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Reviewer: T Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow... This is good.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: isis_girl (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really liked your story. It is really hard to find good stories about carlisle and esme. It was amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much!
Reviewer: Just4Me (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was just WAY too much fun! Carlisle and Esme are my favorites - and you did a great job showing their sexy side Hope you do more about them. I'm going right now to check your other stories.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I really like Carlisle and Esme, but I pretty much like anybody. They all have their interesting quirks. I don't have many stories yet, just another one over at ff.net, but I hope you like.
Reviewer: famousmercury (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great job:)
Author's Response: Thanks so very much!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Congratulations, sweetie! I think you did a fantastic job. I've always been interested in Carlisle and Esme's relationship - it seems so solid yet very sexy. Thanks for - er - fleshing it out for us. ;) Hope to read more work from you. Do you have anything else in the works?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! They happened to be a convenient couple for my elevator plot, but I do find Carlisle very fascinating. As for other works, I have about four or five parts of stories going. I haven't settled on what I want to submit yet. Plots vary from down right dirty to bizarrely hilarious. Read that as threesomes, summer hook-ups and flings to Bella the zombie killer. Mmm, there's an idea right there! Combine all three! Oh and I did have a special story for Carlisle, but that would be a monster of a plot line and read more like an action/adventure story, something I have never written. I usually do dark melodramatic romance with a slight ironical humor. But I do hope to settle on one or two ideas more firmly.
Anyway, thanks again for reading and the rating!
R.
Grayskiesatdawn
Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
ow yeah!!! elevator sex- nice one! but if u r not a vamp- don't try it- not much time!!
Author's Response: Definitely! And if I were stuck in an elevator-THAT would be the last thing on my mind. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Carlisle in an elevator? Oh my! That was H-O-T!
Author's Response: I know :) Wouldn't mind getting stuck in an elevator if he was there!
Reviewer: Rainly (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was remarkably sweet and funny at the same time, without overemphasizing the dirtier sections. You had a really strong balance of the two so it still remained a legitimate story. (Read: That's impressive.)
The only critique I have is that the few paragraphs introducing the elevators were a little rough around the edges. Didn't know there was so much to elevators and their safety to think about, really. But all in all this was a fun read and it definitely did not seem like a first attempt and nor should it be your last. Happy writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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