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Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 01:42 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
H-O-T! That was some neck mark to try to hide with make-up the next day Kristen! LOL! Maybe a high-necked shirt if necessary! Rob's got skills ---oh yes! Wooooo-hooo! Oh, to be in Kristen's place, that lucky girl!
Author's Response: :) It was awfully fun to write them cutting lose in this story.
Kristen is indeed a lucky woman. And she knows it. Rob is a lucky man. And he knows it. It's so very fantastic to see two fortunate and humble people find love. :)
Thank you for reading and leaving comments. :)
<3 from the shrew
Reviewer: mimozka (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 07:40 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
Reviewer: Chanee32 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 04:20 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
Great read!
Reviewer: rjcarreno (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 08:33 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
Two words for this story....Smokin' HOT!!!
This is how I picture Rob and Kristen, fun, playful, and sexy.
This story is how I like to imagin their 'after party' was really like after the MTV Movie Awards. Hee hee!! ;)
One of my favorite lines was one of Kristen's...“Whatever floats your boat, Mr. Global Superstar."
Love your stories.
Looking forward to more of your stories, whether it's a long story or a one-shot. Hmmm, maybe a one-shot that takes place during the "Eclipse" premiere after-pary? ;)
Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 08:42 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
wow what a night lol very hot...
jules
Reviewer: LittleLionLady (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 07:26 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
phwoar.
'nuff said. :)
Author's Response: May I be really silly and ask what "phwoar" is? I am not familiar with it. I hope it's a good thing.
Even if it isn't, I thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: GoEdwardGo (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 07:31 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
Oooohhh, I just love me some Growly Rob! It was hot and funny and hot and just pitch perfect. I especially enjoyed the dialogue. It so effortlessly demonstrated that in this world, their relationship was not new, that it was filled with love & trust. “His white t-shirt was gonna get torn if he didn't lose it, pronto.” I think two people have to be truly trusting and comfortable with one another to enjoy humor in the bedroom. “Whatever floats your boat, Mr. Global Superstar.” The way that they teased each other, his reaction to her shoes & thong, her reaction to his “torture” … “Ready?” he panted with a wide grin. “Duh!” I giggled.His giggle joined mine as his body joined mine.” **sigh** perfection! I love your work - thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Oh thank you for the detailed review! It warms my shipper heart. :) You hit it exactly on the head what I was trying to convey with this piece. And I TOTALLY agree with you -- humor in the bedroom is an ideal. It's so intimate and trusting, and it's one of my favorite tools to show just how close, how in love, how powerful their love is. THANK YOU for understanding! Your feedback is SO HELPFUL, and the fact that you liked it too was just the icing on my Robsten cake. I absolutely adore being able to share these characters with fellow Robsten fans. THANK YOU for letting me! Where else can we squee simply over the idea of two people so happy and in love? I cherish that we can do that here.
<3 <3 <3 from the shrew
Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 07:41 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
I love it, I read this at about 2 in the morning but couldn´t make my brain think clearly enough to write a review, so here I am bright and early writing.
I was so excited to see something new from you since I hadn´t seen any updates on your stories, specially Wake up call since that´s my favorite.
I remember the whole bit about the creative juice flowing and all, so I´ll try not to wine about it.
Thanks for sharing, it was great, I love how you write them, I know I´ve said this before, but I think you capture there personality and there relationship really well.
Lots of love
Melissa
Author's Response: Hi Melissa!
Thanks for sticking with me. Yeah, there is a story or two behind the no posting (especially WUC). HA! Get it? Stories behind NOT posting? LOL. Forgive me, it's after 3 a.m. here, and I am feeling pun silly stupid.
I am glad that these characters feel "real" to you. I hope that they have as much fun as their characters in RPF. Here's hoping.
And FYI, the final chapter of WUC is being proofed. It could be up as early as Friday, if there is no need for extensive edits. Thank you for your support of that fic. It's like my secret Robsten fic. Thank you for going with me on that journey, and this one too! Here's hoping we have many more.
<3 from the shrew
Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 01:38 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
MMM naughty but very nice. I loved it. Well done. hugs Clare x
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 01:38 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
Bloody loved it !
Author's Response: Cool! I loved writing it, and I am happy to share it with you. Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: cheekybritgirl (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:04 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
Love this Ms. Shrew! Very hot and fun! I love how you keep them horny AND playful...lots of humor between them which is ultra sexy to me! Excellent descriptive writing...pretty much made me feel I was a voyeur! Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you liked the humor and the heat. :)
Reviewer: llynn20 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:00 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
First off... "Hello pants, meet ankles. The unders will join you shortly." = Awesome.
Gotta agree with this: "It was the perfect tease for him to see me put them on before the show." Mr. llynn20 agrees too. :)
“I have a Kristen fetish. Fucking deal with it, woman.” Don't we all Rob, don't we all.
"laved" is an underused word. well done beebs.
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful and specific review. YOU know how important those are to helping improve the creative process. I really appreciate it so much.
I loved those lines. They seriously cracked me up A LOT while writing this. I am glad that you found it funny too. These two need more levity. They work so hard. Even if it's only fanfiction, I love to think of them this way. Happy, playful, hot, loving.
*sigh* I am all squidgy happy for them now.
<3 <3 <3 from the shrew
Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 02:04 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
This was hot and oh so funny. I so see Rob and Kristen doing that and acting like this. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I imagine that they are this playful with each other. Thank you so much for reading. :)
Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 08:05 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
Haha!! Loved it!!
Author's Response: Very cool. Thank you for reading! :)
Reviewer: jerseyhalliwell (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 01:35 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
*fans herself*
dude, this was INCREDIBLE!
Author's Response: *hands you a glass of ice water*
THEY are incredible. I adore them. Thanks so much for reading. :)
Reviewer: hollywood51496 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 12:54 AM · On: The Prize - one shot
Loved it SUPER sexy!!!!!!!!!:)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. :) I love to imagine them as super sexy. Hell, they almost break the internet and twitter anytime we see them together. LOL.
Reviewer: Cynthia35 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 10:16 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
Talking about aftercare...
Thanks you H, you always put the most lovely, sweet and Hot blazing images of them on my mind!
Shrew= Queen of all Robsten things!
Kisses from Buenos Aires.
Author's Response: Giant Hugs from America, Lovely!
You are so kind to me. Thank you for continuing to read these stories. It warms my heart to share the happy with my fellow Robsten fans. Thanks for letting me squee with you over our happy couple! :D
xoxoxo
<3 from the shrew.
Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:42 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
love it!
Author's Response: YAY! Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: fidgit (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:40 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
I always love your depiction of R& K.... it fits what I think they would be like in real life. Thanks for sharing with us.... :)
Author's Response: You are very welcome! Thank YOU for letting me share these characters with you. I love to squee and think of them happy like this. :)
Reviewer: SunnySRZ1 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:26 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
lovely, banter sounds just like I would imagine lol
Author's Response: Thank you. I do try to make it sound "realistic". Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:19 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
What can I say? You do what you do so well. I get a little squee when I see that you have posted something! This was so good!
Author's Response: Thank you, bb. Thank you so much for telling me this. Thank you for continuing to read my little bits about these two. <3 <3 <3
Reviewer: livedays (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 05:02 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
more more more
Author's Response: But it's a one shot. I have others, and I am always writing more stories, so I can fulfill your request that way. Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 04:34 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
wow that was great
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 04:07 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
Holy shit, that was so f*ckHOT!! I imagine them doing things like this too. It must be agony to have to pretend and not touch....I have no idea how they keep their hands off each other. Thanks for this, looks like a fun story.
Author's Response: I think they have a pretty good system down now, but I think it's still a struggle. I think they should be free to touch whenever they want and fuck all to anyone telling them not to. As long as they are happy, that's all I care about. Thanks for reading. I love to imagine that they are happy like this. :)
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 03:59 PM · On: The Prize - one shot
guh......... I so miss your writing about our boy and girl, lovely, lovely lovely.......
Author's Response: NGL, I got all nervous posting something new. I have a backlog of one shots that are just sitting, waiting until I get the courage to actually post.
Thank you for continuing to read, even though I post so infrequently. I love to share happy versions of these lovely characters with fellow fans. :)
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