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Reviewer: T Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 05:38 PM · On: To Protect
Yes, I'm proud you didn't end with a ciffy! It helps with waiting for the next chapter. I hope that chapter is soon though!
Reviewer: brittanyrayne (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 02:14 AM · On: To Protect
please please please tell me you are gonna finish the story? i love it, i gotta have more!! it's amazing, i hope you pick it back up soon, :)
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 12:34 PM · On: To Protect
don't stop!! i want MORE!!
Reviewer: twilightedgurl22 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:40 PM · On: To Protect
update soon please. I love this story, i just found it and i'm so glad that i did!
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 03:51 PM · On: To Protect
very good update soon just make sure edward and bella end up back together. i cant help it. any other union between the two is just.... well wrong.
Reviewer: Solanarose (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:09 PM · On: To Protect
I am so sad that you haven't updated this story in so long because I love it so much I really wish you would continue it PLEASE
Reviewer: jewelsbyers (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 03:17 AM · On: The Love of Her Life
I love James and Victoria! Forgive me for saying so, but I do!
The relationship between James and Victoria seems more real in your story than it did in SM's. Not that I don't love SM and her Twilight world, but I'm a James and Victoria addict! Looking forward to more of Victoria's POVs and sexy flashbacks!
jewelsbyers
Reviewer: Solanarose (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 11:12 PM · On: To Protect
I am really sad that you haven't updated this in forever I really wish you would it is a beautiful story please continue soon
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:54 PM · On: To Protect
hey, i like your story. i would so love for alice to have a few moments of unfocused attention, so victoria can steel and change bella. it can't be another version of eclipse.then bella can rip her head off as a new born, then... well, think of it ;) xx
Reviewer: hey-you (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Prologue
are you still writing? this is so great and i'm so curious!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:25 AM · On: To Protect
Alice continued to stare at Jacob like he was a shiny new toy while he continued to stare at her as if she was an atomic bomb.
THAT is a great visual.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Prologue
This seems oddly IC and OOC at the same time. I like it.
Reviewer: gemgem (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:23 PM · On: To Protect
loving the story so far cant wait for the rest
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:49 PM · On: To Protect
Looking forward to the rest! awesome!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:19 PM · On: One Tiny Phone Call
Alice, right?
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Just A Plain Blue Sweater
Oh no...sounds like trouble!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Our Meadow
I haven't seen a story quite like this and I am enjoying your story very much so far! I love how you flipped it! Of course Edward would accept this knowledge and I love how Alice knows that Bella is lying and it determined to get to the bottom of it! Awesome start!
Reviewer: Cold Fire (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:15 PM · On: To Protect
Please . . . your story makes me cry so much! It just breaks my heart to know Edward is out there suffering and Jacob is here trying to make a move on Bella. Please say Edward gets the balls to come back soon and tell Jacob to back the fuck off!
Reviewer: jamewatta (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:17 AM · On: To Protect
I'm loving your story, will you be writing another chapter anytime soon???
Thanks
Jamie
Author's Response: thank you!! I am working on the next chapter right now! I just finished up finals so I finaly have a chance to work on it!
Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:43 PM · On: To Protect
What happend to Edward?? Please update soon. :)
Author's Response: We'll see Edward in the next chapter!! I'm in the midst of college finals so it's going to be a little while before i can update!
Reviewer: TwilightLoBe (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 12:24 AM · On: To Protect
When will you add the next chapter? it's been so long since you last added! I love this story! Please add one soon!
Author's Response: awww thank you soo much!!! I'm sorry it's been such a long wait...its the end of the semester for me and I'm about to head into finals :S Once finals are finished (May 5) I'll FINALLY have time to sit down and write again. Believe me, it's killing me too! Thank you for showing that you still love my story!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:17 AM · On: To Protect
Great writing as Bella tried to keep the peace between Alice and Jacob. Please update soon.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: twinewlipsedawn (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:19 PM · On: So Quiet, So Eerie
Wow...Victoria. Either Alice will find out and tell Edward, or Jacob will help...or BOTH!
Author's Response: we'll see
Reviewer: twinewlipsedawn (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Just A Plain Blue Sweater
It kills me how Jacob always has to be there! I'm not trying to be rude, but its almost like if Bella cant have Edward, she has to at least try to have Jacob. It bugs me.
Author's Response: Im sorry it bugs you. I actually didn't intend for Jacob to be in this story at all...but he somehow managed to wiggle himself in. Besides, would you want to read chapter after chapter of Bella laying in bed crying? lol
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