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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 10:39 PM · On: It's A New Dawn, It's A New Day!
Squeee Great Chap. I am not sure how long she will stay sober but I dobt it will be for very long.... Hmmm I wonder if Alice will come home now and what will happen there. I worry about her relationship with Charlie will she see him before shes changed....will she live long enough to get changed? Post again soon so exciting!!! Happy New Year
Author's Response: Hey sarah,
I will tell you this... Alice is coming home. I've made up my mind about her seeing Charlie- that will be a wait and see on your part. What I have yet to decide is Renee.
Here is the teaser of ch 18 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“Then, we went back to our incredible kiss. Just before it was time for me to catch my breath again, he pulled away. I mourned the loss of his lips instantly, and I’m sure my expression showed it because he said in between pants, “Sorry, love, but some of my family are home.”
Firstly, I had made him pant! He doesn’t even need to breathe, and I had him panting! I knew I was good, but hot damn, that gives a girl an ego boost. Secondly, my stomach dropped— the Cullens were home. They had seen me in a fairly bad state last night, and well, I didn’t know how to act. I’m sure they have a low opinion of me anyway. But I didn’t give a fuck, or so I told myself. Also, I didn’t want to see that judgmental demon pixie. I was still mad at Alice for being an overbearing bitch, and that had not changed. I could feel my back arching, and I fought to not turn into super bitch Bella, again—not yet anyway.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: sheen97 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 10:32 PM · On: It's A New Dawn, It's A New Day!
i love it...i been waiting for this update it seems like forever...you are an amazing writer
Author's Response: Hey sheen97,
Thank you, thank you, and thank you.
Here is the teaser of ch 18 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“Then, we went back to our incredible kiss. Just before it was time for me to catch my breath again, he pulled away. I mourned the loss of his lips instantly, and I’m sure my expression showed it because he said in between pants, “Sorry, love, but some of my family are home.”
Firstly, I had made him pant! He doesn’t even need to breathe, and I had him panting! I knew I was good, but hot damn, that gives a girl an ego boost. Secondly, my stomach dropped— the Cullens were home. They had seen me in a fairly bad state last night, and well, I didn’t know how to act. I’m sure they have a low opinion of me anyway. But I didn’t give a fuck, or so I told myself. Also, I didn’t want to see that judgmental demon pixie. I was still mad at Alice for being an overbearing bitch, and that had not changed. I could feel my back arching, and I fought to not turn into super bitch Bella, again—not yet anyway.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: as63926 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 10:25 PM · On: It's A New Dawn, It's A New Day!
I'm betting she wont stay sober for long, professional opinion. Great chapter...
Author's Response: Hi as63926,
Thanks for the rating.
LOL...wait and see.
HR Ch 17 teaser of Ch 18
Here is the teaser of ch 18 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“Then, we went back to our incredible kiss. Just before it was time for me to catch my breath again, he pulled away. I mourned the loss of his lips instantly, and I’m sure my expression showed it because he said in between pants, “Sorry, love, but some of my family are home.”
Firstly, I had made him pant! He doesn’t even need to breathe, and I had him panting! I knew I was good, but hot damn, that gives a girl an ego boost. Secondly, my stomach dropped— the Cullens were home. They had seen me in a fairly bad state last night, and well, I didn’t know how to act. I’m sure they have a low opinion of me anyway. But I didn’t give a fuck, or so I told myself. Also, I didn’t want to see that judgmental demon pixie. I was still mad at Alice for being an overbearing bitch, and that had not changed. I could feel my back arching, and I fought to not turn into super bitch Bella, again—not yet anyway.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 10:14 PM · On: It's A New Dawn, It's A New Day!
I loved everything about this chapter! Excellent job!
My guess is Bella will stay sober for half a chapter (two at the most...hopefully she'll make it for two). Edward is right-Bella has a problem and uses alcohol, drugs ect. when she's upset. It will take some time before Bella can be completely sober for a length of time.
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Hey Bella_Cullen884,
Thanks for the awesome star rating.
Ye of little faith-- it might be more than that. and yes, they have a LONG road ahead of them.
HR Ch 17 teaser of Ch 18
Here is the teaser of ch 18 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“Then, we went back to our incredible kiss. Just before it was time for me to catch my breath again, he pulled away. I mourned the loss of his lips instantly, and I’m sure my expression showed it because he said in between pants, “Sorry, love, but some of my family are home.”
Firstly, I had made him pant! He doesn’t even need to breathe, and I had him panting! I knew I was good, but hot damn, that gives a girl an ego boost. Secondly, my stomach dropped— the Cullens were home. They had seen me in a fairly bad state last night, and well, I didn’t know how to act. I’m sure they have a low opinion of me anyway. But I didn’t give a fuck, or so I told myself. Also, I didn’t want to see that judgmental demon pixie. I was still mad at Alice for being an overbearing bitch, and that had not changed. I could feel my back arching, and I fought to not turn into super bitch Bella, again—not yet anyway.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Reunion
I think that he is definitely trying to be better for her. He is just as nervous as her. Now that they are both "adults" that he would be willing to sleep with her. He now knows that his semen cannot hurt her and I think that by now, he has enough control to risk her life. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING AND HAPPY NEW YEAR. Sher
Author's Response: Hey serrilovesedward,
He is trying for the better. you are on to my master plan.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: JasonGee (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
I think Bella should have whipped out a camera phone, taken snaps of Jake and Edward, and had the owner hang 'em up and ban them from the goddamned bar! Does "Leave me alone" take a frockin' master's degree to understand?
Bella should become a lesbian. Men of all species are obviously without merit.
Author's Response: Hey JasonGee,
Thanks for the star rating-- you rock!
LMAO such a good idea...damn it! LOL I love your reivew.
LOL men of "all species" LMAO.
I have no words I just love this review, I'm having a hard day and well you made me actually laugh and smile so thanks.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Reunion
This story is fantastic! I've been neglecting my children all morning catching up with it :D
Author's Response: Hey BaileyMac,
Thank so much. LOL I'm sorry it's distracting you.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Reunion
Yea, yea, Jake's an asshole. What else is new? I'm SO happy that Bella has finally started down the path to giving Edward a chance! And he really needs to own up to his insecurities. That is a HUGE miscommunication on their part. I can't wait for the next chapter!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Hey Jazz,
yeah jake is an ass, moving on lol.
Yes she is trying and so is he.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Morning Sunshine
This is so powerful:"Hamartia. I gave us our name because you were my fatal flaw—loving you brought about my downfall."
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Reunion
Wow, everything changed in this chapter...everything! Well, except for Bella's drinking and drugging.
Holy shit, Edward is growing on me!! ha, ha. I like Edward's new approach. No manipulating, no big plan, no judging. He surrendered to it all...it's like he said to himself 'it is what it is' and kind of accepted the entire crappy situation. But he's still there for her, except he's not pushing so hard. He's offering his love and seems ready to wait for her to accept it and trust him, if she ever does. I like the way Bella seemed to respond to it - she seemed to feel safer with him than she ever has. So maybe this is the turning point for them?
what do I think of Jacob. he's just a whiny pain in the ass. not a Jacob fan at all. Send him back to LaPush, ok? immediately! and don't let him leave again. hee, hee, hee.
Have a great holiday, sweetie, and a happy, happy new year.
Judy
xoxoxo
Author's Response: Hey Judy,
LOl I know everything did change, but will it revert back?
YES! YES! YES! EDWARD IS GROWING ON YOU! WOOOHOOO! sorry but it made me ridiculously happy,
He is trying to make the best of it all, but he's not a doormat either, remember that.
I hope it is a turing point.
LOl something else we have in common I hate Jake. I don't think we'll see him again though there is a slight chance we might get a cameo in a future chapter....WAY down the line, but probably not.
I hope you had a great holiday too, so (if u celebrate it) Merry belated Christmas.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: alic123fan (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Reunion
ogh my god you should really write anoher chapter i really want to see wat will happen to them will they get back together or wat. ang i am really begging you to please write another chapter or two.
Author's Response: Hey Alic123fan,
thanks for the great star rating.
LOl the next chapter is in the queue and should be up any day.
The story is FAR from over.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: Andrewslove04912 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Reunion
woah i think i fell a bit behind! whoops. looks like i came back right on time though! i can not even BEGIN to tell you how ecstatic i am that they're back on good speaking terms!
Author's Response: Hey katie,
YAY! Happy you're back and enjoying the story.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: twihardacctant (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Reunion
I knew it was Jake! I think that Edward is not done with his open-mouth-insert-foot problem quite yet and Bella definitely has some deep anger issues to work thru but this was definitely a step in the right direction. I like the adult versions of both but they need to continue to work the honesty!!!! Keep going-I look forward to you postings!!!!!
Author's Response: Get twihardacctan,
Thanks for the amazing star rating and yeah u were right.
It is a step in the right direction but yeah he's trying but it might not always be enough.
I'm so happy you like them growing up a little bit.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: kkmomo3 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Reunion
Well, Jake was a prick, but he had always tried to push himself onto Bella. I'm actually happy knowing that Bella is going to give ole Eddie a chance-though she drffinately needs to keep her backbone in tact.
Author's Response: Hey kkmomo3,
lol yes Jake is a prick and that is all true.
she won't lose her backbone that is for sure.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: vegivamp (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Reunion
it will work out they just need to talk and it wasnt a surprise that it was jacob what did shock me was what he said to her i was what the hell? i like when bella and edward fight
Author's Response: Hey vegivamp,
LOL you like when they fight? I'm glad you enjoy it. I think that's who Jake is, he is an ass and acts like one when he doesn't get his way.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: Traceyh (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Reunion
Great chapter! I knew it would be jake! What a prick! I am glad bella got him told! I loved the interaction between bella and edward in this chapter, its nice to see them starting to make some progress! I think it is certainly gettin closer to bella forgivin edward! I think he deserves to be forgiven now. I would love to see some bella/emmett, bella/jasper interaction, i always think their really cute with bella! Lookin forward to your next update, please update again sn!! :-D
Author's Response: Hey Traceyh,
Thank so much, and thank you so much for the awesome star rating and for always reading, reviewing and rating. It means so much that you consistently do all three and I wanted to make sure you knew it. Yeah it was a little on the nose that it was Jake, but it needed t be done. He is a prick, I've never liked him as a character very few fan fics in my opinion make him likable and redeemed and this is not one of those lol. I' m happy bella told him off too, because she never seems to be able to do that.
Yeah it's nice seeing them being a wee bit less angsty.
wait and see, wait and see.
You think he should be forgiven now too? YAY!
There will be a little Bella/EM but mainly...oh wait I can't tell you, you have to wait and see.lol
The next ch is in the validation queue, so it's just a waiting game now.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Reunion
XD sorry i forgot to say happy christmas !!!!!(if you celebrate it) and a happy new year
Author's Response: Hey Red,
I do and Merry (belated) Christmas to you too, hope it was great.
Happy new year,
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Reunion
Hey this was a great chap i am glad we heard bella talk to her friend i really loved it cause it really let bella talk things out without putting up a front !
Author's Response: Hey Red,
Thanks SOOOOOO much. Exactly she needs someone.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: farsidelady (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Reunion
Very good chaper. Carlise is trying to get Edward to become more physical with Bella - that was no misplaced piece of paper!!! Keep up with the very good story line. I love reading about a more developed and mature Edward and Bella.
Author's Response: Hey farsidelady,
Thanks so much.LOl ur the only one that picked up on that-- wait and see.
I'm so happy ur liking this story.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: 3kdz4me (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Reunion
I like the way things played out with Jake. I also like that Bella's heart seems to be softening a little.
Author's Response: Hey 3kdz4me,
I'm happy you agreed with my treatment of Jake, I was nervous. Let's say she might be melting to Edward's charms.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: inge80 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Reunion
If I could be anywhere near that fucker I would love to rip his head off his body. What a fucking asshole. I really wish sometimes I knew how to swear in English because not being able to say what I think sucks. Besides, my swearing in Dutch won’t be as impressive…
Jake really got on my nerves. What an blind fucker. Sorry, I’m so angry after reading that part!!! And no, I wasn’t surprised it was Jake. To tell you the truth that was the first thing that I thought of when I read about Alice’s vision. When they thought that something else might’ve happened since she drank so much and the drugs she took… I thought ‘okay, that’s also a possibility…’
I would be able to forgive him in time. He has some serious making up to do but I would forgive him. Besides, she loves him way to much!
And although I do understand why Bella went down this road over the four years, she isn’t an angel either. She also made stupid mistakes. Whoring around, because if you are honest, she is whoring around, isn’t the wisest thing to do either.
Oh, I really loved the song in the previous chapter. The one about the past four years… I also think it’s good that Jake showed Edward what Bella was like when they left and after what he said to her.
Even though he already is very sorry and had to take it all from his family, it’s good to know what really happened to her. She wouldn’t be in this mess if he hadn’t done and said the things he did.
You did a great job with this chapter and the first step in the RIGHT direction. Although I agree about the not yet talking about things, this should happen though. They can’t start a new future together without dealing with everything. But I also agree that it is wise to wait a while.
I’m so wondering how she’ll respond to the rehab/detox whatever you call it… I guess it’ll be hard for her to stop this addiction.
God I really hope they are able to keep up this little truce they have now.
So yeah, LOVED IT!!! can’t wait to read more! :)
~Inge~
Author's Response: Hey inge
Ok so I'm going point by point though your amazing and long review!
1)LOL you want to swear in Dutch at Jake, I so LOVE IT!!!!! WOOHOO!
2)I know Jake was a wee bit obvious but yeah I wanted it to be at least hazy on what it was. Yeah he was an ass, I so hate Jake.
3) She does love him she just has to deal with it. Also, just because they love each other they still might have issues with working it out.
4) It was not the smartest thing to do but one reader said it right, she had love and lust with Edward, he left, she thought their love was a lie but lust she could have. It made her feel something, something that was not just resentment and pain.
5) EDelta88 did a great job with that, I was complaining on the forum that no song fit perfectly and he gave me that it was an amzing thing for him to do.
6) Jake had to show Edward, however I still really hate Jake, and doubt we'll be seeing him again.
7)Exactly, Edward needs to face what he did to her and seeing it first hand did help make it more real, though I doubt he can hate himself more than he already does.
8)They'll talk, it might not resolve anything/everything but they will talk.
9) not well, that is all I'll say.
I'm so happy you love it!
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Reunion
Wow, TotallyJerk!Jacob and InFuryPermissionGiving!Jacob :)
Author's Response: Hey peregrin,
LOL loved you review it made me smile. Thanks for the amazing star rating!
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: mikka (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Reunion
Jacob was an asshole. That's all I gotta say. I hope it's a new beginning for Bella and Edward. That Bella realizes she needs help and that doesn't mean she's weak. That Edward needs to be there for her and to realize that Bella is an adult and not a child. He needs not to dictate but support her. Anyhoo, I love your story so far can't wait for the updates. Happy Holidays!!!!
Author's Response: Hey mikka,
Yes, jake was an ass. I agree, so happy you did too! lol
It might be....I can't confirm or deny that.
Bella seeing she needs help...yeah...not yet maybe not ever.
You nailed Edward thought, you are right on the money with what he needs to do, the question is can he do it?
Thanks so much.
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Reunion
I CANNOT believe how much of an ass Jake was!!! What was that?!? I really cannot believe that Edward didn't rip the mutt a new one either! Awww...we also made baby steps towards a full reunion! See ya next time and happy holidays!
Author's Response: Hey viking,
I'm team Edward and have never liked Jake, so that is what that was all about. Edward was afraid that Bella might get hurt if he had tried to hurt Jake, but there is a slight chance they might run into each other again... might.
Yup, baby steps but will it last?
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Reunion
I love this story. Great segue way into them getting along better. Can't wait to see what's next. Thanks for updating quickly too.
Author's Response: Hey mystic,
thanks for the awesome star rating.
I'm so happy u like the little shift that occurred, the queston is how long will it last?
Here is the teaser of ch 17 as promised it is Bella’s POV:
“I awoke from my nap and found myself alone in Edward’s room. There were two emotions warring within me: the first was relief, as I had to think some shit over and was grateful to be alone. The second was disappointment.
Why are you disappointed? Wasn’t it you that yelled at him this morning? You’ve kicked him out of here before, not to mention you have some serious resentment and anger issues toward him, I chided myself.
I guess I wanted to see his face. He seems hopeful, and for some reason it makes me happy.”
I hope you enjoyed the teaser. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also review this story, I appreciate it more than you know.
Happy New Year,
~E
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