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Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 05:34 PM · On: A Few Simple Words
Wow, Victoria is one crazy ass biatch. She is also a sick, sick vampire. I wonder what she is going to have Theresa do.
I think Alice is lying to Bella as usual. Isn't it safer to keep her up to date so she doesn't go do stupid things than have her not know?
Thanks for the chapter, I enjoyed it. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: vicki! Hell yea's crazy!!! It is safer to keep Bella up to date...but Alice feels that since Bella already thinks she is a nuisance to the Cullens, knowing about Victoria will only increase Bella's opinon. So basically Alice isn't sure whether or not to tell Bella...but we will see all that in the next chapter;)
Thanks!!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 04:34 PM · On: A Few Simple Words
Vicky is going to be a pain in the backside isn't she? Silly question I know...
Bella's going to have a hard time believing that nothing is going on now that Victoria's name has come up.
My biggest thought is on Jacob... is he the same one from Forks, because if he is, why doesn't Bella recognize him & if he isn't, he has the same name...
Author's Response: of course she will be;)
I mentioned this back in an author's note earlier, but it's might have been easy to miss...but I decided to make my Jacob a completely different Jacob. I wanted to use Jacob without people having the prejudice agaisnt him ya know? So many people hate Jacob and I really like him, and I wanted ppl to like my Jacob. So I just made him into a new character...does that make sense? If you want to ask me about it anymore, just come on by the forum and I'll be happy to answer!!! Thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: xoBEDWARDox (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 03:48 PM · On: A Few Simple Words
AHHHHHHH PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Author's Response: WHOA!!! hehe don't worry, i won't ever drop this story! THANKS!!
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 12:27 PM · On: A Few Simple Words
I wonder what Theresa's gift is. Victoria better not get to Bella!!! Edward WILL save her. Great chapter update again soon
Author's Response: You'll get to see Theresa's gift--don't worry! i love the bold and all caps!! lol thanks for always reviewing!!
Reviewer: Chelsea Volturi (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 12:20 PM · On: A Few Simple Words
Ahhh, Victoria... I don't know why I like her so much in this story, she's the evil one! But I think your handling Evil POV pretty good (not that I enjoy Vicky killing people, I'm not that sadistic...)
I wonder what Edward does at the moment, no matter what he is always way to slow when it comes to realizing that Bella loves him too.
Author's Response: Hahaha thanks!!!! I thought I would hate writing VPOV but I kinda love it...however it takes forever because she drains my soul dry lol
Edward is wallowing in his own misery at the moment and Rosalie is looking for him;)
thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 12:15 PM · On: A Few Simple Words
Squeal! Now she'll have 101 more question! Now Bella will know somethings up! I so can't wait to see it work itself out!!!! Post again soon I love this story! definitly the change up I needed!!!
Author's Response: hahahaha thanks!!! I'm glad it was the change up you needed!!!!
Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 12:03 PM · On: A Few Simple Words
ermm....wow!
loved it
whens the next chapter its getting exciting lol
spidermonkey..x
Author's Response: the next chapter will be up as soon as I can get ready! thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 11:41 AM · On: A Few Simple Words
wow great story and :( a cliffhanger bummer hurry with next:)
Author's Response: thanks! I will try!
Reviewer: yellowipod (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Just A Plain Blue Sweater
"All the country songs I've heard about drinking to forget a love lost rushed to my mind and grinning at this new found discovery I pointed at the tequila."
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!
Author's Response: hahaha that's my favorite line too!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 10:21 AM · On: A Few Simple Words
Amazing!!!
I'm so evil...it's awesome!
It was graphic, but it was good - it was very appropriate (or however that's spelled).
Good job!! ^_^
Author's Response: thanks kitkat!!! *hugs* (you have an awesome power)
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 10:14 AM · On: A Few Simple Words
I wonder who Theresa is...great chapter!
Author's Response: hahahah thanks!
Reviewer: Solanarose (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Alice
Please hurry and update and maybe you can help me on a story I am working on if you are interested. I also love how you portray this Jacob he is amazing I hope you have Alice call the rest of the family and tell them what she has learned especially Edward
Author's Response: updated! :)
And yes I'd love to help! I think my email is listed on here so just shoot me an email!
I am so glad you like Jacob! You have no idea how happy I am when ppl tell me that:)
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Alice
I actually haven't read this take on the whole Edward/Bella seperation. You have really done a great job with this. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much:) :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Alice
AAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
You evil wee pixie you!!!! That has to be your eviliest cliffie yet! I have been dying all week to get the chance to read this chapter, but midterms came first :( and you go an do this to me? why oh why oh why??!! That's why you sent a truckful of hankies isn't it? *sob*
K, take your snotty hankies back! K now that I"m done with the tantrum :)
Welcome back Alice!!!! I loved the whole "It's Alice" line...I guess that just sums it all up. It doesn't matter that she left Forks to "protect" them, just that Alice found her. Awwww that was actually very sweet of you :)
Liked the protectiveness of Jake, but also glad you clarified the whole friend thing.
I'm worried, can Alice handle Victoria by herself? Will someone come to help her? Will Jake get stuck in the middle?
Can't wait for more, please update soon!!!
Author's Response: oh Lusty :) I'm sorry about the cliffie!!!!! I'll send you the next bit I promise! and no, that truckful of hankies was supposed to last you for a least a few chapters!!!! I guess I'll just have to send you another one....lol
'It's Alice'...i thought that would sum her up;) I'm glad you like protective Jacob!
You're worried??? hahaha by my story??? my dstory is full of happy butterflys though!!!
you should worry.
thanks SO much for reviewing Lusty!
Reviewer: pastel (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Alice
Very nice storyline--I like how things are switched so that Bella was the one who left Edward, heh.
I'll have to say that I'm very pleased with Alice being in this chapter to protect Bella.
I like the story so far, and I'm eager for more. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: thank you very much! Let's just hope she's able to protect her! Thanks again!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Alice
Here's my review in one word:
OMG
Yay for Alice!
Alright I am officially caught up and waiting patiently for the next chapter ^_^ *hugs*
Author's Response: *hugs* Love you!!!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:01 PM · On: My Best Friend
So I started reading and I was like, why does this chapter seem so familar....why do I feel like I've read it before....
Silly me...'cause I have ^_^ 'Course I skimmed through it to make sure that I didn't miss anything hehe!
Author's Response: hahaha
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Missed Calls
again i say...stupid edward.
On to the next! I love catching up!
Author's Response: thanks!!!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Only In My Dreams
Lovely chapter! On to the next one...
stupid edward.
Author's Response: i know! hehehe
Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Alice
ooohhh!! very exciting...that is quite a cliffhanger. I was surprised that Jacob left so easily...I am hoping that Victoria doesn't end up taking him down once she realizes Bella has a protector with her.
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!!!
Reviewer: amgglekim (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Alice
that really was a cliffhanger... a deliciously juicy one tho... I can't wait for Victoria's suprise when she realizes that Alice is there...and thank heaven for Alice not listening to Carlisle either...
I really am in love with this story so far...
Author's Response: I've really enjoyed all your reviews and thank you SO much for taking the time to write them!! They mean so much to me!
Reviewer: amgglekim (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:48 PM · On: My Best Friend
I so hear Alice right now!!!
And I Adore that song... and I'm not so sad and maybe i can sleep. You've enchanted me girl... enchanted me.
Author's Response: thank you
signed: enchantress
Reviewer: amgglekim (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Missed Calls
Okay... so I lied.
I couldn't sleep, just laid there thinking about this story, and damn it Edward!!!
So I'm even more uptight now and I'm probably off to read more.
Author's Response: hahaha that makes me so happy and incredibly honored that I kept you awake!!! :)
Reviewer: amgglekim (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Only In My Dreams
NO, I'm not going to come play on the forum... at least not right now... I'm actually gonna go crash and finish tomorrow
I must admit tho, I love this so far..
Author's Response: i'm glad you are loving it!
Reviewer: amgglekim (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:35 PM · On: The Love of Her Life
so not even saying a word. You KNOW what kind of cliffie that was and well.. I dn't have to wait.
so there... awesome chappie btw
Author's Response: haha!!!
thanks!!!
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