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Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Couples Therapy
Hooray for Bella finally seeing she needs help & doing something about it!
I imagine it must suck to realize she needs another month but if that's what it takes, then I guess she doesn't have a choice.
It never ceases to amaze me how people don't fully understand how bad some things are for you until they find themselves struggling to overcome an addiction. I'm glad I never got caught up in any vices.
Author's Response: Hey mom,
LOL I know, FINALLY!
Yeah both her and I need the time- I need the time because I have more rehab story to tell, and well she wouldn't last on the outside right now.
I know me too, but I like to liken it to any obession. Like when you read an extra few ch of fanfic instead of going to bed or have a piece of cake you know you shouldn't ...not the same but it's how I relate. lol
This teaser is un-beta’ed and subject to change.
Edward POV:
“The phone rang and with it came a sense of sweet relief.
"Hello?" I answered politely just in case it wasn't Bella, but rather an administrator.
"Hey, baby," she cooed happily.
"Hi, love. How are you? You sound so much better," I told her.
"I am. I think the last few days everything started clicking. Then, seeing you yesterday reminded me what I have to fight for. I think I had given up... I was wallowing in self-pity. I told Dr. Martin that today and she was thrilled with my progress. This was the first time I really and truly opened up. I did the same with Dr. Chase, too," she explained brightly.
"I'm so happy to hear that, love, you have no idea," I replied.
"I have more good news... Guess who gets to have a visitor on Sunday?"
"Really, love?" I was surprised, as Dr. Martin hadn’t made up her mind on the subject when I saw her.
"Yeah. I don't care about the birthday part, but you can come after ten and can stay until six."”
Warning the ch is not all sunshine and roses despite the teaser.
Thank you for taking the time to read and reivew.
Wishing you the a happy and healthy New Year.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 09:25 PM · On: Couples Therapy
wow....such a heavy story. I hope Bella gets better and is happier and lighter:)
Author's Response: Hey toni,
I know, but I hope it's good.
This teaser is un-beta’ed and subject to change.
Edward POV:
“The phone rang and with it came a sense of sweet relief.
"Hello?" I answered politely just in case it wasn't Bella, but rather an administrator.
"Hey, baby," she cooed happily.
"Hi, love. How are you? You sound so much better," I told her.
"I am. I think the last few days everything started clicking. Then, seeing you yesterday reminded me what I have to fight for. I think I had given up... I was wallowing in self-pity. I told Dr. Martin that today and she was thrilled with my progress. This was the first time I really and truly opened up. I did the same with Dr. Chase, too," she explained brightly.
"I'm so happy to hear that, love, you have no idea," I replied.
"I have more good news... Guess who gets to have a visitor on Sunday?"
"Really, love?" I was surprised, as Dr. Martin hadn’t made up her mind on the subject when I saw her.
"Yeah. I don't care about the birthday part, but you can come after ten and can stay until six."”
Warning the ch is not all sunshine and roses despite the teaser, but its got some light.
Thank you for taking the time to read and reivew.
Wishing you the a happy and healthy New Year.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Couples Therapy
I'm so glad they both opened up!
Author's Response: Hey Whitlock,
I know, right?
This teaser is un-beta’ed and subject to change.
Edward POV:
“The phone rang and with it came a sense of sweet relief.
"Hello?" I answered politely just in case it wasn't Bella, but rather an administrator.
"Hey, baby," she cooed happily.
"Hi, love. How are you? You sound so much better," I told her.
"I am. I think the last few days everything started clicking. Then, seeing you yesterday reminded me what I have to fight for. I think I had given up... I was wallowing in self-pity. I told Dr. Martin that today and she was thrilled with my progress. This was the first time I really and truly opened up. I did the same with Dr. Chase, too," she explained brightly.
"I'm so happy to hear that, love, you have no idea," I replied.
"I have more good news... Guess who gets to have a visitor on Sunday?"
"Really, love?" I was surprised, as Dr. Martin hadn’t made up her mind on the subject when I saw her.
"Yeah. I don't care about the birthday part, but you can come after ten and can stay until six."”
Warning the ch is not all sunshine and roses despite the teaser.
Thank you for taking the time to read and reivew.
Wishing you the a happy and healthy New Year.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 01:51 PM · On: Reality
Wow i loved this chapter so so so so much !!!! i loved the phone call at the end ! i loved how edward was with bella so sweet and strong ! i loved it !
Author's Response: Hey Red,
Aww thanks, I really needed to read such kind words today.
Edward is trying really hard, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Here is the teaser it is un-beta’d and in Bella’s POV:
“I was pulled from my racing thoughts by the soft click of the door that signaled Dr. Martin’s entrance.
“Good afternoon, Bella. How are you today?” she asked.
I shrugged. I had abandoned my stock response of fine a few days before, but just couldn’t muster up an answer. In fact, I didn’t feel I had the words to describe my inner turmoil even if I felt so inclined.
“I’ve spoken with Dr. Chase, he said you seemed to open up with him; however, you closed right up afterward. Bella, we can’t help you if you don’t let us. You need to open up.” She lectured me, yet again.
“I know, I’m trying,” I muttered clearly distracted.
Open up. Spill your guts. Bare your soul and we’ll fix you. Some days it seems easy, and on others I felt like it would be making a deal with the devil.”
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I enjoy getting the feedback and your comments make me happy.
Know that the next update will be delayed a little as it is REALLY long and taking some time to edit.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2011 08:43 PM · On: Reality
finally reading this update! looking forward to seeing how the new bella is !
Author's Response: Hey Lani,
Thanks, happy you're still reading. I hope you like Bella as she finds her way.
Here is the teaser it is un-beta’d and in Bella’s POV:
“I was pulled from my racing thoughts by the soft click of the door that signaled Dr. Martin’s entrance.
“Good afternoon, Bella. How are you today?” she asked.
I shrugged. I had abandoned my stock response of fine a few days before, but just couldn’t muster up an answer. In fact, I didn’t feel I had the words to describe my inner turmoil even if I felt so inclined.
“I’ve spoken with Dr. Chase, he said you seemed to open up with him; however, you closed right up afterward. Bella, we can’t help you if you don’t let us. You need to open up.” She lectured me, yet again.
“I know, I’m trying,” I muttered clearly distracted.
Open up. Spill your guts. Bare your soul and we’ll fix you. Some days it seems easy, and on others I felt like it would be making a deal with the devil.”
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I enjoy getting the feedback and your comments make me happy.
Know that the next update will be delayed a little as it is REALLY long and taking some time to edit.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Reality
Very good, keep it up, loving this fic!! update soon!!
Author's Response: Hey Eddie,
Thanks so much.
Here is the teaser it is un-beta’d and in Bella’s POV:
“I was pulled from my racing thoughts by the soft click of the door that signaled Dr. Martin’s entrance.
“Good afternoon, Bella. How are you today?” she asked.
I shrugged. I had abandoned my stock response of fine a few days before, but just couldn’t muster up an answer. In fact, I didn’t feel I had the words to describe my inner turmoil even if I felt so inclined.
“I’ve spoken with Dr. Chase, he said you seemed to open up with him; however, you closed right up afterward. Bella, we can’t help you if you don’t let us. You need to open up.” She lectured me, yet again.
“I know, I’m trying,” I muttered clearly distracted.
Open up. Spill your guts. Bare your soul and we’ll fix you. Some days it seems easy, and on others I felt like it would be making a deal with the devil.”
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I enjoy getting the feedback and your comments make me happy.
Know that the next update will be delayed a little as it is REALLY long and taking some time to edit.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 04:22 PM · On: Reality
Took a fanfic break for a while but I'm back . Yes great to see this story really progress..
Author's Response: Hi dnabgeek,
So happy you're back and that you have enjoyed this story.
Here is the teaser it is un-beta’d and in Bella’s POV:
“I was pulled from my racing thoughts by the soft click of the door that signaled Dr. Martin’s entrance.
“Good afternoon, Bella. How are you today?” she asked.
I shrugged. I had abandoned my stock response of fine a few days before, but just couldn’t muster up an answer. In fact, I didn’t feel I had the words to describe my inner turmoil even if I felt so inclined.
“I’ve spoken with Dr. Chase, he said you seemed to open up with him; however, you closed right up afterward. Bella, we can’t help you if you don’t let us. You need to open up.” She lectured me, yet again.
“I know, I’m trying,” I muttered clearly distracted.
Open up. Spill your guts. Bare your soul and we’ll fix you. Some days it seems easy, and on others I felt like it would be making a deal with the devil.”
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I enjoy getting the feedback and your comments make me happy.
Know that the next update will be delayed a little as it is REALLY long and taking some time to edit.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: sunshine4047 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2011 04:17 PM · On: Epiphany
I played the song Call and Answer while reading the end and it was a nice way to end the chapter, so thank you for that! :D
Author's Response: Hi Sunshine,
I'm happy you enjoyed the song selection.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review, it means a lot to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2011 11:47 PM · On: Reality
Poor... well, everybody. Bella hates to be a burden, but she's been realizing that her addiction causes her to be more of a burden, which depresses her (along with other factors), which makes her want to use again. I'm really interested to see whether you eventually reconcile the Charlie and Renee' issues. That, I have a feeling, will be explosive for somebody.
Author's Response: Hey Mimi,
Yes Bella hates being a burden.
Reconciling with Charlie and Renee...don't hold your breath.
Fireworks will be in the future.
Here is the teaser it is un-beta’d and in Bella’s POV:
“I was pulled from my racing thoughts by the soft click of the door that signaled Dr. Martin’s entrance.
“Good afternoon, Bella. How are you today?” she asked.
I shrugged. I had abandoned my stock response of fine a few days before, but just couldn’t muster up an answer. In fact, I didn’t feel I had the words to describe my inner turmoil even if I felt so inclined.
“I’ve spoken with Dr. Chase, he said you seemed to open up with him; however, you closed right up afterward. Bella, we can’t help you if you don’t let us. You need to open up.” She lectured me, yet again.
“I know, I’m trying,” I muttered clearly distracted.
Open up. Spill your guts. Bare your soul and we’ll fix you. Some days it seems easy, and on others I felt like it would be making a deal with the devil.”
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I enjoy getting the feedback and your comments make me happy.
Know that the next update will be delayed a little as it is REALLY long and taking some time to edit.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 03:51 PM · On: Intervention
That must of been very overwhelming for Bella, but I'm so pleased she has agreed to treatment.
Author's Response: Hey Teri
I think it did overwhelm her...but it is a step in the right direction.
Thanks for reading, reviewing, and rating.
Happy Thanksgiving (if you're America).
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 09:58 AM · On: Epiphany
Just perfect.
Author's Response: Hi Teri,
WOW thanks.
Thank you for reading, reviewing, and rating it really means a lot.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 08:25 AM · On: What Happened?
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Teru,
Thanks for the review and the awesome star rating.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Some Things Will Never Change
Ahh Rent that is a great movie with great songs. Loved the chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Teri,
I believe you might be the only one to have commented on RENT, I love it too and had to get it in.
So happy you loved the chapter and gave another 5 star review...thanks.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Reality
The pills will help balance the serotinin in her brain, until her body can balance it on its own.
Can't wait until Bella gets out of rehab so they can have some more steamy fun;)
Author's Response: Hey Toni,
I hope the pills really do help her.
Steamt fun is in the forcast...just a ways off.
Here is the teaser it is un-beta’d and in Bella’s POV:
“I was pulled from my racing thoughts by the soft click of the door that signaled Dr. Martin’s entrance.
“Good afternoon, Bella. How are you today?” she asked.
I shrugged. I had abandoned my stock response of fine a few days before, but just couldn’t muster up an answer. In fact, I didn’t feel I had the words to describe my inner turmoil even if I felt so inclined.
“I’ve spoken with Dr. Chase, he said you seemed to open up with him; however, you closed right up afterward. Bella, we can’t help you if you don’t let us. You need to open up.” She lectured me, yet again.
“I know, I’m trying,” I muttered clearly distracted.
Open up. Spill your guts. Bare your soul and we’ll fix you. Some days it seems easy, and on others I felt like it would be making a deal with the devil.”
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I enjoy getting the feedback and your comments make me happy.
Know that the next update will be delayed a little as it is REALLY long and taking some time to edit.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 01:09 PM · On: Life Raft
Glad Bella at least admits to herself that she is an addict, hopefully she will open up more to Edward in time.
Author's Response: Hello again Teri,
In time being the operative words...wait and see.
Thank you for the amazing rating. I hope you keep reading and reviewing; I love hearing from everyone.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 07:18 AM · On: It's A New Dawn, It's A New Day!
Yay!!! they kissed x
Author's Response: Hi Teri,
LOL so happy you loved it. They deserved this kiss. Can't wait to hear your thoughts on future chapters.
Thanks for not only reading and reviewing, but also for another amazing five star rating.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 06:40 AM · On: Reunion
Ahh.. they're actually talking. Loved it.
Author's Response: Hi again Teri,
Sorry I'm responding to all of them at once...I had to wait until I had the time.
Yes, it was nice to see them talking.
So happy you enjoyed it and thanks for the amazing rating.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 05:55 AM · On: The Line Between Love and Hate
I love a cliffie when I know I can click on the little red next at the bottom of the page!! lol
Author's Response: Hey Teri,
Five stars again...thank you.
I think those just might be the best kinds of cliffies, lol.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 01:32 AM · On: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
One step forward, two steps back comes to mind with Edward!
Author's Response: Hey Teri,
Yuppers the title was fitting.
Thanks for the review and the awesome star rating.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 10:02 PM · On: Reality
Awwwz
Author's Response: Hey EDelta,
Thanks for the amazing star rating and the review.
Here is the teaser it is un-beta’d and in Bella’s POV:
“I was pulled from my racing thoughts by the soft click of the door that signaled Dr. Martin’s entrance.
“Good afternoon, Bella. How are you today?” she asked.
I shrugged. I had abandoned my stock response of fine a few days before, but just couldn’t muster up an answer. In fact, I didn’t feel I had the words to describe my inner turmoil even if I felt so inclined.
“I’ve spoken with Dr. Chase, he said you seemed to open up with him; however, you closed right up afterward. Bella, we can’t help you if you don’t let us. You need to open up.” She lectured me, yet again.
“I know, I’m trying,” I muttered clearly distracted.
Open up. Spill your guts. Bare your soul and we’ll fix you. Some days it seems easy, and on others I felt like it would be making a deal with the devil.”
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I enjoy getting the feedback and your comments make me happy.
Know that the next update will be delayed a little as it is REALLY long and taking some time to edit.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 02:31 PM · On: What Now!
Esme is so lovely. Great writing.
Author's Response: Hey Teri,
once again I am overwhelmed by your comments and ratings...thank you.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 07:05 AM · On: You Can't Go Home Again
I love your Rosealie. I don't blame Bella for being this way as it has been 4 years but still can't help feeling kind of sorry for Edward, although I know he does deserve it.
Author's Response: Hi Teri,
Really? I love her too. I love that you're seeing both sides.
Thanks again for the kind review and amazing rating.
Hope you saw and enjoyed Breaking Dawn this weekend.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 05:02 AM · On: War Rooms
Loving it so far.
Author's Response: Hi Teri,
WOW thanks.
So happy to have a new reader enjoying this...thanks for the stars too.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 02:31 AM · On: Showtime
Loved it.
Author's Response: Hi Teri,
Awww thanks.
Thanks once again for the review and the rating...amazing.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 02:20 AM · On: Rough Day
So glad that I have that little red 'next' to click and read on.
Author's Response: Hey Teri,
Wow that is such a compliment as that is how I feel when I'm enjoying someting.
Thank you for the awesome rating and all your reviews.
Until next time.
Cheers,
~E
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