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Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2012 07:27 PM · On: Decisions

that was awesome!



Author's Response:

Hey tainted,

 Thanks for the review.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2012 05:13 PM · On: Dealing

I'm ready for edward and bella to finally be free from facing bella's past indiscretions. that's got to hard on both of them. ready for the family backup to arrive. :)

Author's Response:

Hey Tracey,

Thanks for the amazing review and star rating.

I am too, we just had to put a bow on Forks so to speak.

I think you'll enjoy the teaser

 

This teaser is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

Edward POV

I opened the door to see my siblings. According to their thoughts, Carlisle and Esme were parking the cars.

 

As soon as Rose entered the room, she admonished me, “Can’t you go even one damn day without sex, Edward? She’s grieving for heaven’s sake. What kind of an animal are you?”

 

Before I could answer, Alice jumps in and said, “You knew we were coming, you could have opened a window when you cleaned up. This place reeks of sex.”

 

“Hello to you too, my loving sisters,” I teased.

 

They both glared at me, then Rose opened a window.

 

My brothers were both proud of me, but wouldn’t open their mouth for fear of their wives’ reactions.

 

Seems we all have something in common, I thought fleetingly.

 

Bella came out of the bedroom, tugging at the top of her dress, just after Carlisle and Esme came in.

 

“Holly shit, baby sis, where are you going?” Em asked before anyone else could even say hello.

 

“Emmett!” Esme admonished him for his cursing.

 

So not fair, Bella gets away with swearing, Em thought and I smirked at him.

 

“To a funeral, Em,” Bella spoke slowly as if our bother were severely dim witted.

 

“You’re kidding me right? Who is going to let her leave the room in that?” Em questioned the rest of us as he gestured to Bella’s provocative attire.”

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing it means a lot to me.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: KeKekatfrog (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 08:25 PM · On: Decisions

YAYAYYAYYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if you dont know what i said i said...... YAY! a bunch of timez XD



Author's Response:

Hey Ke,

So happy you are enjoying the story, thank you for the awesome rating.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: KeKekatfrog (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 08:12 PM · On: Sparks

wow...............I LOVE THE NEW BELLA! Except that she has wayyyyy toooo much sex....................



Author's Response:

Hey Ke,

Thanks for the review and the amazing star rating.

I'm so happy you love this bella...yeah she's a wild child now.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 10:25 AM · On: Decisions

I bet Sue and Charlie will be ecstatic to hear Seth imprinted on one of Bella's friends :) Great job, can't wait to read more!

~Jazz~

Author's Response:

Hey Jazz,

LOL I'm SURE they will...not.

Thank you.

 

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: anlafo (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 12:07 AM · On: Showtime

i love this.... i kinda wish she was sing a striptease song like dance for you beyonce and did a sensual dance .... but love what u did..... keep up the good job....



Author's Response:

Hey anlafo,

 Thanks for the kind review and the amazing start rating. I hope you review again.

Bella's a rock star, so i try not to get uber pop-y with the music...but cute idea.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Cheers,

E

Reviewer: anlafo (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 11:49 PM · On: Rough Day

i love this story .... im so excited to read probably stay up all night.... cliffhanger.... i want to write a story but so many in my head dnt know how to start



Author's Response:

Hey anlafo,

I'm so happy tou loved this.

You should go for it, get a PTB beta and write.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 01:15 AM · On: Decisions

THAnks for updating and im so glad she didnt try to get drunk. (=



Author's Response:

Hey dowee,

Thank you for reading. the next ch is with the betas so the coming update should happen sooner than later.

I'm very proud that she made the choice to not drink as well, glad you liked it.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2012 08:31 PM · On: Decisions

loved that she went to her meeting......loved sister rosalie too.                                                                                      very happy about seth and lola....it's great!                              kinda  sad about the no baies thing......but...i'll get over it...not really that bigga deal.



Author's Response:

Hey teach,

WOW thanks. I love a strong and loyal Rose.

Lola and Seth get their HEA.

 

I toyed with the baby, I thought some of it could have been super cute and funny, but there was the chance for it to go badly. I just didn't think this Bella wanted to be or could be a good mom. So sorry.

 

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 11:10 PM · On: Decisions

I'm glad Seth imprinted on one of Bella's friends.  I thought for a minute that Bella had went into a bar. Neat turn of phrase.



Author's Response:

Hey Mel,

 Thanks for the amazing star rating.

Seth is sweet and so is Lola, they deserve to be happy.

happy I can keep you on your toes.

 

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 04:37 PM · On: Yours Always

I loved the letters.  You definitely kept their personalites in their letters.  Terrific!



Author's Response:

Hey Mel,

 Thanks for the amazing star rating.

 I'm SO happy you enjoyed the letters, they were fun to write.

WOW thanks for your kindness. I hope to hear from you again.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 01:14 PM · On: For Life

Wonderful writing on Bella and Edward's first love experience.  



Author's Response:

Hey Mel,

 Thanks for the awesome star rating and  the kind words. It was my frsit real lemon, so thanks.

I hope to hear from you again soon.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2012 05:19 PM · On: Decisions

First, I was escatic to find Bella at the AA meeting.  Bravo!  Great chapter - loved Rosalie's contribution, and Edward proved overall strong.

I laughed when you paid a slight tribute to Renesmee regarding Jacob's imprint and I most certainly didn't see Seth's imprint to Lola - WOW!  I bet Bella will be happy, given what this means for Lola.  She has just been saved, although it will be interesting to see how you play this out.  I always believed the magic went both ways regarding the imprint therefore not only would Seth find himself instantly in love with Lola, but she would also magically have feelings for Seth.  Maybe she wouldn't come right out and admit them but she would surely feel the overwhelming connection that will tie them together.

Anyway, I loved this chapter as I see it moving the tale in a different direction - and it appears it will be a suspenseful one.  Thanks as always for sharing your incredible talent and of course I look forward to the next chapter.  :-)

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey JR,

OMG thanks for the amazing star rating.  I have to admit you are one of the reviewers I hope to hear from everytime I post, thank you for always brightening my day.

Rose became who she was to Bella because when i was debating should I shouldn't I you mentioned how kick ass this Rose seemed and how they would be great friends. Edward, god love him, is trying his best.

You are the second person who laughed at the imprint that never was- thank you it made me laugh when i wrote it too.Exactly, Bella knows now Lola will be loved uncondtionally. Lola may not know what her feelings are, she's a little out of it.

Different really? This was the outline all along, happy i'm keeping the readers engaged.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

 

 

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 12:42 PM · On: Decisions

Still loving this story and I am so grateful you updated! Thanks so much for sharing your writing, this story is truly unique.



Author's Response:

Hey Mick,

Thank you for reading. WOW thanks...its not enough..but thanks.

 

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 12:14 PM · On: Decisions

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey Arti,

 Happy you enjoyed it and thanks for the awesome star rating.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 11:36 AM · On: Decisions

I felt bad for Jake, until I read his reaction. He's too immature to understand any of what's going on. I'm guessing the next chapter is going to have a confrontation of some kind. Should be very interesting. I wonder if he's going to attack Bella, and Edward will have to change her.

I loved Seth imprinting on Lola. Maybe he can get her to go straight. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey Anna,

 Thanks for the amazing star rating.

 Really? I never felt bad for jake...ever. lol. He is imature and rash. I'm unsure about a confrtontation but I can tell you it won't be in the next ch if it happens.

Lola and Seth will get their HEA

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 10:46 AM · On: Decisions

Huh. The whole fortune telling was a bit weird.

Author's Response:

Hey Peregrin,

 Thanks for the amazing star rating.

It was the only way I had for Jake to find out that he would never imprint now rather than years later, and know it was somehow connected to his treatment of Bella.

 

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 04:30 AM · On: Decisions

E.  This was one of the best chapters yet.  I think that both Bella and Edward are finally growing up.  I am so glad that Bella didn't go on a binge.  She did the right thing by going to a meeting.  Edward was so over bearing.  I mean this is Edward we are talking about.......drama queen, even though I love him always.  Jacob is an ass altogether.  I hope that nothing happens on their trip, but there is always next chapter.  Also, I think that Seth is so cute....and now he has imprinted on one of Bella's girls.  I hope that she feels the imprint as well.   AS ALWAYS, THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING AND I CERTAINLY LOOK FORWARD TO MORE.  Sher



Author's Response:

Hey Sher,

Really? WOW, thanks.

They are trying to grow up,

She did do the right thing by going to the meeting. Poor Edward he just wants her safe and happy.

Jake is an ass, I don't like the character so I write him as an ass.

Lola and Seth will get their HEA.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 09:41 PM · On: Decisions

Great chapter!

I am so glad that Bella went to a meeting instead of a bar. Yes, she should let someone know where she was going, but at least she made the right decision about where she ended up. Her going to the meetings just shows how strong she is.

I'm glad that Seth isn't angry at Bella and is happy for her. In the books, Seth was always my favorite werewolf...even though I'm Team Edward 100%...there was just something about Seth you couldn't help but like, so I'm glad you wrote him like you did. :)

Jake is blaming Bella because he won't imprint? That's rich...I just hope that Bella and Edward don't run into him. I can't imagine what he'll do now that he knows he won't ever imprint.

Seth and Lola imprinting was great! Although Seth said their path would be rough...I hope it isn't rough for long!

I can't wait to see what will happen next!



Author's Response:

Hey Bella,

 OMG thanks for the awesome star ratign and extra long review-I love for reviews like this.

 

You're right, all that matters is that she did the right thing in the end.

I'm totally with you on Seth, he's the ONLY wolf I like so I had to give him a HEA.

I'm unsure if Mr. Black will make an appearance.

I don't think we'll be delving into Lola/Seth I think it might just be a few mentions. 

 

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 09:34 PM · On: Decisions

loved the chapter looking forward to seeing what happensnext 



Author's Response:

Hey lani,

Thank you.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 08:10 PM · On: Decisions

Squeeee omg omg omg!!!!! Wow oh wow so much info!!



Author's Response:

Hey sarah,

 LOL I loved this review it made me smile.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 07:31 PM · On: Decisions

Nicely done!  Jacob won't imprint because Renesmee will never be born, of course.

Very realistic portrayal of a recovering alcoholic.



Author's Response:

Hey Java, Thanks for the amazing star rating.

Yuppers no Ness.

Thank you, I try thought my expericen with alcoholics comes from soap operas I'm gald I'm wrting it well.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 06:14 PM · On: Decisions

I was convinced she was gonna cave & go to a bar! 

No Renesmee for Jacob; at least Seth got to imprint :-)



Author's Response:

Hey mom,

 Thanks for the amazing star rating.

Ye of little faith, our girl is strong than she looks.

So happy you enjoyed my wolf pack decisions.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 06:13 PM · On: Decisions

I love that Bella chose to go to a meeting. Choices is all everything in life boils down to. I loved that Seth imprinted on Lola. Maybe he can help her with life etc... I thought the reason Jacob won't ever imprint was such a funny twist on canon that I actually snorted. Loved it and can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response:

Hey tracey,

Thank you for the awesome star rating.

I loved it too, she needed to prove how strong she is.

You're very right, we're defined by out choices.

Seth will be good for Lola.

I LOVE that you snorted, i laughed at it too...which makes me such a dork since i wrote it.

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

“Edward POV

“At least she has Seth now,” I offered.

 

“Yeah, but…oh poor Seth,” she replies further mangling her lip.

 

“What? Please stop biting your lip, you might draw blood,” I said softly.

 

“Lola is a firm believer in Liza’s theory of the best way to get over someone is to get under someone. I hope she won’t hurt Seth—he’s a sweetheart. Fuck, everything is always so fucking complicated,” she huffed and took another sip of her hot chocolate.

 

I pulled her closer to me on the banquettes seat and wrapped my arm around her. She rested her head again my shoulder and I felt her body slump into mine.

 

“It’ll work out. You told me in the past that the imprinter becomes whatever the imprint needs, so I’m sure they’ll be fine, ” I reassured her and placed a kiss on the top of her head.

 

This is the last thing that Bella needs. She’s battling her own demons everyday, Liza dies, Jacob is a threat, and now she’s worried about Seth and Lola’s happiness. I just wish things would calm down for herfor us. This is all just too much sometimes.

 

“Edward, do you know what this means?” she asked lifting her head from my shoulder.

 

“What, love?”

 

“I don’t have to lose Lola. I know I can’t really be around her while she’s using, but after my change she won’t have to think I’m dead. She’ll know everything now. Imprints get to know everything,” she answered with an optimistic look. This is the first time I’ve seen a glimmer of hope in her eyes since she learned of Liza’s death.”

 

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments mean the world to me and keep me writing.

Cheers,

~E

 

Reviewer: Maxi Brux (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 04:40 AM · On: Seasons of Love

This is very slow moving, but I imagine that recovery would be like that, so it reads more like a reality piece than fiction.  That said, I still want to find out what happens next, how far off the waggon does Bella fall?  Does Charlie ever get to realise what he did to Bella (re Jacob end Renee/Phil in particular)?  When does Tanya come to try stick her oar in?



Author's Response:

Hi Maxi,

Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Yes, it is slow moving, I'm old school like hat and tyr to play out every beat of a story. thank you for saying it seems realistic. The next upday is in the queue now. I don;t think Tanya's oar will be stuck in...though I've toyed with the idea.

Some of your questions will be answered in the next update.

This ch is un-beta’d and subject to change.

 

Bella POV

I know this’ll help. It’s what I need. Can I take the plunge? Can I do this? I’ve done it countless times before, but there is a sense of uncertainly now. I know once I sit in that chair I’ve committed to this path. There’ll be no going back, I mentally battled with myself.

With a deep breath I decided to take the plunge.

No looking back, Bella. No remorse, do what you want…what you need. Hmmmm…what will Edward think…no do what you want. Remember this is your life.

I sat for a while taking in my surroundings and the eclectic group of people that were all gathered around for the same purpose.

I wait my turn patiently and then I dive into the deep end headfirst. ”

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments are so really appreciated.

Cheers,

~E

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