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Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 03:59 PM · On: Seasons of Love
Mixed emotions is how I feel. I understand people going off the wagon, but I got the vibe that Bella is a lot stronger than this, so I'll be disappointed if she spills tears in her drinks sort of speak. Maybe she should call her thearapist or something. Aren't recovered alcholics supposed to have sponsers for when they run into problems like this?
Incidentally, Bella's actions thus far should trigger a vision from Alice, so it'll be interesting to see how she handles it. Hmmm... the question is, how should she handle it? I think Alice will be tested here... I think Edward will be tested here as well... but most of all, I think Bella will be tested the most.
I'm going out on a limb here and say Bella DOES NOT give into her temptation... I'm also predicting that Alice does not share her vision with Edward, but even if he saw it unintentionally, he would know enough to stay back and let her come to terms with this herself.
As usual - I thank you for your incredible talent. I'm glad to know that we'll see Bella with red eyes in this story some time in the future. :-)
Author's Response: Hey JR,
I'm so happy when I see your reviews...thanks for the amazing star rating.
She does have a sponsor it's Rose...Bella is struggling but...have faith.
Alice will be address she's not intentionally letting Bella deal with life on her own. Edward is being tested here.
Yes, if all goes as planned we might have another 6-10 chs...but I thought this story would be 20 chs long so what do I know. lol
This ch is un-beta’d and subject to change.
“Bella POV
I know this’ll help. It’s what I need. Can I take the plunge? Can I do this? I’ve done it countless times before, but there is a sense of uncertainly now. I know once I sit in that chair I’ve committed to this path. There’ll be no going back, I mentally battled with myself.
With a deep breath I decided to take the plunge.
No looking back, Bella. No remorse, do what you want…what you need. Hmmmm…what will Edward think…no do what you want. Remember this is your life.
I sat for a while taking in my surroundings and the eclectic group of people that were all gathered around for the same purpose.
I wait my turn patiently and then I dive into the deep end headfirst. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments are so really appreciated.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 03:06 PM · On: Seasons of Love
Oh no!!!!!! Oh my goodness! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Hey EL,
Working on getting the next ch up.
This ch is un-beta’d and subject to change.
“Bella POV
I know this’ll help. It’s what I need. Can I take the plunge? Can I do this? I’ve done it countless times before, but there is a sense of uncertainly now. I know once I sit in that chair I’ve committed to this path. There’ll be no going back, I mentally battled with myself.
With a deep breath I decided to take the plunge.
No looking back, Bella. No remorse, do what you want…what you need. Hmmmm…what will Edward think…no do what you want. Remember this is your life.
I sat for a while taking in my surroundings and the eclectic group of people that were all gathered around for the same purpose.
I wait my turn patiently and then I dive into the deep end headfirst. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. It really means a lot to me to hear from you. Know that your feedback and comments are so really appreciated.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 11:54 AM · On: Freedom
Squeeee what a lemon what a welcome home and what a thought process!!! I can't wait for more! I wonder if Tanya will show up to Rosalie and Ems weddinga nd that would totally lighta spark under Bellas ass to claim Edward as not only her mate but as her husband muah ahahaha Come on Team Bella we need her to see herself as worthy and what better way then to confront Tanya Edwards unrequited love interest hahahaha
Author's Response: Hey Sarah,
You liked the lemon? I tried my best. Not sure about Tanya i'm on the fence when it comes to her. She may not need Tanya to feel right by Edward's side.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 04:42 PM · On: Through a Parent's Eyes
I can't fathom how Carlisle can blame Charlie and Renee for their hatred of his family. He's seen the effects of how the Cullens treated her, and that's only in hindsight. Charlie and Renee lived through it, and they are worn out. You are surprisingly short-sighted, Doctor C.
Author's Response: Hey gold,
I don't think he balmes them for hating them, but it has to be hard to hear.
I hope you keep reading and that I you review again soon.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2012 08:25 PM · On: Freedom
Yay she's home! This chapter was so sweet! Great job, can't wait for more!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Hey Jazz,
Yay she's home!
Sweet? Perfect, thank you for that.
More is coming.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: First of May (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 10:53 AM · On: Freedom
Great chapter, worth the wait, but update again asap! Loved the lemon, just lemony enough. Actually you could have elaborated on more of the "christenings". Hehe.
Author's Response: Hey May,
Thanks so much....the next update is in the works.
Really? I was worried about the lemon. I wanted to write more about the "Christenings" but it seemed over the top and the ch was getting too long...more lemon in the next one I'll tell you that.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 09:00 AM · On: Freedom
Woo hoo. Out of rehab, on with life. I like the "why marriage" chat between the ladies. I don't expect things to be miraculously all better for Bella, but I sure hope she is able to start thinking more positively now, even in baby steps.
Author's Response: Hey Mimi,
LOL I LOVED THIS REVIEW.
She is making progress and it will be a struggle.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 03:46 PM · On: Freedom
I am so glad for this update. I love that she has accepted responsibility & with it accepted the help she needed. The girls put the whole marriage thing in a good perspective. I look forward to the talk she has with Edward.
Great Chapter!
Author's Response: Hey Rg,
Really? Thanks. It is nice to see bella stepping up. The teaser hints at thier talk.
Thank you for the awesome star rating and the compliment.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 04:51 PM · On: Freedom
Good to see them happy...
Author's Response: Hey artri,
Thanks you for the amzing star rating.
yes, it is lovely to see them happy.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 08:17 AM · On: Freedom
I'm starting to see closure with this tale, and after 45 chapters and nearly 300,000 words I can't say as I blame you. It would have been nice to see her become a vampire, but it appears it will be a wedding ceremony. :-)
Anyway, there's always the epilogue.
Thanks for sharing your tremendous talent!
Author's Response: Hey JR,
I have to say I always look forward to your reviews thank you for giving me one and the awesome star rating.
We'll see her become a vamp and there is still a little more story to come.
Your words humble me.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 03:10 AM · On: Freedom
LOL, you've almost turned Bella into Harry Potter (I'm talking about the first few paragraphs). In fact, I believe that it would be a good idea if you wrote a HP fanfic and posted it on ff.net. You could dissect Harry's daemons just like you've dissected Bella's.
Author's Response: Her P,
Thanks for the amazing review and star rating.
I've never read Harry Potter or seen the movies so this is just conincidence.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: violetvirgo79 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 09:44 PM · On: Freedom
That was one great chapter. When I read Bella taking responsibility for her actions, I said "YES!!" out loud. The lemon was very arrousing, to say the least. Job well done. I love this story so damn much.
~LL
Author's Response: Hey LL,
WOW you reviewed here and on FF...so sweet of you. Thanks for the awesome star rating.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 07:12 PM · On: Freedom
I loved everything about this chapter! It was wonderful to see Bella with Edward at their house and with the rest of family.
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Hey Bela,
Thanks for the amazing review and star rating.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 06:17 PM · On: Freedom
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Hey lani,
Thanks it should be soon.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Azalyn Branegan (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 05:55 PM · On: Freedom
What another great chapter. It seems Bella is finally realizing what life should be. Great job!
Author's Response: Hey Azalyn,
Thanks for the amazing star rating and the review.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 04:57 PM · On: Freedom
Sounds like Bella's warming to the idea of marriage.
Author's Response: Hey mom,
Thanks for the amazing star rating.
All I will say is read the teaser.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 04:24 PM · On: Freedom
Hey E: Glad you are back. I absolutely loved this chapter. I am glad that Edward got so carried away because is usually so reserved. The lemon was good, but maybe next time, be a little more descriptive. I would love to see Bella make Edward so dam horney that he really lets his hair down. No matter how kinky they get, he would never hurt her. I wish that I had a signed gituar signed by all the beatles. My husband would love it. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Oh....I can finally leave a review. I had to change my Internet Browser. TTYL
Author's Response: Hey Sher,
OMG a review here so happy ur new browser is working!
I'm thrilled you liked the ch. I'm trying with the lemon...I'm a newbie to writting this way.
I want that guitar too. ;)
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 03:53 PM · On: Freedom
glad that bella's finally free of the clinic and her parents (hopefully) :) loved that Edward and Bella just spent time together when she got out
Author's Response: Hey Tracey,
Thanks for the kind words and amazing star rating.
I'm happy she's free as well...maybe on the parents wait and see.
I knwo they needed the time to themselves.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 03:39 PM · On: Freedom
long time no see....:) I'm glad you're back. I always enjoy your chapters. I liked how much you covered in this chapter
Author's Response: Hey Toni,
I know it's been some time, so sorry for that.
Thank you so much.
Edward POV
“I told her that we went to see Rose’s gift but refused to say what it was. I then asked her how the wedding preparations were going and was filled in about seating plans and flower arrangements. Bella seemed oddly excited about the mundane details of the wedding. She was always interested, but there had been a certain amount of aloofness present. Therefore, I had to wonder what caused this change of heart.
“You seem very enthusiastic about planning this wedding…I’m surprised.”
“Me too. At first, I was just happy to be with them and planning something that made Rose happy…but then we started talking and…I get it now,” she said the last part softly as if choosing her words carefully. When she bit her lip and started looking at her hands, I knew she was nervous about wherever this was going. It was hard to not hope that maybe she was starting to embrace the idea of marriage.
“You ‘get’ what now?” I asked, trying to keep hope and excitement out of my voice, but failing miserably.
“I was talking to them about why they would get married at all, if they believe they truly are mated and know it’s forever…” she said tentatively. ”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this story. I’m sorry the updates have been slow, however RL has put more demands on my time of late.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Applegirl (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
hey its been a while I love your story are you gonna be updating?
Author's Response: Hey Apple,
Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner, I haven't had the time. ch 46 is beta'd but might need another go through and 47 is being written. Please hang in there.
I hope you are enjoying the story and continue to read and review.
Thank you for taking the time to comment.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: Kiki (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2012 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yeah, I really like the chapter !
I do a little writing of my own, but it won't be allowed here on Twilighted for some reason I can't quite figure out.
Well, anyways, if you ever need any help, or anything at all, just ask for help and I'll be there !
X
Author's Response: Hey Kiki,
I'm happy you enjoyed ch one.
It's hard to make the twilighted cut, I might suggest you get a beta to help. Project Team Beta they are amazing and that is how I foudn my dynamic duo.
Thank you very much for the offer.
I'm assuiming you read ch 1 not 44...but I'm not sure. If you would like a teaser just DM me or leave another revuew.
Thanks for reading and Reviewing it means a lot to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 01:14 PM · On: Torture
Hey i loved this chapter so much it was soo great i am soo glad she made a step forward with alice !
Author's Response: Hey Red,
WOW thanks so much.
Yeah Bella and Alice had to make up sooner or later.
I’m so sorry this is late, but I couldn’t pick a teaser until the chapter was complete.
This teaser is un-beta’ed and subject to change.
Bella POV
“Let’s move on to a more pleasant subject. Since you’re cutting off communication with me next week, what would like to do when you’re released?” he asked, the light that had left his eyes when we discussed my family having returned.
“I hadn’t really thought about what we’d do, just that I would be able to leave,” I admitted.
Edward then started discussing the various scenarios he came up with. His plans were detailed and well thought out. They encompassed everything from a weekend getaway at a hotel to leaving the country for three days. He knew that my being released on the Friday would mean that Monday I had to attend my meetings, so he took all that into account.
“I know you’ve put a lot of thought into this…but I think I would really like to just go to our house. No fancy dinner, just us.”
“I like the way you think,” he replied, then brushed a piece of his unruly hair out off his forehead.
I hope you enjoyed the teaser.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, it means the world to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 12:15 PM · On: Working Through the Steps
Wow this was an amazing chapter ! i cant believe how renee acted and i didnt expect the phil story !!! x
Author's Response: Hey Red,
Awww thank you.
I'm happy I was able to surprise you.
I'm not giving you a teaser because the next ch is already up.
Thank you for your kind words, support and that you continue to read and review.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: VampiresWife (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2012 12:20 AM · On: Torture
I absolutely LOVED reading this story. I cannot wait for the next chapter. You truly are a fantastic writer and always keep me wanting to read more.
Author's Response: Hey VW,
WOW thanks so much. The next ch shoudl be soon.
I’m so sorry this is late, but I couldn’t pick a teaser until the chapter was complete.
This teaser is un-beta’ed and subject to change.
Bella POV
“Let’s move on to a more pleasant subject. Since you’re cutting off communication with me next week, what would like to do when you’re released?” he asked, the light that had left his eyes when we discussed my family having returned.
“I hadn’t really thought about what we’d do, just that I would be able to leave,” I admitted.
Edward then started discussing the various scenarios he came up with. His plans were detailed and well thought out. They encompassed everything from a weekend getaway at a hotel to leaving the country for three days. He knew that my being released on the Friday would mean that Monday I had to attend my meetings, so he took all that into account.
“I know you’ve put a lot of thought into this…but I think I would really like to just go to our house. No fancy dinner, just us.”
“I like the way you think,” he replied, then brushed a piece of his unruly hair out off his forehead.
I hope you enjoyed the teaser.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, it means the world to me.
Cheers,
~E
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 11:15 AM · On: Torture
WOW! Lots packed into this chapter. I really like how things came down. Very real and believable. I'm so glad I've followed this story! Its so unique and heart-stopping. After all this I hope there's a good HEA!! :)
Happy V-Day E!
Author's Response: Hey Nan,
Happy belated V-Day and thanks.
WOW thanks...yeah there will be a HEA it was always planned that way but we still have more story to tell.
I’m so sorry this is late, but I couldn’t pick a teaser until the chapter was complete.
This teaser is un-beta’ed and subject to change.
Bella POV
“Let’s move on to a more pleasant subject. Since you’re cutting off communication with me next week, what would like to do when you’re released?” he asked, the light that had left his eyes when we discussed my family having returned.
“I hadn’t really thought about what we’d do, just that I would be able to leave,” I admitted.
Edward then started discussing the various scenarios he came up with. His plans were detailed and well thought out. They encompassed everything from a weekend getaway at a hotel to leaving the country for three days. He knew that my being released on the Friday would mean that Monday I had to attend my meetings, so he took all that into account.
“I know you’ve put a lot of thought into this…but I think I would really like to just go to our house. No fancy dinner, just us.”
“I like the way you think,” he replied, then brushed a piece of his unruly hair out off his forehead.
I hope you enjoyed the teaser.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, it means the world to me.
Cheers,
~E
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