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Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
It was certainly great that they were able to talk with one another so effortlessly. They have to remember that she is still coming down from all the drugs in her system which is what is making her irritable. I hope that she and Edward will be able to be together before she goes to the rehab. Are you going make us wait until they are married before we get a good and yummy lemon? I certainly hope so. I also believe that the reason that Alice couldn't get a read on her is because she was living in the moment and therefore her decisions were not sure. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Author's Response: Hey Sher,
Thanks, the needed it. oh...I'm not answering that...wait and see ;)
I think it's a combo Bella decided to live in the moment WHEN she used, so it's six of one half dozen of another. But yeah I love angry Bella...she'll be making more appearances.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
Thanks for such an incredible story!
Author's Response: WOW thanks for the kind words and the amazing rating.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 09:31 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
well im excited for the next chapter. great chapter by the way!
Author's Response: Hey lanigirl,
WOW thanks.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
Chelsea Lately IS amazing! Did you know they're making a sitcom TV show about her book, "Are You There Vodka? It's Me, Chelsea"? Sorry, but I love her! Aw, I was looking forward to the confrontation with her friends. :( With Jasper there it's hardly going to be fun. This chapter was really great! Can't wait for more!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Hey jazz,
I love Chelsea too, thought she was B's kinda gal. Yes I did I know...I loved that book.
Oh no Jazz is given orders before...only when needed..it steps in ONCE is all I will tell you and not for the reason your thinking.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 06:52 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
I love the Bella Box it is so fun to look at the past and remember some amazing times. These two have a hard road to go down but I have faith they will be alright. I would love to have the house it sounds perfect. Rehab won't be easy but fighting for love and what you want out of life is so worth the hard part. I think I have somethin set wrong I never get any replies. So send me one and see if I get it.
Lilly
Author's Response: Hey Lilly,
Wow thanks.I think they'll be alright too. It does right? The found the house online. the exterior is a house in Ithaca NY, and the interior is a house in Pasadena CA...I mixed and matched and added my own twist. I hope you get this reply-I reply to every review..check your bulk mail folder.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
Awesome! I love it!!
Author's Response: hey beth,
thanks and thanks for the awesome star rating.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: PiperSun (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 02:53 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
I glad Edward has Jasper and Emmett to vent to, being Bella's punching bag during the rehab process.
Looking foward to Bella's journey through rehab...
Great chpter =)
Author's Response: HEY PIPER,
Oh I think he will be her punching bag...who else does she have? So yeah he needs an outlet too.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 01:48 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
I love the fact that Bella loves Chelsea Lately. I don't turn on my Tv till she comes on @ 11. Well her and the Daily Show.
I like how the story is moving and progress that they are both making.
Merrily
Kat
Author's Response: Hey Kat,
I watch both every night too..she seems like B kinda gal LOL>
Thanks so much.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 01:19 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
Hey i looooved this chap it was soo goo i am gald that edward got some time with his brothers and i love the idea of the house and i never expected that to come up but i am glad you put it in
Author's Response: Hey Red,
WOW thanks. Yeah they need their own space.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 01:14 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
Loved the chapter! You did a great job on it. I am really interested to see how things go down with her band mates. I am also hoping that you will show us the phone conversation with Charlie. I am sure it will be good! You are doing such a great job on the story! I am looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Hey IssaBissa,
OMG thanks.
You will get to see the conversation with Charlie and Renee...in a few chapters.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 09:57 AM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
The story is starting to drag. will it be picking up pace soon. its still good, just a bit lack luster.
Author's Response: Hey Jordynnem,
Sorry you feel that way, they need to build their relationships...it's a process..hope you stick with it.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: kpsp95 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
thought it was a very good chapter. nice to see them talking thinks out. i am sure more will come out in therapy when she is in rehab.
Author's Response: KPSP,
Thanks.
I think more will come out too, but they are not doing badly on their own.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 06:10 AM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
Broodward? That was a good one! Love your story!
Author's Response: Hey rivruskende,
Thanks for the amazing star rating.
Yeah Broodward was cute.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 05:23 AM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
The chapter was great - it gave a lot of insight into how both of them are coping with what is happening. The house I'm sure will be amazing, and the trip down memory lane was what Bella needed to be reminded of exactly how much Edward really does love her. I loved it!!! :0)
Author's Response: hey Belled,
WOW thanks.
I liked their tip down memory lane too...they needed it.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: twilightamy (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 02:28 AM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
omg u are amazing! i love this story ,,, u are really good ,,cant wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Hey twilightamy,
OMG thanks for the amazing review and star rating!
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 12:25 AM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
Excellent chapter! I loved it!
I'm glad they opened up and talked . I think this will help them in the future for mending wounds from the past.
The house is perfect for them! I think they'll enjoy it a lot.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hey Bella Cullen,
thanks for the amazing star review.
They needed to talk...I hope so.
Wow thanks it's a combination of two houses I found on line. the exterior was actually in Ithaca NY, the inside was a house in Pasadena CA.lol
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 12:14 AM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
I loved that they spent the day talking and re-getting to know each other. I feel bella was justified for getting a little upset/defensive. But I really liked edward's comparison of his own shortcomingsmistakes being thrown in his face repeatedly to bella's mistakes being thrown in hers. I don't like the idea of bella being forced to deal with her parents. I'm nervous about that and bella dealing with her druggie friends.
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
Thanks for the amazing star rating- that was very nice of you.
Thank you, I'm so happy u liked it.
Well, the parents need to be dealt with...interesting conversation will come from it- I hope.
Her friends are up in 2 chapters....I'm nervous about it.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 11:09 PM · On: Moving Forward and Moving On
Well done both E&B!!! I really am going to hate the whole rehab thing...
Author's Response: Hey Hnwhitlock,
Awww thanks...Maybe not it'll bring some good drama-I hope.
Here is the teaser:
“Edward POV
I changed into sleep pants, removed my shirt, and ever-so-gently eased my way into bed beside Bella. She looked so beautiful and peaceful while she slept. Almost as soon as I lay in the bed, she started unconsciously moving toward me. I didn’t want her to rip out the IV, so I moved closer and enfolded her in my arms.
Who are you kidding? You were just looking for an excuse to wrap your arms around her, I accused myself. It was true; there was no better feeling than having her in my arms. It let me know she was really here and loved me.
A little while later, I heard her heartbeat changing. Bella was waking up. I hoped if I remained quiet, she would fall back to sleep; after all, it was only five a.m., and she could sleep for another two or three hours.
“You’re back,” she said, as she snuggled farther into my embrace.
“I’m here. Go back to sleep, love,” I cooed softly in her ear.
“No, I’m up. How was the hunt?”
“Then, I guess a good morning is in order. My hunt went well. I’ll be fine now.”
“Morning. Why haven’t you kissed me yet? I can’t roll all the way over to you with this thing is my arm,” she asked, clearly disgruntled with her IV.
“Let me correct that,” I replied.
I leaned down and captured her soft lips with my own…it was perfection.
Too soon, I pulled away because I could hear Carlisle wanting to come in and see how Bella was doing. I told her about his impending visit. She welcomed this, as it meant the IV would come out.”
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.
Happy Summer.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 12:24 AM · On: Intervention
niiiiiiiiiiice, little generic with the intervention but overall, awsome chp ^_^
Author's Response: hey E,
Thanks.
I posted the teaser to the forum but here it is anyway
Bella POV:
“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.
“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”
“But I’m all tangled around you.”
“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.
I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.
“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.
“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”
I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”
Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.
Cheers,
~E
P.s. what is the ^_^ ? You know how I hate the different smilies...LOL normally I look them up.
Reviewer: madovabreakindawn (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 05:26 AM · On: Saturday's Performance
I would sure love to see cammie kick some vampire ass LOL :D
Author's Response: Hey Madonvabrekindawn,
LOL I would have loved to have seen it too...lol
Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Intervention
I found myself more on Bella's "side" than I expected through the intervention... and surprisingly happy/relieved to see Edward's thoughts on things. Looking foward to seeing everyone move forward from this now :)
Author's Response: Hey Daylen,
Really? cool.
Yes they will be trying to more forward.
Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.
Bella POV:
“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.
“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”
“But I’m all tangled around you.”
“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.
I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.
“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.
“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”
I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”
Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Intervention
Hey i really loved this chap it had some ups and some downs and i really loved how you put it together !!!!! I really loved it !
Author's Response: Hey Red,
WOW thank you.
Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.
Bella POV:
“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.
“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”
“But I’m all tangled around you.”
“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.
I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.
“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.
“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”
I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”
Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 03:49 PM · On: Intervention
im glad that shes getting help ! and sticking with it !
Author's Response: Hey lanigirl,
yes she is sticking to it...or trying to and it was about damn time! LOL
Sorry this is late, life has been hectic; here is the teaser.
Bella POV:
“I woke up with my head on Edward’s bare chest, my non-IV arm slung over his waist, and one my legs hitched over his—in short, I was sprawled all over him. I immediately started to pull away, but his arms tightened around my waist so I couldn’t move.
“Good afternoon, love. Don’t move on my account; I’m rather comfortable.”
“But I’m all tangled around you.”
“Why do you think I’m comfortable?” he replied cheekily.
I smiled and moved my leg off of him, but beyond that, I stayed where I was.
“Did you have a good nap?” he asked.
“Yeah, I guess the medication Carlisle gave me made me drowsy.”
I then noticed he had changed out of his jeans and into grey sweat pants; I appreciated the gesture.”
Thank you for reading this story. The fact that you took the time to not only read but also review means so much to me. I hope you continue to do so, as it makes my day.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Intervention
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Author's Response: Hi tears,
LOL u rated this one twice...thanks so much.
xo
E
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Compromise
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Author's Response: Hi Tears,
Thanks once again for the amazing rating and taking the time to read my little story.
Cheers,
~E
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