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Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 17

Ohana! For once I waited for your update on twilighted so I get to post a comment here and not on facebook! Great job as always!! can't wait to see what Marcus wants!

claire



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 17

I love this story can't wait for an update



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 17

ooo a proposition. Very intrigued!!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 17

omg omg omg  no no no this can not end well... depending on  your Marcus he was typically a good guy in every fic I read...and now I am scared shit post again soon



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 17

Duhn, de, duhn, duhn!  OK, Marcus is creepy, but there is no way that Victoria wants Jack back, does he just see him as his grandson and therefore rightfully his??  Ain't gonna happen.  I like how Edward and Bella are getting closer.  This story owns me.  With so many of my favorites finishing up lately I have been looking for one that really grabs me.  Congradulations!  You have won my heart.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 17

Just plain cruel leaving it like that...



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 17

uh-oh. i don't know about this. marcus in most stories i have read is good... but i don't know about this  one. please update soon!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 17

Great chapter. Glad Emmett and Bella talked and sorted through their problems. Loved the girl bonding time, what is Marcus going to propose to Bella? Poor Edward, so cute. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 17

whoa! Marcus obviously recognised Bella eventually, to be able to track her down.
Loved all the fun the girls had at Bella's expense, I wonder how much hazing Edward got from the guys? Im guessing it wouldve been quieter since they had Jack with them :)
Oh and Bella's stand-of with Emmett was great!

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: BELLAxMOMENT (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 17

I read your story on FanFic because it come up a day before here, and I seriously LOVE your story! I always look forward for Thursday nights to read it! I wonder what Marcus wanted and how he knew Bella was Bella...



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 17

Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!

I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 17

Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!

I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 17

Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!

I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 17

Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!

I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 17

Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!

I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 17

Woaw! What is going on here? Wonder what Marcus has in mind? And Jake? Methinks he is going to rock the boat at some point!

I am loving this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)

Reviewer: RenesmeeColette (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 17

oh crap how can you just stop it like that.... That is so unfair! You write an amazing story and I can't wait for the next chapter to be put up so please please please do it soon.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 17

Oooies, that can't be good. Hope Bella tells him to stick it! I always get excited when seeing an update for this in my inbox :)



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: AnnaWinters (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 17

Cliffies i love them Xd

Makes me wa,t a update real soon, love your story



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 17

Glad Emmett and Bella hashed out their shit! And oh shit to the end of this chapter!

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: Marliarna (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 17

In the immortal words of Sam Beckett:  Oh, boy.

Cue angst in three.... two... one....

I devoutly hope that there are grounds for putting Victoria in jail for a nice long time.  Abandonment? Filing a false police report?  Betting Marcus is going to try to buy Bella's absence and/or silence.  Hope she tell him where to go and how to get there.

 



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: lilgreen (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

You truly don't have to give birth to be a mom.

Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 17

Uh oh. This cannot be good.

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: GIJoesWife (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 17

Oh this is going to be a bad situation I think. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I love this, PMS



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I hope to have this chapter into the queue by Thursday night, so after that is up to how fast the chapter gets approved! 

<3 Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: Erilu77 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Prologue

The award you have.... it made me curious... why 'canon' if it's AU and AU-Human at that.... ?? *scratches head*  

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