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Reviewer: shasta (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Prologue

Love this story. Please keep writing.. even if it gets more painful!



Author's Response:

oh good, the painfullness doesn't turn you off! good good!!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Playing Sinatra

Please don't make it so that Edward sees her going out with Jacob and jumps to the conclusion that she has moved on and he should leave her.



Author's Response:

thanks for taking time to review!!

Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Playing Sinatra

Oooh yay! Edward's on his way! Whoo-hoo!



Author's Response:

Yay!!! Edward is coming!!!

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Playing Sinatra

You've got me hanging off my chair! I can't wait to read more! This story is unique in that for the first time I've read that it was Bella who left Edward for her love of him. And it's hypnotic. I absolutely cannot wait to read more. And please, oh please, keep up the EPOV. You write him beautifully.

Author's Response:

hypnotic?  WOW...i think that is the best comment I've ever gotten!  thank you SO MUCH for this wonderful review!!!!  You have made me all warm and fuzzy inside!!  *giggles wildly*

one of the reason's I chose to write this fic was because I han't seen one of her leaving him either...and i thought that scenario would be fun to write. 

Their will be more EPOV coming up...I promise! 

again...thank you so much!!!!

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Prologue

Interesting premise.  I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this!



Author's Response:

thanks!!!!

Reviewer: TheEdwardEmmett (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Playing Sinatra

Yeah, umm...I think Jenna makes a great friend!!! But, if Edward sees Jake with Bella going to a movie and leaves I will be really unhappy. Don't make me sad....please!



Author's Response:

Jenna?  What makes you say that?  hehehehe

ummm....everyone is asking me not to make them unhappy....

thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Playing Sinatra

That was great! I hope Jacob doesn't come between them. That would make me very unhappy. ;)



Author's Response:

thank you so much for the review!!!! 

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Playing Sinatra

I am hoping that the together is much sooner than later. I am sure you have heard this before....I just hate it when they are apart. Yeah I know...where is the story without the action of angst. But it doesnt make it any easier. Plus I just hope that he makes it in time and doenst end up hurt. Hurry back I cant wait for more. :D



Author's Response:

aww honey, i understand!  I hate reading fics where Edward and Bella are seperated....which is weird because I apparently LOVE writing them seperated! I don't like seeing Edward hurt either... thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Prologue

Good opening.



Author's Response:

thanks!!!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Playing Sinatra

Hmm, I think I've heard of this Jenna person actually, but I quite like her! I've been reading this for ages honey, but I'm an idiot, and only matched the names up now. Call me stupid.

Author's Response:

you caught me in my sneaky Jenna ways!!!  *blushes*  and i've done that too!  reading someone's story and being friends with them and not putting the two together! it happens more than i care to admit;)  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Playing Sinatra

I hope Edward doesn't panic if he sees Bella and Jacob together!  I love how they are both listening to the same song.  Very sweet.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review!  the song choice was really really spur of the moment.  I was writing Edward's POV and listening to it and it was like this 'ah!' moment!  Even then I hadn't written anything about Bella listening to the radio....then when i was rereading it the song came on again and is was like a 'duh!' moment. it was one of my favorite writing experiences

Reviewer: TheEdwardEmmett (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Prologue

I can't belive you stole Bella from Edward....makes me sad.

Your doing a great job, keep it up, update faster!

What is with the Massive cliffhanger!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing!!!  i'm sorry your sad...

 

i really like cliffhangers.   i love reading them, even though i get mad...i still love them

Reviewer: paigecullen (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 01:20 AM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

I really like it so far can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 08:32 AM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

Loving this story!! Can't wait for an update!

Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!!! Happy New Year to you too!!!!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 07:32 AM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

I just found your story and I read it through.  It's very good and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you like it!!  I;m working on the next chapter right now :)

 

1986?  birth year?  that's mine too ;)

Reviewer: MistyAnn (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:57 PM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

Great Story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You Twilighed ladies are so talented.



Author's Response:

thanks hun!!!!!  I'm working on the next chapter at this very moment :)  Thank you for the review!!!!!!

Reviewer: ashtong21 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 03:43 PM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

ooo loved it!  i hope its edward on the phone! update soon!



Author's Response:

hmm...you will have to wait and see :)

thank you so much for the review!!!

Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 05:13 PM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

ack! Pixie, you're killing me!!

Good update, I LOVE how evil Victoria sounded. You did a wonderful job making me scared of her! See ya in the forums!



Author's Response:

awwww thank you for reviewing katikittie!  I'm glad you LOVE (all caps make me smile) my evil Victoria...even though she scares you Ttyl ;)

Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 12:20 PM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

Great update...you write the characters in the circumstances you've chosen quite well...I love that Bella is the one doing the choosing in your story...she's stronger somehow, more selfless...and you write sick and twisted Victoria, too well...can't wait to see where you take us in the new year...



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day;)  Thank you so much...it was just the boost I needed!  I'm glad Victoria is working for you because she's the hardest for me to write...when it takes me awhile to update it pretty much is all Victoria's fault-she's exhausting!  Again, thank you SO much for the wonderful review!

Reviewer: Kiri_sora (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 10:10 AM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

Please put in a new chapter soon, I really like this story



Author's Response:

Working on it right now!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 07:12 AM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

Boy Victoria is one ruthless wench! I cant wait to see something horrible happen to her!



Author's Response:

I know right?!?!  Someone needs to destroy her and fast! ;)  I guess that means I should get to writing? Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 10:31 PM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

no you should not have stopped there. more please and real soon.



Author's Response:

sorry!!!  I'm working on the next chapter right now!  Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 09:34 PM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

My favorite scene was in your last chapter, where Edward stared into nothing in his room, grasping Bella's shirt. That kind of longing is what I love about your story. And I know that it's going to get better. But please post more asap! It feels like an eternity since last time! I love it that much!

Author's Response:

thank you so much! I enjoy that scene as well.  And don't worry there will be plenty of longing coming up;)  And I will def. try to have the next chapter up sooner...I ran into some unforseen RL obstacles which delayed me and then of course Christmas :)  Thank you SO much for reviewing!  Reviews def. make me write faster;)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 08:21 PM · On: One Tiny Phone Call

you gonna update again soon right?

and when I say soon, I mean like, right now.

 



Author's Response:

hahaha believe me I will do my  best :)  Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kat55 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 12:04 PM · On: Help With The Hangover

loved the story...cant wait for more :D



Author's Response:

thank you!!! You won't have to wait too long!

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