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Reviewer: cb81594 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 06:08 PM · On: Lost Cause

I really like this..are you going to continue writing?

Reviewer: riotgirl2005 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Lost Cause

so far im liking this story! please keep with it! :)

Reviewer: zannesg (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Lost Cause

I am really enjoying your story. I like that Cassie is not afraid to stand up to Edward. I can hardly wait to see his reaction to her painting. Keep up the great work and update as soon as you can. :)

Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Open Book

AWWWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NNNNOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOOOOVEEEEEEEEED IIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE CASSIE! LOVE SAVANNAH!!!!!!!! LLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOVVVVEEEEEEE EDWARDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Neea (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Open Book

Nice work!

I looove the attitud and thats she's good at lying....

Cause thats makes the ordinary bella who is nice and shy, looks so damn Booorig!

Keep on in that way and you will go from someone to a star..

Love �”�Neea

Author's Response:
Awww thank you, that really means a lot to me (:

Reviewer: pie2moon2 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 03:20 AM · On: Open Book

Dear Author,

The story line is great and your writing is remarkable yet i truly believe it could be better.

Now I can't tell you that I'm the best writer around as I'm too afraid to post my works/ However, I firmly believe your story could use some editing. What I'm suggesting is, if you wish, I would be more than happy to edit this story for you.

I await your answer eagerly.

Sincerely,

pie2moon2

Author's Response:
That'd be really friggin awesome. I know that I need help with editing and stuff...but how could you help me? I mean, how do we like...sort it all out? I've never written fanfiction, and no one's really ever read my stories except for like...one friend. I'd really appreciate it if you could help me. And I want to thank you for bringing up my mistakes in a nice way. Some people will just say "oh you made grammar mistakes, you suck" and that like...tears down my confidence. See, I'm kinda like you. I'm afraid to post my work, and having somebody help me get rid of the mistakes and solve all that stuff would really help.

So how do we do this?

loverXxXgirl

Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Open Book

I am surprised to find that I DO like this! :) You are a fun writer. Keep it up!

Reviewer: katiepattz (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Open Book

this is wonderful! is it really all based off of your life? (minus the vampire part, obviously.)

i've always wondered what i would have done in bellas shoes, and i, too, would have reacted quite differently.

keep writing, i love it! :)

Author's Response:
It kind of is, and it kind of isn't. I'm personally not from Marquette, but I have a friend who lives in Washington (just not in Forks) and basically the only way I would get out there would be if my mommy's bf proposed. I don't get along with his children, and...well yeah, you should get it now, right?

Thanks for reading, and I'll do my best to keep writing when I have the time (:

Reviewer: katiepattz (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 08:43 PM · On: First Sight

haha i love this! i love your reactions, because that's totally what i would have done to... what an asshole. lol. :)

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 01:52 PM · On: First Sight

I like our heroine with her little attitude. I really want to see how she challenges Edward and everyone around her.

Reviewer: Mrs_Dynamint (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 09:56 AM · On: First Sight

Interesting idea to replace Bella in the Twilight story with a fresh character. I always thought she came off too passive and bland to warrant that many people being fascinated with her. I am pleased that Cassie seems to have more spunk.

From Edward's reaction it is obvious that Cassie is his singer- the initial basis for his fascination. I like that she is an artist, she should have some commonality later on with the musician in Edward. But how will the relationship progress with Edward convinced he should stay away and Cassie strong in her belief that High School relationships aren't a good idea. I am interested to see how you work that out.

And, it is always good to start a story with some mystery. Why EXACTLY did Cassie leave Michigan? Did it have something to do with her Mom's new husband or just a bad break up?

All in all a very good start. Don't leave us hanging too long for the next chapter!

Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 01:02 AM · On: First Sight

now THAT is AWESOME! I have always been bored of the stupid stories where the girl already KNOWS twilight and other stupidity, but yours is so different snd AMAZING! i hope you update soon. i like cassie, she's WAAAAAAAAAAY better than bella, in my opinion. bella was too innocent, what is she? 10? i mean, teens curse a LOT and bella was so pretty perfect. no one would have accepted edward's behaviour like a child like she did. cassie was right. he was acting like a damn dick. amazing. update!!!!

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