you, I'll definitely keep them in mind, but I have to say I adore the first one and have something planned for the second one. =) }

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 8

What the fuck! How on god's green earth does a woman forget her own child! I'm with Tanya, I'm putting a hit out on Victoria's ass! Grrrr...seeth....grrr!

I am enraged that that woman as gotten away with it for so long, and to think she is carrying on as if Jack's disapearance has meant nothing. I hope Bella gets to lay into her if she ever got the chance. Whhooo maybe Tanya can help. I have a feeling she would tear Victoria apart.

I can't help but be nervous about the whole speil but I understand where Bella is coming from. If it were my child I would want to know that they are safe. I can't imagine what Edward must have been thinking all those years. I hope this will give him closure.

I will anxiously await your next update!



Author's Response:

{Grrr, don't get me started on Victoria! She only cared about herself and what it would it would me for her if she was at fault for Jack disappearing. It's all totally her fault, 100%! She's modeled partly after my uncle's ex-wife who was a real piece of work, let me tell you. My cousin came to live with us when she was 2 and to this day calls my mother Mom and knows that her's is piece of shit and she was better off with a mother and sisters who loved her in us.}

 

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: anduril1134 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh my gosh, I can't wait, I can't wait. I'm hoping when I get up in the morning the next chapter will be validated



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

Fillate .... hahahahaaa!



Author's Response:

{OME! You are the only person to comment on that so far, lol! I love that line!}

 

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: pugsmomma (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 8

Maaannnn....I can't wait for her to get to Chicago and meet Edward!  I have a feeling the reunion scene will be epic.

 

Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: CrisiP2288 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 8

I am so in love with this. I am so ready to find out what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: Cedricfan05 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 8

ahhh update soon I love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: jpcullen (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wow, Bella is a great person, taking a chance at losing her baby.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Chapter 9 is in line to be validated here, so hopefully it will be up soon! It will also be posting on FFnet and TWCS tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: Amnotkim (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 5

This story is AH-MAH-ZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: Amnotkim (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love love love this story! :)

Reviewer: melaniemarks (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh my goodness!  I don't want to wait!  Jack is such an awesome kid! I swear, he's pretty and sweet and beyond intelligent. I love him a lot.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday on FFnet & TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. I'm trying my best to get the chapter done a day sooner than I usually do to try and get this validated and up here on Fridays as well! Not going so well, though, lol!

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! It should be up here and validated in the next day or two! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now on FFnet/TWCS! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer on FFnet and the 500th reviewer here will each get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe get a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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