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Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Showtime

:)



Author's Response:

Dear Tears,

I can't believe you really rated every chapter...amazing.

Thanks,

~E

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Rough Day

:)



Author's Response:

Hello Tears,

WOW 5 stars again...you humble me.

Peace and love,

~E

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:16 AM · On: Alice

:)

Author's Response:

Hi Tears,

Thanks so much for taking the time to go back and rate my chapters...it means a lot to me.

See ya soon ;)

~E

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

Hey Tears,

Thanks so much for taking the time to go back and rate my chapters...it means a lot to me.

ttys

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Intervention

I was just as it should have been.  I have watched a lot of interventions and participate in a few and it was done exactly the way it would have been in RL. 

I'm interested to see how they deal with now being able to be around each other....E and B have always been enabliers for each others bad behaviour...can't wait to see how you have that play out.

Also, I have been rotten and not reviewed.  Its just hard to do on this site, so I'm going back and at least rating each and every chapter...pentence:)



Author's Response:

Hey tears,

 OMG another amazing review and star rating your the best.

WOW really? Thanks, I've only seen them on TV glad i did it well.

It should be interesting...I'm not writing it yet...but it should be interesting.

You are a doll, thanks for the ratings.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:11 AM · On: Epiphany

It was perfect!  The songs....perfect....his reaction....perfect.  I swear I had chills as I read the last sentence:)



Author's Response:

Hey Tears,

 Thank so much for the kind review. I love that you appreciate the songs. WOW that's amazing.

Also, thanks for the amazing rating.

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: ehayter (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 06:43 AM · On: Intervention

Another brilliant chapter, I think Emmetts speach was the best closely followed by Edwards (maybe abit biased there though).  So good to see Rose being the 'good guy' for a change and the voice of reason.

Can not wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Hey ehayter,

Thanks for the kind review and amazing star rating.

Emmett, really? I love his two, your the only one who gave him a first place rating. I like this Rose too, I didn't plan on it but she became a completely different character, that I love.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

 

Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 07:29 PM · On: Intervention

Bella reacted exactly as I thought she would, but I am glad that she gave in towards the end about going to Rehab. Edward is such a wonderful boyfriend, and he will always look out for her regardless of what she does or says to him in return. Looking forward to the next update :0)



Author's Response:

Hey Bella,

I know it was time she gave a little. He is a great guy...a little obtuse, but a great guy lol.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: PiperSun (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 12:59 PM · On: Intervention

I'm glad Bella decided to go to rehab, and I really enjoyed her remarks all through the intervation. 

Great chapter =)



Author's Response:

Hey Piper,

Thanks so much.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Intervention

Great chapter. I really liked how out of touch Bella was about her accounts. I don't think she lied. I think she just was so out of it that she didn't know anymore how much she owed...

Author's Response:

Hey Beth,

Thanks for the kind words and amazing rating.

 There might be a little more than that to Bella's finances.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 03:09 AM · On: Intervention

esme's speech is the best. Carlisle's on the other hand was so-so.

Author's Response:

Hey Doowee,

Esme...hmmm as I thought her, Rose, and Edward all seem to be getting 1st place mentions. Emmett comes in second. Carlisle, Jasper, and Alice all tie for last. All i can say is it is because she doesn't understand Carlisle yet and they don't have much of a relationship.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 10:54 PM · On: Intervention

I never thought about it the way Rose pointed things out! It makes complete sense, that Bella would have less self control because of her addiction! I always thought, "Vampires can't be addicted to drugs and alcohol, so why not just change her now?" But I get it! I can't believe I never made that jump! Why was Bella lying about her credit cards? I know they played it off like no big deal, but I feel like there's more to it. Great chapter, can't wait for more!

~Jazz~

Author's Response:

Hey Jazz,

Thanks for the review.

I know right? That is why I've been avoiding the just change her now question, I've been holding out. That was one of my first thoughts when mapping out the story. It's always been said that your human traits were  enhanced...so yeah she needs to deal with her shit. Also, it give me more to play with ;)

There is a little more to it, not much, just a side thing.

 

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

 

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 09:52 PM · On: Intervention

well the intervention was pretty much what I expected. I think Edward's words were best but Esme was close second. They were all awesome though, I would have them all tied at third place so you did very well. I am glad as hell she is going so she is ready to deal with whatever you have coming her way LOL. I knew Edward would get Bella on the bank accounts, gee what I wouldn't give for that account :) so why did Bella lie about amounts in her checking account & balances on her cards?? I sure hope it was something she simply didn't realize with all the fees etc. However, did one of the girls take money out of her account of something?? Or did Bella not realize she actually spent the money?? Look forward to finding out.  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Hey Tracey,

 Thanks for the awesome review and star rating.

Edward? it was my fave too.

There is a bit coming her way.

Me too...fan fic doesn't pay well LOL.

There is an explanation about the money...it's kinda about Edward...sorta.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E xoxoxo

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 09:40 PM · On: Intervention

Great chapter! I loved it!

I thought the intervention went really well and I love everyone's speeches. They all showed how much they love and care for Bella.

I kind of thought Bella would react the way she did and I'm glad that she agreed to go.

I'm looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey Bella_Cullen,

Really? Thanks and thanks for the amazing star rating.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 09:00 PM · On: Intervention

Honestly? I'm glad Bella's getting help, but it came across as the superior Cullens taking Bad Bella to task. I don't blame her for feeling like the family pet. I know she can't hold her grudge forever, but their attitude seems to be "get over it".



Author's Response:

Hey Bkwrm,

Really?  I think they just want to help.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E



Author's Response:

Hey Bkwrm,

Really?  I think they just want to help.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 08:56 PM · On: Intervention

Loved the chapter!!! You have done a great job with it! Keep up the great work! I look forward to more soon!



Author's Response:

Hey IssaBissa,

WOW thanks for the kind words and the amazing rating.

Thank you.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 08:46 PM · On: Intervention

I think that this was one your best updates.  I think that Esme, Rose and Emmett's speeches were the best.  It showed her that she was not really their "pet" as she thought, but really was part of their family.  I am glad that she will be getting the hep she needs.  AS ALWAYS, THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher



Author's Response:

Hey Sher,

WOW really, thanks.

WOW thanks.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 08:27 PM · On: Intervention

OK, it wasn't as brutal as I was expecting it to be.  I seriously thought she might leave or refuse, see the refusal to change her as abandonment and go back to the same old patterns.



Author's Response:

Hey mrsgunsage,

Thanks for the amazing star rating.

LOL, i'm glad it wasn't as bad as you thought. All I can say is she's reached a new understanding of herself, it won't be easy but it should be better.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Intervention

It is still so so sad.

Author's Response:

Hey Tracey,

I hope things are on the upswing for them.

Thanks for the amazing ratings, you've been really kind about it.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 06:08 PM · On: Intervention

I really hope this works out this time!



Author's Response:

Hey hnwhitlock,

I think it just might. It won't be easy but I think they just might.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 05:14 PM · On: Intervention

oh boy nothing is ever going to be easy for these two is it?



Author's Response:

Hey Vic,

LOL nope...never...or not anytime soon.

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 04:15 PM · On: Intervention

i think that alice and jasper are butts. and if jasper can't handle the heat he needs to get out of the kitchen, ive never these types of issues, but it really struck me! so that tells me you did an incredable job of pulling me into bellas place.... i can't imagine how it would really be for someone with those issues...



Author's Response:

Hey delilah,

LOL about Alice and Jas. Thank you so much, I can't either but what can i say I have an overactive imagination.

 

Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.

 

Bella POV:

 

“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.

 

“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”

 

“But I’m all tangled around you.”

 

“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.

 

I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.

 

“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.

 

“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”

 

I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: as63926 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 10:11 PM · On: Compromise

Oh my, what will happen next. Looking forward to another great chapter..

Author's Response:

Hey as63926,

 thanks for the amazing star rating.

WOW thanks.

Okay so we know the intervention is coming, here is the teaser from it.

 

Bella POV

 

“What’s going on?” I asked, clearly confused.

 

Why are they all surrounding me? Is there something else wrong with me, and Carlisle thought everyone should be around to hear the news? Oh my God, am I dying? How fucking stupid are you, Bella? Look what you fucking did to yourself!

 

“Bella…” Carlisle said and then stopped. It seemed he was struggling to find his words.

 

 I’ve never known him to be anything but eloquent and articulate; something must really be wrong. Oh God, what is it?

 

“We’re all gathered here because…” he began and paused, yet again.

 

Spit. It. Out. Carlisle.

 

Edward must know what’s wrong. Why didn’t he tell me?

 

My heart was beating fast; I was so afraid of what was to come. Edward was trying to calm me down; he held my hand, rubbing gentle circles on it with his thumb.

 

“This is an intervention,” Emmett blurted out.

 

I gasped.

 

“What? Why? I’m getting sober. What more do you want?” I yelled indignantly.

 

The only word resonating thought my mind was: why were they doing this to me?

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Compromise

Love the story! It is so amazing! I hope to read more of it soon! Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Hey Issa,

 WOW thanks for the amazing star rating and kind words.

 More will be up soon.

Okay so we know the intervention is coming, here is the teaser from it.

 

Bella POV

 

“What’s going on?” I asked, clearly confused.

 

Why are they all surrounding me? Is there something else wrong with me, and Carlisle thought everyone should be around to hear the news? Oh my God, am I dying? How fucking stupid are you, Bella? Look what you fucking did to yourself!

 

“Bella…” Carlisle said and then stopped. It seemed he was struggling to find his words.

 

 I’ve never known him to be anything but eloquent and articulate; something must really be wrong. Oh God, what is it?

 

“We’re all gathered here because…” he began and paused, yet again.

 

Spit. It. Out. Carlisle.

 

Edward must know what’s wrong. Why didn’t he tell me?

 

My heart was beating fast; I was so afraid of what was to come. Edward was trying to calm me down; he held my hand, rubbing gentle circles on it with his thumb.

 

“This is an intervention,” Emmett blurted out.

 

I gasped.

 

“What? Why? I’m getting sober. What more do you want?” I yelled indignantly.

 

The only word resonating thought my mind was: why were they doing this to me?

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 07:23 PM · On: Compromise

so anxious to see how the intervention goes...it could be really good or really bad.



Author's Response:

Hey VABelle,

 Yeah I think it's good because it's bad...if that makes sense.

Okay so we know the intervention is coming, here is the teaser from it.

 

Bella POV

 

“What’s going on?” I asked, clearly confused.

 

Why are they all surrounding me? Is there something else wrong with me, and Carlisle thought everyone should be around to hear the news? Oh my God, am I dying? How fucking stupid are you, Bella? Look what you fucking did to yourself!

 

“Bella…” Carlisle said and then stopped. It seemed he was struggling to find his words.

 

 I’ve never known him to be anything but eloquent and articulate; something must really be wrong. Oh God, what is it?

 

“We’re all gathered here because…” he began and paused, yet again.

 

Spit. It. Out. Carlisle.

 

Edward must know what’s wrong. Why didn’t he tell me?

 

My heart was beating fast; I was so afraid of what was to come. Edward was trying to calm me down; he held my hand, rubbing gentle circles on it with his thumb.

 

“This is an intervention,” Emmett blurted out.

 

I gasped.

 

“What? Why? I’m getting sober. What more do you want?” I yelled indignantly.

 

The only word resonating thought my mind was: why were they doing this to me?

 

Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, it makes my day.

 

Cheers,

~E

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