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Reviewer: Andrewslove04912 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Morning Sunshine
OK WOAH! i fell behind and i'm so mad i missed all this lol. SOOO good. tragic, but i can't take my eyes off of it kinda thing
ps. hope my blog pimpage got you some new readers!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Morning Sunshine
Great Chap wow I mean just wow Bella not only opened the box she dumped it out. hahha I loved the cut throat honesty she threw in their face she has changed and now they need to figure out if the new Bella can be toned down or if the old Bella can come back... Post again soon
Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Morning Sunshine
Did Edward actually expect her to be a virgin? He said he didn't want her to miss out on her human life, well that includes sex.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
So where from here... Either a hard won road to winning back her affections or she'll just give in when there's face touching. I want her to throw shit at him to be honest (and that's only because if she hit him she'd break her hand). But that's just me.
Thanks for writing - I'm enjoying the story!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 10:12 AM · On: War Rooms
Edward's formerly 'charming' (aka patronizing and a little annoying) routine will not be working on this Bella...
Author's Response: Hey Beth Cullen,
You are SO right! thanks for the five starts... you rock!
Here is the teaser for the next chapter; it is un-beta’d so be kind.
Also this is in Esme’s point of view.
““Bella, dear, I know you’re sick of hearing this but I am so very sorry we left you.”
“I know” she paused “Now that it was not your idea. I don’t really blame you, Esme. I blame them.”
“Who?” I wanted her to say the words; maybe if she got some of this out she would react better to them in time.
“Edward and Alice. I know that Rose always hated me so it’s no surprise she probably championed the idea,”
How true she is, Rose didn’t want to move but had done it willingly to get rid of Bella.
“Emmett would follow her to the ends of the earth if need be,” she added.
“As Edward would for you,” I chimed in.
“Please never say that again, I don’t want to fight with you.””
Thank you for taking the time to read this story and then review. I so appreciate it, and it brightens my day.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Sparks
Arrogant ass to think he can just say sorry and erase years of heartache...
Author's Response: Hey beth culle,
I have to explain something about the response you revived first. I sent you the taser for those who read ch 10, the teaser is of ch 11. I usually check chapter by chapter for reviews but it's working and I didn't read which ch you were reading when I responded. Sorry about sending you the wrong teaser.
I agree it'll take more than that and thanks for the stars it's very kind of you. :D
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 09:59 AM · On: Showtime
damn. she is seriously pissed.
Author's Response: Hey again beth,
yes she is and remember hell hath no furry like a woman scored!
Thanks for the stars hon :)
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
How controlling Alice is. "Wear these clothes. Pretend to be the girl we left behind so we don't have to feel guilty!" Brat.
I'm getting the bad feeling Bella's about to pull the "I'm not worthy of you because I changed". Tell me that's not happening! Screw the Cullens. They left. They don't get to try and turn back the clock and turn Bella into the girl they left.
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
Very nice
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
First of all, I loved this chapter title. 'Morning, Sunshine' is pretty damn fitting. And loved, loved, loved the Walk of Shame kit. Shit, I wish I would have had one of those a 'few' times in my life! I was totally unprepared for those moments in life.
Bella's story is pretty much what I expected - except for the cutting...I didn't see that coming. She is really pulling out all the stops to protect herself, isn't she? I thought I'd see Bella's wall coming down a little bit in this chapter, but, nope, she just isn't giving an inch. I wonder how far she'll take this shock and awe approach when she finds out Edward isn't giving up. What else does Miss Bella have in her aresenal?
And the fucking Cullens continue to disappoint, except for my girl, Rose, of course. They are as arrogant as usual and think their sweet little innocent Bella will return if they give her enough love, pity and sympathy Sorry, folks, but that shit just isn't going to happen. I mean, for vampires, they are pretty naive. It always upset Edward that Bella had no sense of self-preservation...well, she has it now, dude, so deal with it.
Honestly, I don't know what Edward can do right now to get Bella back. He's going to have to go through some major personality revisions to pull it off - serving her toast and coffee and treating her like a pathetic little human just ain't gonna cut it. I love hard core, bitchy Bella, but, let's face it, she's not happy, she's just surviving. I'd like to see that girl feel joy again and get off the drugs and alcohol, but I'm just not seeing that happening right now. It's going to be a long journey for Bella to find a middle point and I can't wait to see how you pull this off.
see you next chapter.
Judy
xoxoxo
ps. OMG, I just thought of something. What if Bella overdoses and Edward has to turn her to save her life. That's kind of a horrible plot twist, isn't it? but interesting, no? I can't believe I thought of this. It's wonderful and sick all at the same time. Edward having to deal with an angry, resentful vampire Bella might be just what he deserves. Ha!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 08:55 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
Hey this was such a great chap =] it was so dramatic and it was great that she put everything in the open ! she has had such a hard few years =[ poor bella !
Reviewer: zannesg (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
Great chapter. I can hardly wait to hear what Rose has to say to Edward about all of this. Keep up the great work. :)
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
this is going to be interesting... i don't see edward giving up easily
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
I liked how Bella shocked them with her story. I think that its funny that Edward was more shocked at the birth control pills and condoms than the cocaine. Prude! hehehe Update soon. :)
Reviewer: Mants95 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
i like it. real creative and totally different.
Author's Response: Hey Mants95,
thanks I appreciate it and hope you like what's posted so far.
I also hope you keep review I love hearing everyone's thoughts.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: BELLAxMOMENT (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
I'm glad she finally told them! I can't wait to see where this leads!
Reviewer: _chaoz_ (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
well done again :) I like it, even though this gives us nothing we didn't already know about B and I loved the image of Em speechless at her confession of drug abuse.
cutting oneself is a touchy topic but used very well in this place as it is the first loosening of being the responsible and care-taker B was before, nice hook!
Edward has a huge mess to deal with! YEAH! :)
great, again left me drooling in anticipation (ok - might be a little exaggeration but you get the point ;) )
chaoz
Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
I'm not at all shocked at the admission. I'm actually shocked she had to say it out loud. Great chapter.
Reviewer: RoseKnott (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Morning Sunshine
She needs to give them more Hell!!! Love it!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 01:26 PM · On: You Can't Go Home Again
can't wait for more as always :)
Author's Response: Hey dnabgeek,
I'm so happy you enjoy my stories. so you know the next HR ch is already in the queue and should be up any day.
This is the teaser for ch 10. This scene is in Bella’s POV:
“Aspirin, a glass of water, jeans and a white t-shirt.
“I said, I didn’t need anything,” I told her and started to turn away.
“Yes, I have seen that you desperately need the Aspirin, so take it.” Her tone was harsh.
“No!” I knew I was acting like a petulant child, but it was what I needed to do to stay aloof and detached.
“Why are you making this so hard? Take the pills, Bella,” Alice repeated in a severe and loud tone.
“Fuck! Not so loud! Don’t take that tone with me, and why are you being a bitch?” I volleyed back at her.
“Excuse me? I’m trying to save you from a pounding migraine and you insult me? Take the pills or I will call Carlisle!” She looked menacing and stepped closer. I might not like it, but I knew that damned pixie vampire could overpower me and asking was just her way of humoring the human.”
Again thank you for taking the time to not only read but review.
Best,
~E
Reviewer: _chaoz_ (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 12:54 PM · On: You Can't Go Home Again
wow, this is my first review of your work because I wasn't able to stop reading before, of course now I'm dying to read more!
the content is really cool, interesting how your Bella changed this much and edward is... still so much the same at least it comes to me like that. I like the new Bella and I'll pick her side in case she decides to stay strong and independent even if she isn't really free from anything. humans aren't just always the same i'm against putting always the same as input and expecting always the same output (he comes back, smiles and everything is fine) in mrs meyer's story this is Bella's way, again I absolutely appreciate this change. and as edward is going to fight for her, maybe she is also going to fight for herself and let him work hard to cure him and her.
may be alice is a little too comforting quiet but she is also nice. i'm curious about rosalie and carlisle, how long will he be able to stand bella destroying her health?
emmett's pov's were funny, nearly exactly as I imagined them.
also I really like your style, i read some fanfiction in an other language and they were strongly disappointing, but yours is fluent, sound and even the changing povs are pushing the story rather than complicating it.
well this got longer than expected and I apologize for my English unfortunately it's not my native tongue, nevertheless I hope you like it. even though I didn't read any other reviews to get to know what the usual content of reviews is.
so, really well done!
I'm excited waiting for more and wishing you all the best
_chaoz_
Author's Response: Hey chaoz,
Thank you for this amazing review and the rating. I have to answer point by ponit, please hang in:
1) thank you, I'm so pleased ur hooked.
2)Vamps don't change, humans do. :)
3) I like her too, to me it seemed like she had an inner strength that was only ignored when it came to Edward. She needed to grow a spine.
4)I'm so happy u like the change, I agree with you totally.
5) A nice way to look at it, her curing him.... I must give that thought, maybe rewrite later chs. May I tell you the insight i get in reviews has made the story so much better. I have been blessed with ALL positive comments, but ones like yours give me new perspective, then I get all excited and re-write stuff. it makes it so much better. Thank you.
6) R & C and her health... another great idea.... I may have to ponder that. i like scene as it plays out (i think its chap 20 but it could be 18, I never remember) but it is food for thought.
7) Thanks, I love Em, he is FUN to write.So happy it worked out well. I'm always very nervous.
8) Thank you, I work hard on it and then go through the PTB betas to help me as well.
9) it was long and amazing, thank you for taking the time to write to me, I love it.
10) I would never have known English was not your native tongue, you write very well.
I would love to see you on the forum if thats your thing, there are only 2 of us on there but we love talking writing and stuff, please stop by if you have the chance it's on the AU board and the link was in the last ch.
This is the teaser for ch 10. This scene is in Bella’s POV:
“Aspirin, a glass of water, jeans and a white t-shirt.
“I said, I didn’t need anything,” I told her and started to turn away.
“Yes, I have seen that you desperately need the Aspirin, so take it.” Her tone was harsh.
“No!” I knew I was acting like a petulant child, but it was what I needed to do to stay aloof and detached.
“Why are you making this so hard? Take the pills, Bella,” Alice repeated in a severe and loud tone.
“Fuck! Not so loud! Don’t take that tone with me, and why are you being a bitch?” I volleyed back at her.
“Excuse me? I’m trying to save you from a pounding migraine and you insult me? Take the pills or I will call Carlisle!” She looked menacing and stepped closer. I might not like it, but I knew that damned pixie vampire could overpower me and asking was just her way of humoring the human.”
Again thank you for taking the time to not only read but review.
Best,
~E
Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 08:30 PM · On: You Can't Go Home Again
i like the new bitch bella:)keep her for a little longer please??:)
Author's Response: Hey twi-hard4ever,
5 stars... thanks :)
I like her too and she isn't going anywhere....
This is the teaser for ch 10. This scene is in Bella’s POV:
“Aspirin, a glass of water, jeans and a white t-shirt.
“I said, I didn’t need anything,” I told her and started to turn away.
“Yes, I have seen that you desperately need the Aspirin, so take it.” Her tone was harsh.
“No!” I knew I was acting like a petulant child, but it was what I needed to do to stay aloof and detached.
“Why are you making this so hard? Take the pills, Bella,” Alice repeated in a severe and loud tone.
“Fuck! Not so loud! Don’t take that tone with me, and why are you being a bitch?” I volleyed back at her.
“Excuse me? I’m trying to save you from a pounding migraine and you insult me? Take the pills or I will call Carlisle!” She looked menacing and stepped closer. I might not like it, but I knew that damned pixie vampire could overpower me and asking was just her way of humoring the human.”
Again thank you for taking the time to not only read but review.
Best,
~E
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 01:15 PM · On: You Can't Go Home Again
I think that there is so much pain on both sides. I don't know who is right or wrong. I think that it is a little of both. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hey Vampiremom1221,
There is pain and yeah I blame one party more. :)
Thanks more is on the way i put the next ch in for validation today so it could be up any time.
This is the teaser for ch 10. This scene is in Bella’s POV:
“Aspirin, a glass of water, jeans and a white t-shirt.
“I said, I didn’t need anything,” I told her and started to turn away.
“Yes, I have seen that you desperately need the Aspirin, so take it.” Her tone was harsh.
“No!” I knew I was acting like a petulant child, but it was what I needed to do to stay aloof and detached.
“Why are you making this so hard? Take the pills, Bella,” Alice repeated in a severe and loud tone.
“Fuck! Not so loud! Don’t take that tone with me, and why are you being a bitch?” I volleyed back at her.
“Excuse me? I’m trying to save you from a pounding migraine and you insult me? Take the pills or I will call Carlisle!” She looked menacing and stepped closer. I might not like it, but I knew that damned pixie vampire could overpower me and asking was just her way of humoring the human.”
Again thank you for taking the time to not only read but review.
Best,
~E
Reviewer: JasonGee (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 12:26 PM · On: You Can't Go Home Again
Don't go soft, Bella! This douchebag deserves every misery you can throw at him.
I hope Bella gives a nice fat eff you to Rose, also. She deserves her share, that's for sure.
I hope Bella mouths off to the family about how Charlie tried to have her committed and she cut him off, then storms out and leaves. That would cut up the Cullens more than anything she could insult them with.
Author's Response: Hey jason,
thanks for the stars, that was awesome.
Bella won't... not really and not yet (if ever) at least.
Jason, you are very close to the truth of what happens, that is all I will tell you! :)
This is the teaser for ch 10. This scene is in Bella’s POV:
“Aspirin, a glass of water, jeans and a white t-shirt.
“I said, I didn’t need anything,” I told her and started to turn away.
“Yes, I have seen that you desperately need the Aspirin, so take it.” Her tone was harsh.
“No!” I knew I was acting like a petulant child, but it was what I needed to do to stay aloof and detached.
“Why are you making this so hard? Take the pills, Bella,” Alice repeated in a severe and loud tone.
“Fuck! Not so loud! Don’t take that tone with me, and why are you being a bitch?” I volleyed back at her.
“Excuse me? I’m trying to save you from a pounding migraine and you insult me? Take the pills or I will call Carlisle!” She looked menacing and stepped closer. I might not like it, but I knew that damned pixie vampire could overpower me and asking was just her way of humoring the human.”
Again thank you for taking the time to not only read but review.
Best,
~E
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 06:28 PM · On: You Can't Go Home Again
she needs to string him along and then just leave like he did! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Hi lainigirl956787,
LOL what an idea... I'll take it into consideration.
HR Teaser for ch 10 of ch 11
This is the teaser for ch 11. This scene is in Bella’s POV:
“Aspirin, a glass of water, jeans and a white t-shirt.
“I said, I didn’t need anything,” I told her and started to turn away.
“Yes, I have seen that you desperately need the Aspirin, so take it.” Her tone was harsh.
“No!” I knew I was acting like a petulant child, but it was what I needed to do to stay aloof and detached.
“Why are you making this so hard? Take the pills, Bella,” Alice repeated in a severe and loud tone.
“Fuck! Not so loud! Don’t take that tone with me, and why are you being a bitch?” I volleyed back at her.
“Excuse me? I’m trying to save you from a pounding migraine and you insult me? Take the pills or I will call Carlisle!” She looked menacing and stepped closer. I might not like it, but I knew that damned pixie vampire could overpower me and asking was just her way of humoring the human.”
Again thank you for taking the time to not only read but review.
Best,
~E
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