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Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Saturday's Performance

i love that Bella's friends/real family stood up for her. I hope that Bella can continue to stand up for herself when she is ganged up on by all of the rightous Cullens. Update soon.

Author's Response:

Hey tracey,

OMG 5 again... YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They are not all righteous, just two of them LOL.

I promise to update soon, i try for once a week, it depends on how long PTB takes to beta it and Twilighted takes to validate it!

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Saturday's Performance

Far too short...Love that she sang gives you hell....can't wait for the convo at the house...Post again soon please



Author's Response:

Hey Kmac17,

I hear that a lot, I might start running ch together, this was one of the longer ones though.

I'll post soon and yes the conversation takes place in two chs!

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

 

 

 

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:55 PM · On: War Rooms

I hope that Edward isn't going into this thinking it will be easy.

Author's Response:

Hey Tracey,

I think he does and it won't.

OMG 5 again WOW.

till next ch

~E

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Burn

so sad.

Author's Response:

I kinda agree.

5 wow, ur soo kind

till next ch

~E

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Sparks

Wow! Bella really got back at them some huh?

Author's Response:

hi Tracy,

 this is just the tip of the ice burg.

Again 5 stars, wow! thanks

till next chapter,

~E

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Saturday's Performance

Um, hello, clueless much, Cullens?

I'm sorry to see Bella fall into such a... state of disrepair, let's say... but I'm glad she doesn't let anyone push her around and make decisions for her. She's turned into what I imagine would be a human, uber-hard-partying form of Rosalie. Maybe they'll be able to relate to each other better now.

Enjoying the story and can't wait for the next installment.



Author's Response:

Hellow Screaming Mimi,

LOL the funny start to ur review made me smile.

Hmmmm never thought of it like that.....

I hope you enjoy what I have planned.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Showtime

All of the Cullens don't realize that they are all dumb asses, do they? hehehe I hope Bella tears them all a new one. :)

Author's Response:

Hi Tracy,

LMAO!!!!!

OMG 5 again, ur the best!

She will, she will.

Till next chapter,

~E

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Rough Day

You are an evil tease! hehehe Update soon. :)

Author's Response:

Hey tracy, there is more to read luckily. thank for the stars :)

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Alice

Ahhh, scheming little Alice. Gotta love her. hehehehe :)

Author's Response:

Hi again Tracy,

OMG another 5 star review, ur the best.

Yes, gotta love her :)

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

interesting first chapter. can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response:

Hi Tracey,

OMG thanks for the rating.

I hope you like the rest and that you share your thoughts along the way.

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: Forbidden_Romance (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Saturday's Performance

All the chapters up to now is great. I difinately  can't  wait until next chapter when bella unites with the rest of the family.



Author's Response:

Hey Forbidden_Romance,

Thank you. The next few chapters she sees the rest of the Cullens and we.... I can't give any more than that away.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Saturday's Performance

Bella telling Edward that she'll talk to him if he will promise not to bother her again is just another way of saying 'I love you, I miss you, please convince me to forgive you'.  She might be fooling herself, but she's not foiling me!! 

The Cullens are pissed me off with their judgemental, condescening attitude.  fix.them.please!

 

great chapter



Author's Response:

Hey colorado womean

I so appreciate your reviews.

It's not all the Cullen's it mostly Edward, he's from 1918 and she is a VERY different Bella then he left behind. I hope the next chapter redeems them some, I think in the coming chapters, you will see how much they love her and Edward will be delat with by a variety of people. Also, remember Alice means well.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: Traceyh (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

Great chapter! Cant wait to see what happens when bella arrives at the cullen house! Please update soon. Looking forward to it! :-)

Author's Response:

Hey Traceyh

Thank for the rating, it was amazing.

 

Thank you.

The update will be soon.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: Tweaker (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

Please tell me that Bella spits Edward's face next chapter and then hitchhikes back to the city? If she gives in to the irritating-as-all-hell-Alice and Emoward, I'll be so upset. I don't understand how they can leave without saying goodbye, never bother to see if she is alright, and then act all high and mighty about the way she lives her life. CULLENS SUCK!



Author's Response:

Hi Tweaker,

LOL I LOVED UR REVIEW!!!!!!!

Not quite, but I they will get what us coming to them so to speak, Edward especially from an unexpected source promise to stick with t the next fews chs are.

 

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: nitrogirl313 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

Love it so far. I can't wait for them to find out what happened either!!! Bet they won't be as eager then...



Author's Response:

Nitrogirl313,

Thanks I'm happy u love it, that means so much to me.

You are right and wrong, not the next ch but the one after we heard about her time away from the Cullens.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: nadia2706 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

very cool keep writing 



Author's Response:

Hey Nadia2706,

Thank you, I promise I will.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

I think Alice is a complete idiot. She left Bella; she doesn't get to call her family or trash the people who stood by her for those years when SHE wasn't there with her "sister".

I'm so tired of Edward's judgment of Bella; HE left so she could be human. HE doesn't get to tell her what kind of life she should have.



Author's Response:

Hey Brwrm,

I agree and the next 20 chs or they will be dealing with ALL of that.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

hey great chap i really really love this story !!!! i am glad she went with them but i would have still liked to see cammie kicking vampire butt either way XD



Author's Response:

Hey redredred,

THanks I'm so happy you're enjoying it!

Yeah she had to go, but that doesn't mean we are ANYWHERE near a reconciliation.

I'll see what I can do about Cammie kicking some but.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: CullenWinchester88 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

I really like this story and I can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Hi CullenWinchester88,

Thank you so much for the rating.

I'm very happy you like it and more is coming.

Until then here’s the teaser for ch 9:

 

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

I am SO hoping she hands them ALL their asses!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey viking,

She might....

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: annagardner11 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

I love it update soon



Author's Response:

Hey annagardener11,

Thanks, I'm so happy you love it.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Saturday's Performance

Can't wait for next chapter...loving the story so far. Bad as Bella..lol! :)



Author's Response:

Hey koolchick262003,

Thank you SO much.

Here’s the teaser:

 

“He opened the door, and it was like a portal. All of a sudden it was four years ago, and I was standing in the Forks house. His room here was almost identical to the old one— the one I spent so much time in hanging out, listening to music, and kissing him. The one glaring exception was the very large bed in the middle of the room. I hoped his distraction enjoyed it. I never warranted a bed because I was nothing more than a pet. As soon as he left I knew that James had been right when he called me that. I was like a dog that was not allowed to move with them. They didn’t even make sure I was okay or had a good home when they just cut me loose”

 

Thanks always for reading and reviewing.

 

Cheers,

 

~E

Reviewer: jmszas1979 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 09:10 PM · On: War Rooms

so hurry up with more chapters kid!!!!!!!!! i really like the story!! and happy halloween!!!!! if you celebrate it.... peace and bye!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey jmszas1979

OMG thanks for the rating.

The next chapter is out so i won't bother giving you a teaser. I'm so happy you like it.

Happy Halloween to you too

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 05:32 PM · On: War Rooms

more please... and longer chapters??? pretty please??



Author's Response:

Hey dnabgeek,

 

More will come soon it's in the QUE for validation as we speak, I think it has taken longer because of Halloween. I sent it in last week, so hopefully there will be more soon. Also, the next one is longer. promise!

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d

 

“This is the first time that I ever thought of Edward or Alice as leeches, as Jake used to say, but they were. It was not because they were vampires, but because they had the ability to bring back the pain I worked so hard to keep at bay. It was the pain that drained the life out of me.”

 

As always your review makes my day, thank  you again.

 

Cheers,

~E

Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 06:05 AM · On: War Rooms

...poor Emmett...he's the funnest but misses out unfairly...love your dialogue for him...am looking forward to how this plays out...at least E is gonna fight...about time!!!



Author's Response:

Hi again ised,

Sorry I answering all your reviews in one night but I've been a little behind.

Thank you again for the rating, it's amazng.

I love Em, and I love that you love how I write him. he'll fight. the next update should  be soon, it's in the validation Que..

 

Here is the teaser, it is un-beta’d

 

“This is the first time that I ever thought of Edward or Alice as leeches, as Jake used to say, but they were. It was not because they were vampires, but because they had the ability to bring back the pain I worked so hard to keep at bay. It was the pain that drained the life out of me.”

 

 

As always your review makes my day, thank  you again.

 

Cheers,

~E

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