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Reviewer: kadler (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2011 06:45 PM · On: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
My nails don't grow that fast.....anyway thanks
Author's Response: Hey Kadler,
I don't get it...sorry.
Hope you keep reading and reviewing.
Cheers,
E
Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2011 06:32 PM · On: Yours Always
Hi I have just read all 40 chapters of your story and am loving it. The letters are a great way to tell us how they are doing. I didn't think Bella would talk quickly and am pleased she didn't. I look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Tink,
Really? wow thanks so much. I'm happy you like the pace, I'm tryng to keep it real. Some think she should be doing better by now but this girl has a LOT to work through. Hopefully rehab won't drag on though.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Curlykate (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2011 10:54 AM · On: War Rooms
Really Great Story. I am a little confused as to why any of the Cullens would expext Bella to be civil towards them after they just walked out of her life.
Great story.
Author's Response: Hey Kate,
Thank you so much.
Keep reading and I think it'll be clear...let's just say things aren't as they appear to be.
I hope you continue to read and review, it really means the world to me.
Enjoy BD this week.
Cheers,
E
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2011 06:20 AM · On: Yours Always
good job. made me cry though..=(
Author's Response: Hey doowee,
Thank you. That is the greatest compliment.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 05:02 PM · On: Yours Always
Yup, we're here! I loved this chapter of letters back and forth. It's amazing much they communicate.
Author's Response: Hey Java,
WOW 5 stars..thanks.
Thank you.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 10:30 PM · On: Yours Always
I thought thet way you wrote this chapter was brilliant! Got great insight into how they were managing and it helped put them in a good place to comunicate and get over bumps in the therapy.
Merrily
Kat
Author's Response: Hey Kat,
WOW thanks.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: ddot (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Yours Always
This was an excellent chapter. I loved all the letters between them. It was truly touching. The concern and love for each other is very evident and though they are upset to be apart. This kind of separation is very good for both of them...they wouldn't be able to engage and change themselves had they been around each other all the time. I love the strides they are taking to get better on both sides. The honesty was awesome, and I like how they aren't necessarily trying to cover things up, but just make things easier to swallow. Very good update.
Author's Response: Hey dot,
Wow thanks. You're right they needed the break to work on themselves.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Yours Always
Wow! Love this chapter. Without any narrative you gave me an awesome sense of all that is happening. You have an amazing talent!
Author's Response: hey dragonfly,
Thank you, that humbles me.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: kadler (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 05:24 PM · On: Morning Sunshine
weed is not all bad...you should have made the drug of your choice some oxycotton....help the pharmaceutical industry...sarcasm...your story rocks thanks
Reviewer: rosario1964 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
thank you very much for you to translate and answer me samples that are a good person. I also translate with google
Author's Response: Hola Rosario, Espero que esto funcione. Estoy usando un sitio de traducción.Sólo darle las gracias por tomarse el tiempo para escribirme y leer mi pequeña historia. Espero que el tanslation tiene sentido ...Gracias. Saludos, E
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 07:19 AM · On: Yours Always
I LOVED the letters!! I thought it was a very creative and insightful way to handle communication while they are apart. Its such a great way to see into the minds of the characters and see how they are handling things. You did such a great job and I really appreciate all the thought and work that goes into your story. GREAT JOB!!!
Author's Response: Hey Nan,
Really? Cool. WOW thank you so very much, you have made my day.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 11:51 PM · On: Yours Always
I'm out here, I exist!! I love this story and the letters made me melt. remindered me of the letters I sent back and forth to my high school bf... awwwww. memories :) hehehe.
Author's Response: Hey Devine,
So happy you're out there...I love hearing from everyone. I asked the question because though people were reading there were few reviews...I like the feedback.
So happy the letters went over well and helped bring back some good memories ;)
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: neyvada (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 12:24 PM · On: Yours Always
Very nice chapter. And awesome story. I'm looking forward to reading their reunion. Thanks very much.
Author's Response: Hey neyvada,
THanks for the stars.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Banrion (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 11:54 AM · On: Yours Always
I just found the story and am enjoying it a lot. I like snarky Bella and your more grown up Edward, even of he still has a ways to go. ;) looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hey Banrion,
Thanks for the stars. So happy you found the story and are reviewing...I love new readers.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 02:14 AM · On: Yours Always
The letters are sweet and a great way to move the story along - looking forward to reading more, Nicole :0)
Author's Response: Hey Nicole,
I'm happy you enjoyed the letters.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: cullen-mad (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 11:39 PM · On: Yours Always
anouther brillant chapter cant wait for the two to be reunited again, but it is a long progress they have to get throught. i love the bella in this stroy she is so fightsty, keep up the great writing.
thanks for all your hard work
Author's Response: Hey C-M,
WOW thanks.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 11:13 PM · On: Yours Always
I really like this chapter. the letters are a great way to learn what's going on without traditional dialogue or first- or third-person narration. Great job.
Author's Response: Hey mimi,
I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Bucko1978 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 10:06 PM · On: Yours Always
Still here and still reading! I really liked the letters. It was nice to be able to read about both of their feelings and experiences. I am not sure that would have been able to be captured in any other way. I am looking forward to the next chapter! I hope it is not a long wait! :)
Author's Response: Hey bucko,
Yay happy you're here.
I don't think any way but the letters would have worked either. I wrote a few from edward and had them planed to go into a Bella POV chapter but it just felt...wrong. happy you liked this.
I hope it'll be up soon.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:15 PM · On: Yours Always
My heart hurts for them both.
Author's Response: Hey hnwhitlock,
Really? Omga that means the ch was successful...means the world to me.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:04 PM · On: Yours Always
I think the letter are spot on perfect. They pass time rather than drag it out, yet you still feel like you are right there with them. They will both make it through all this stuff & come out so much stronger on the other end. It always gets worse before it gets better. Excellent addition to this story. Love It!
Author's Response: Hey Rgwmnks,
Thanks for the amazing star rating.
I'm so happy the letter idea went over well. I think you're right, they will be stronger in the long run. Yes it does have to get wrose before it will be better.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 07:44 PM · On: Yours Always
I like the letters...I think it's a nice departure from plain ol narrative :) Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hey Toni,
Thanks that's what I thought the chapter would have been boring any other way.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: rosario1964 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Yours Always
Después de tanto tiempo me decido a escribirte .Es uns historia tan bonita que poco a poco se ha metido dentro de mi corazón.La he visto crecer desde el 1 capítulo me ha echo llorar ,y reír . Tantos sentimientos y todo te lo debo a ti , gracias
Author's Response: Hey Rosario,
I had to go to a tranlation site to be able to read your review (I don't read or write Spanish) but it was lovely thank you so very much.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: OH MIA MYA (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 05:58 PM · On: Yours Always
Love the story and I am anxiously waiting for the next post.
Waiting Patiently, Impatienly,
OH MIA MYA
Author's Response: Hey Oh MIS MYA,
Aww thank you.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Author's Response: Hey Oh MIS MYA,
Aww thank you.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Whew, what an intense start! Seems like B has a few unresolved issues, eh? Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hey chyla,
Thanks. Oh yeah. I hope you continue reading and reviewing, I love hearing from readers.
Cheers,
E
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 02:51 PM · On: Yours Always
Aw, their letters are so sweet! I would've loved to see some of those calls Edward intercepted, and his responses! Jeez it took you a long time to update! I'm glad to see Bella's working harder! Great job, please update again SOON!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Hey Jazz,
Thank you.
Okay let me tell you what happened, this chapter had some editing issues so I had to send it back to my betas. I have 2 editing betas and me , so 3 people have to coordinate to do this then it goes to a 4th to be validated by twilighted. The next chapter is going in for validation today so that's fingers crossed it'll be up soon.
Here’s the teaser it’s in Bella’s POV:
“My biological parents were the other issue that haunted me at night—Charlie in particular. The day Edward told me Charlie might write, I exploded in therapy. I told Dr. Martin that I hated Charlie and explained why. I told her that, instead of giving me space and letting me deal with things myself, he pushed me toward Jake when he was my only friend. He thought if I was in a relationship with Jake, I would get over Edward. But Jake was nothing more than my best friend and brother. Charlie, even before I met Liza, would mumble and make comments about Edward. He learned not to say his name, instead calling him “that boy.” He would talk to Billy at night, and I would hear him curse that I ever met Edward. After I started my “descent,” he would openly blame him and yell at me. Living in the house was so hard that sometimes I would sleep in my truck in the Cullens’ driveway, as it was so far from town no one would know. I feared contact with Charlie as I had already learned he was one of my “triggers;” my response to Dr. Martin’s assessment was no shit Sherlock.
I had been in rehab ten days when it happened—Charlie had written to me.”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story and review…it means so much.
Cheers,
~E
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