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Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
I kind of like hearing Bella tell Charlie off. Adult to adult and all that. He tried to have her committed? The nerve!
Author's Response: Hey nwalto,
welcome I'm happy you found my little story.
Thank you for the rating:)
I know who would have thier depressed drug addict alcoholic child get help right?! LOL
I hope you enjoy the rest, please tell me what you think as you go, i love hearing from everyone. and if you have time check out the forum on the AU board.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: twilightamy (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 10:32 AM · On: War Rooms
loovee
Author's Response: hi twilightamy,
OMG thanx for the rating, you made my day!
I'm happy you loved it, it humbles me.
Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d
“This is the first time that I ever thought of Edward or Alice as leeches, as Jake used to say, but they were. It was not because they were vampires, but because they had the ability to bring back the pain I worked so hard to keep at bay. It was the pain that drained the life out of me.”
Thank you for staying with this story even after the long break.
As always your review makes my day, thank you again.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 10:26 AM · On: War Rooms
Hey hey hey this was another great chap =] i loved how edward has sapped into action and i loved wt rose said !!!!!
Author's Response: Hey hey hey RedRedRed,
So happy to be back! Thank you, i'm happy you enjoyed it.
I love rosie too!
Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d
“This is the first time that I ever thought of Edward or Alice as leeches, as Jake used to say, but they were. It was not because they were vampires, but because they had the ability to bring back the pain I worked so hard to keep at bay. It was the pain that drained the life out of me.”
Thank you for staying with this story even after the long break.
As always your review makes my day, thank you again.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 10:23 AM · On: War Rooms
can't wait to hear what Bella plays ths time...post soon please
Author's Response: Hi Kmac17,
I hope you like my song choices, I love picking the soundtract to this story. I have it as a playlist on my iPod and I LOVE it, so I hope you do too. I'm glad you seem to like the story and now that I know what happened to my beta, who we are all pulling for, I'm using the round robin beta's at PTB so I should be updating every week to week and a half.
Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d
“This is the first time that I ever thought of Edward or Alice as leeches, as Jake used to say, but they were. It was not because they were vampires, but because they had the ability to bring back the pain I worked so hard to keep at bay. It was the pain that drained the life out of me.”
Thank you for staying with this story even after the long break.
As always your review makes my day, thank you again.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Burn
looking forward to an update.
Author's Response: Hey zgp3,
I am too, just waiting to get the next ch from my PTB Beta. I hope your enjoying the story so far.
Oh I have a forum for the story on the AU board here on twilighted, come check it out!
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: bella31 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Burn
I really am liking this story, hope theres more coming soon, great writing!
Author's Response: Hey bella31,
There is more coming, i'm just waiting on my beta. I'm so pleased you are enjoying it. and thank you fro the compliment.
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: crumb1991 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Burn
Can't wait for the next chapter! Bella kicks ass:)
Author's Response: hey Crumb1991,
I'm so happy you like it. I hope to update soon my beta has been REALLY busy.
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
philosophy, a little psychology too, disecting behavior was a talent before, now I scare people XD
AU would be my guess, it's years later and the plots different
Author's Response: Ok I set it up here it is
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=12377
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
sounds like a wonderful idea, then we can corrupt others with our madness! Just send me the link or something
ah, now I know what you're talking about, and yes that is all kinds of fun. Especially when someone's logic is flawed
Author's Response: I love when someone's logic is flawed, let me guess you either took Political science or philosophy, right?
I think I will do the forum, do you think it would be NM or AU?
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
"Though shalt keep it simple, stupid"-words to live by
not familiar with Aristotalian logic as a term however. I might use it but I can't say I've heard of it before. Enlighten me?
Author's Response: BTW I think I'm starting a forum for this story so we have a place to speak. What do you think?
Ok Aristotelian sorry about the spellign error, it works on an imperative. You start with a universal truth or something that has been proven true to prove another point
If A=C
and D=C
then D=A
A twilight example would be:
All humans have to breath
John doe is human
John Doe needs to breath
depending on the truth you can really play with people.
Enjoy!
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sadly I'm a little out of practice, I used to be able to turn anything into circular logic, drove people batshit, unfortunatly my prefered partners for words sparing have been scattered across the country for college of have girlfriends now
Author's Response: LOL I have to say you did a fine job, I like to screw with people using Aristotelian logic and Occam's razor.
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
Urban Myth? BAH! Such a weak excuse for fiction does not hold a candle to my non paradoxical existence! I... am a figment of the world's collective imagination, I exist because everyone believes that I exist ;)
The best part comes when someone tries to rationalize it or "unimagine" me
And yes Bella with a backbone is always fun
Author's Response: LOL, I love your logic!
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
yes I'm a guy, and while I'm not to hot on SM's vampire model the story itself wasn't half bad.... and FanFiction takes up the rest of the slack. In you're case, it's always refreshing to read a Bella that guts Edward like a fish, I HATE people that thinking they always know best and don't even consider what others want. So yeah, I'm a guy and I'm actually reading Twilight FanFiction willingly ;)
Author's Response: WOW I thought you were an urban myth! LOL
I agree about a bella with a backbone.
Happy to have you aboard!
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
... but I like making girls blush ;)
And if the chps like that bit then this is going to be all kinds of fun
Author's Response: LOL... to cute.
I hope it does not disappoint.
P.s Do I have a male reader? Either way happy to have you aboard.
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Burn
... That. Was. EPIC!!!! Can't wait until you post the next chp
Author's Response: Hey EDelta88,
EPIC?! REALLY? OMG you make me blush. I hope to post it by the end of this week, waiting on my beta to get it back to me, she has been swamped lately.
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: twilightamy (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Burn
wow i am starting to love this story , keep going the good work
Author's Response: Hey twilightamy,
I'm glad your warming up to the story, year it'll keep going, as soon as my beta gets it back to me the next ch will be submitted!
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Author's Response: Hey twilightamy,
I'm glad your warming up to the story, year it'll keep going, as soon as my beta gets it back to me the next ch will be submitted!
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: JasonGee (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Burn
Go, Bella! Give them hell!
I'm so psyched to see her give them the shit they deserve. What a bunch of arrogant asshats they are.
I know it doesn't work that way and most readers' heads would explode...but I'm kinda hoping she never forgives them at all!
Author's Response: Hey JasonGee,
That she will, that she will, she keep Edward on his toes.
I want to say something but ti will give away the next few chapters.... but yeah okay I have stop typing but they are not ALL asshats. BTW i love that term.
I believe there are ppl who review who would argue with you, however the road a head IS NOT EASY, it is long and hard and Edward has some growing up to do.
I'm very happy you have enjoyed it this far.
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Burn
Well I thought she would have talked to Edward or yell at him a little more than she did. I feel for her so lost and broken. I hope Edward can overcome this and fight for Bella!
Author's Response: Hey Iceangel7,
thanx for the stars.
This was only the TIP of the iceberg...she was shocked.
I won't say any more... though I want too, you'll have to read and find out ;)
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Burn
well i hope that she stick to her guns for a couple more chapters ! cant wati till the next chapter
Author's Response: Hey lanigirl95687,
She does... the motto of the story as I have told a few review is one step forward two back!
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Burn
Can't wait for more :) xx!
Author's Response: Hey gabthebomb1,
thanx.
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Traceyh (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Burn
Good little chapter! Poor edward! Cant wait to see how the cullens handle it though. Lovin jasper bringing up what bella said to aaron! Cant wait for carlise and esmes first encounter with the new angsty/stoner bella! please update again sn lookin forward to it!
Author's Response: Hey Traceyh,
Thanks.
I didn't think ppl would notice but thanx and I'm glad you liked Jasper being shocked. It's coming, they meet and OMG sparks...
I'll update as soon as I can.
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Burn
You're right, it was short! But hopefully now things can move forward! I'm interested to see what the Cullens are going to do next! Great job, please update again soon!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Hey ToTouchTheseInnocentLips,
I'm sorry it was short, things get moving, soon we learn more about both Bella and Edward. Thank you, thank you, thank you for your very kind comments.
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: RoseKnott (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Burn
I like this Bella !!!
Author's Response: Hey RoseKnott,
Thank you.
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Burn
Poor Cullens. Bella was really cruel. I hope they can get to her and make her understand.
Author's Response: Hey vampiremom1221,
Everyone seems split some hate Bella for being mean, some think the cullens are SO wrong... it's nice to see ppl get involved.
You'll have to wait and see.
I hope you are enjoying it so far.
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: 3kdz4me (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Burn
Too funny that Jasper mentioned what Bella said to Aaron! HA!
Author's Response: Hey 3kdz4me,
Yeah, he was shocked! Happy you liked it!
I hope you enjoy the teaser it is unedited by my beta, so please excuse any mistakes.
““What happened last night? It was fun, but why all the set changes?” Camille asked a little irked.
“My ex was there,” I muttered as poured my second cup of java.
“WHAT!” Camille screeched.
“Not, so loud” I whispered. My head was still pounding despite the Tylenol.
“Fine, whatever. This is THE EX?” Liza said, in what can only be described as a stage whisper.
“Yes, him,” I shrugged and went back to sipping my black coffee.
“Was this the asshole who left you alone in the pouring rain? The one whose name I don’t even know?” Lola roared.
“First off stop with the fucking yelling, I feel like my head might explode!” I wined.
“Secondly, is there anyone else? No, I have not dated anyone else. So yeah, he and his siblings where there,” I mumbled. ”
As always I want to say thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope you continue to read and review.
Thank you so very much.
Cheers,
~E
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