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Reviewer: Vulture (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
m/ Hamartia Rocks!!!
Just wanted to say... :P
I read this story now in like 4 nights (which is fast for one whichs native language isnt english imho) and couldnt stop. the ups and downs in the story just pulled me in it was an awesome ride so far. i love the slow progression in time and the very detailed storytelling from different views.
you have done a great job with this, really enjoyed it so far.
a german twiguy
ps: after that much tease through the whole story the lemon in laster chapter was really great and releasing xD..... ok.. i better be silent now.
Author's Response: Hey Vulture,
LOl that was cute.
Really? wow thanks so much.
I was nervous about my lemon, glad it came across okay.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Author's Response: Hey Vulture,
LOl that was cute.
Really? wow thanks so much.
I was nervous about my lemon, glad it came across okay.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Author's Response: Hey Vulture,
LOl that was cute.
Really? wow thanks so much.
I was nervous about my lemon, glad it came across okay.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: nadia2706 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 05:16 AM · On: For Life
absolutly fabulous
Author's Response: Hey Nadia,
Thanks.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 04:07 PM · On: For Life
Abso-fuckin-lutely amazing E!! That was truly written beautifully!! I am so proud of you, why you would have been worried at all, I don't know :) You could honestly end it now and leave us all satisfied with that, but I know you won't do that because you have so much more for us. I think it is adorable that Edward gets his peek in her thoughts while she sleeps :) ok, so rehab is next? maybe a lil mornin fun before they go? I look forward to finding out! ~Tracey xoxox
Author's Response: Hey Tracey,
Thanks for the kinds words and awesome star rating.
I've been writing this chapter since the begining of July. It took SO long to get it to a place where I didn't cringe through it.
I have a lot more story.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E xoxoxo
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 02:40 AM · On: For Life
Okay.. you dragged me out from lurking.... because you pouted.. I have reviewed before I think but it was a LONG time ago.. maybe the first few chapters.. anyhow.. this was..... almost too sticky sweet, until you added the realism of real life with the cuss words and the emotions.. I mean.. I used to be a hopeless romantic but I'm not sure I could handle the rose pendals.. but that is me.. for them though.. it was sooooooooooo cute.... I approve.. a lot..... and well.. I have never had shower sex.. they are just too damn small for me to want to. lol
Author's Response: Hey Devine,
LOL YAY....I love when people speak up. I might have to use the power of the pout again.
I'm not sure I could have handled the roses either...edward insisted.
Some hotels have HUGE shows...
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 01:48 AM · On: For Life
Hey i looooooooved this chap it was soo soo soo good i loved it !!!!!
Author's Response: Hey Red,
Oh wow, thanks.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: bella31 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 08:33 PM · On: For Life
love this story, and Edward the sex god, great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hope the rehab isn`t too long. Can`t wait for more.
Author's Response: Hey Bella,
WE're not in rehab for a while. Trying to find ways to make it readable and not boring...hope it works. WE will get a few rehab ch through.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 09:20 AM · On: For Life
OMG I feel like I should be giving you the Em eyebrow wiggle damn that was HOT HOT HOT!!!!!
Holy screaming O bella and Edward were amazingtogether best first time for them ever and I am just so thrilled that there was no incidents or remorse!! Look forward to more the hospital is going to be a huge *B*I*T*C*H*
Post again soon !!! squeeeeee
Author's Response: Hey Sarah,
LOL. Nope not yet...
U have NO idea.
I will.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 08:39 AM · On: For Life
YEAH!!!! finally...slow burn to white hot luven lol Loved it
Author's Response: Hey Vic,
So happy you enjoyed it.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 11:27 PM · On: For Life
loved this chapter looking foward to seeing what happens next
Author's Response: Hey lani,
thanks so much...hope you like the rest.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 06:48 PM · On: For Life
about time!! good update...sovirgin Eddie's a sex god. ha
Author's Response: Hey songii,
yeah it was. in my defense he's heard and "seen" everything. ;)
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 06:26 PM · On: For Life
Great chapter! Honestly!
Author's Response: Hey beth,
thanks for amaxing words and stars.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 05:52 PM · On: For Life
Sigh....so happy they had a great night together before rehab. Though I admit part of me wanted him to change her by accident during the act. ;)
But let's see what happens next when she goes! :)
Author's Response: Hey FanNan,
LOL really? interestinhg idea...
wait and see....
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: SkittleE (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 10:34 AM · On: For Life
Thank you for your warning, because as your under-18 reader I definitely didn't want to read it. The rest of the chapter was quite good, though. :D
Author's Response: Hey Skittle
Thanks for the stars.
Glad you skipped that part.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Author's Response: Hey Skittle
Thanks for the stars.
Glad you skipped that part.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 10:38 PM · On: For Life
Aww, that was so sweet! So, if it's already August, is Bella going to be another year older before she's turned? I REALLY want to read about Esme and Carlisle's talk with Charlie and Renee. Is that next? Please update again soon either way!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Hey Jazz,
Thanks.
Yes it's august. Wait and find out about when Bella's change it's either ch 37 or 38...can't recall- I'm writing 41.
Next is Carlisle calling Charlie and Renee...all I'll say is my beta's liked it.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: corrina318 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 09:43 PM · On: For Life
I really enjoyed this chapter. I love how Edward treated Bella so romantic!!
Author's Response: Hey Corrina,
Yes Ed is a romantic, I'm so happy you liked it.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 05:04 PM · On: For Life
I have three words Simply Fucking Awesome.......Your lemon was very beautiful and so loving. Edward was MAJOR AWESOME, as well as Bella. But you know that I am an Edward fan. Now you that your "lemon cherry" is broken (hehehe), I expect more and more of them because as I can tell from Edward....the floodgates have been opened and I am sure that he will be on her a lot. I am not even sure that he will make it the entire time she is in rehab. He will probably sneak her window. I hope he does. THANKS FOR THE "FUCK AWESOME" READING. Sher
Author's Response: Hey Sher,
WOW!
Thank you.
I hope they get more...I know THEY both want it lol.
snaking in the window ROTFL
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 04:12 PM · On: For Life
AWESOME!!! Great sex scene!! This story just gets better and better. I look so forward to the updates - they can't happen fast enough!
Author's Response: Hey mysticm
OMG wow a fabouls rating and review....wow.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 04:07 PM · On: For Life
WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Eddie said F8ck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey WHitlock,
LOL yeah he did.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: PiperSun (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 01:52 PM · On: For Life
that was beautiful!!! you've written their night togather perfectly.
can't wait for more... =)
Author's Response: Hey Piper,
thank you, thank you, thank you.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 01:08 PM · On: For Life
It was wonderful...sweet yet raunchy at the same time...The page oozed love, commitment and the promise of an eternal future.
Author's Response: Hey arti
your review humbled me, I have no words.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 12:43 PM · On: For Life
This was a great chapter! I loved it!
This was perfect for them and I hope they have more of them in the future!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hey Bella,
thanks for the stars.
Really? wow.
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 12:34 PM · On: For Life
That was really hot, romantic, sweet and honest between our 2 sexy peeps. hehehe Loved it. :)
Author's Response: Hey tracey,
Thanks for the amamxing star rating.
Awwww thanks *blushes*
This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.
““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.
“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.
“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”
“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.
I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.
“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”
Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.
“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.
“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.
“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: SoIstDasLeben (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2011 12:32 AM · On: You Can't Go Home Again
I really like this fic so far...maybe its the girl-rocker in me :) but...I'm disappointed in the weed-referances. Really- Edward being as intelligent as he is would know that weed is way better for you than tobacco or alcohol. Seriously, they should be more worried about those habits than the fact that she smokes a joint once-a-day.
Get yourself some real info on the stuff rather than the government-produced bullshit statistics we get fed through the media. FYI: not a single person has EVER died of a marijuana overdose.
Sorry about my little rant -its just a subject I feel strongly about.
I really do like your fic :) Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hey Leben,
I get it and we'll all entitled to our opinion.
I'm happy your enjoying the fic...I hope you like the rest/
Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. It humbles me to know anyone reads this.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
good to hear... Perhaps an orderly is going to make the painful mistake of getting fresh with her? X}
Author's Response: LOL at least take this to the forum.
Interesting idea...I may steal that.
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
I get that she was having a shit-tastic day, I'm just saying that it feels like she's been declawed lately. Good teaser btw
Author's Response: I get it, have no fear the claws are retractable. ;)
thanks glad u liked it...it was going to be longer but I you didn't need the very begining in the teasers...it had to end where it did.
Author's Response: I get it, have no fear the claws are retractable. ;)
thanks glad u liked it...it was going to be longer but I you didn't need the very begining in the teasers...it had to end where it did.
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