Wow, what an awesome chapter, the whole thing was really well thought out ie to bringing in Rose & Emmett to playing for Edward all the songs with meaning. I am really looking forward to the next chapter :0)

Author's Response:

Hey Belled,

Thanks for the kind words.

Thanks so much, I do put a lot of thought into everything even right down to the music.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hey sherylb,

thanks for the kind words and amazing star rating.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

WOW!!! I loved this chapter...loved Bella finally figuring her shit out, loved Rosie & how you wrote her so well, love the song choices, just loved it all! so I hope to God they communicate with each other & work together to move forward. I know it will be hard but admitting it is huge for Bella, so I am optomistic :) looking forward to next chapter!  ~Tracey xoxox

Author's Response:

Hey Tracey,

Thanks for the amazing star rating.

WOW? really? YAY!

I'm SO happy you love this chapter.

They WILL communicate.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

xoxoxo

I am raving!!!!! Epiphany could not describe this chapter any better!!!! I am glad that Bella has pulled her head out of her ass!!!! I know Edward has issues too but the addiction seems to rule their relationship. I hope her friends can come to terms with the decisions she is making & support her instead of leaving her. Cannot wait for your next update!!!! 

Much love,

Renee`

Author's Response:

Hi Renee,

Thanks for the amazing star rating.

OMG really? WOW thanks for the compliment. I hope it stays out of her ass. they do and they'll have to deal with it head on. you may be disappointed in her girls.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

love,

~E

Great chapter-happy Bella finally is able to see her friends for what they are-enablers, now she can truly get some help.

Ecxcited to see Rose take an active, loving part in helping. Can't wait til next chap!!!! Update soon.

Author's Response:

Hey kkmomo3,

Thanks, yup ...now she just has to deal with them.

The next chapter will be delayed it's not ready yet.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

 

That's was one of the cutest heartfelt momen of any book or story that I have every read in my life. I cannot wait to read the next chapter to see where they go from here

Author's Response:

Hey smorr,

 thanks for the amazing stars.

AWWWWW OMG thanks that is the greatest compliment ever! It'll be a while for the next chapter, it's really long and I'm not  ready to "publish" it yet.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

Things are going better between those two it seems. But this time it seems more genuine and not sudden, or forced. Before, when they made up the first time and Bella decided to get her act straight, it was inevitable that she was just going to relapse and all of us readers were thinking it was just a matter of time for it to come. It was too fast, and like I said before, too forced. This chapter really showed that they had to go through a struggle, Bella had to fall pretty hard, and their relationship had to be put on a strain in order for it all to work out. I'm not saying that they might not have problems in future chapters, but Bella is definitly changing the right way. She's realizing her mistakes and changing for herself. In earlier chapters, I could feel that she wanted to change but was still unsure about everthing because it was all too sudden and drastic. I like that Bella is straightining up her priorities. She stopped blaming everyone else and finally taking responsibility for her actions and behavior.

Her pulling a Lady Antebellum when she got drunk last chapter also had a more significant effect than I would have imagined.  

She's actually humiliated by it.  

I'm sure if it were any other guy than it wouldn't matter that much. But one thing I noticed about Bella in this story, and I enjoy by the way, is that she may claim she doesn't care (even in the begining) yet she is ashamed of herself when it comes to Edward. She doesn't want Edward to see her the way other men do. So in all, you can't say that Bella would ever intentionally hurt Edward. I sometimes wonder if Bella almost sometime wants to be that innocent girl she used to be. But that's just a thought.  

I'm very pleased that you had her explain everthing that happened that night to Rose. Rose got to see that it wasn't as bad as Edward made it seem, but she also understood that it hit his insecurities. Rose put it into percpective perfectly. 

I will be awaiting the next chapter ever so patiently. Although, I am VERY excited to see what's going to happen next. This story is great!

(Oh and sorry for making this review too long. This story is pretty deep and deals with some serious situations. Not like the usually teenage angst..)

Author's Response:

Hey Lauren,

 thanks for the amazing star rating the awesome review, I'll try my best to comment on everything.

1) I think things will be better for them too now, it'll open a new chapter.

2) That was the point, they rushed it and it didn't work, now this time hopefully they can correct that mistake and a few others.

3) She is changing in the right way, but as you said it WILL NOT be all sunshine and roses.

4) exactly she's seeing herself more clearly.

5) I was, it a moment of levity but it packed a punch. She was, she doesn't want to be that girl with Edward. She doesn't want to be her old self but not Slutella either.

6) Exactly, he saved himself for decades before she was in the picture, he's from another time, and she cares what he thinks of her.

7)no she sets out to hurt him emotionally, it's something they have to work on.

8)she doesn't want to be the old Bella, she wants to be confident and sexy not the hussy or whore he kind of saw her as.

9) Rose wanted to help her from the beginning but was  testing her.

10) The next chapter will be a while off it's longer than this one, and i'm not happy with it yet...so there will be a delay. I'm never 100% I always think it can be better but this one is missing something right now...not sure what.

Thanks so much, I loved the long review, I hope you don't mind my long reply.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

Oh I loved it! That had to be so hard. I really liked that although Rose did give her a hard time she wasn't just a bitch and helped. I really like how you portrayed Rose. I think it was important also to point out that different people deal with things differently, like her dealing with him through song. Very nice.

Author's Response:

Hey JShay,

Thanks so much. I twas so hard to write...but I loved it. Rose can relate to this Bella.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

loving your story....hope it does not take too long for next chapter

Author's Response:

Hey claireava,

 thanks so much. it will be a little longer because it is a LONG chapter and I'm not happy with it yet.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

This story gets better and better!!!!  I love it and cannot wait to see what happens next. Please hurry and update!!!!! 

Author's Response:

Hey teamedward,

 WOW thank you and thanks for the amazing stars.

The update might be slow it's a LONG chapter, and I'm not happy with it yet...it needs more work.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

 

Aww it was sweet. I need to look up all the songs!

Author's Response:

Hey Beth,

 Thanks for the kind words and awesome star rating.

I hope you like them when you look them up.

Here is the teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently, Rose thought, we might need some time alone and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo, and within minutes, we were at the hotel. The entire ride, I held her hand. All the way up to the room, she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

 

I loved this chapter!

I am so glad that they are on the right track again.

I think it's a good thing that Bella realized what went wrong and what is wrong in her life. Hopefully now she can get rid of everything bad in her life so she won't use again.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Hey Bella,

Thanks for the amazing star rating.

Yeah, I think they might make it this time.

Hopefully, your right.

Here is the UN-BETA’ED teaser and it is subject to change.

This is Edward’s POV, I hope you enjoy it.

 

“Bella told me that Rose and Emmett were going to go home with the rest of the family. This meant that she and I were going to the hotel they had been in this afternoon. She told me there were two rooms, and I hoped we would only be using one. Bella explained that Rose booked the hotel because she didn’t want to go into Bella’s house or deal with her friends. Apparently Rose thought, we might need some time alone, and had booked both rooms for the night.

 

I have to think of a great gift to get Rose and Emmett, I thought gratefully.

 

I led Bella out to the Volvo and within minutes we were at the hotel. The entire ride I held her hand. All the way up to the room she never let go of mine. We didn’t speak, but the electric current I always felt when I was with her was stronger than ever. I could almost feel it crackling and sizzling around us.

 

“Do you want me to go into the other room?” I asked, praying she would say no, when we arrived at the elevator.

 

“No, I want you with me,” she replied.”

 

Thank you for continuing to read this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E