i THINK the texts got mixed up since they SHOULD have been like this -

 

Hey babe. What’s shakin? – E

 

Em, I’m sorry. I let the cat out of the bag. – B

 

I told Edward and some other guys about "Indiana Bones and the Temple of Booty"

 

~We were playing "I Never." Of course one of the questions had to be about watching porn and then sweet little Alice had to throw in a question about bjs – B

 

~U were drinking??? – E

 

~No, not me. Everyone else was. Don’t worry. – B

 

~Are u sure ur ok, honey? – E

 

I’m sure. Now get some sleep. Good luck tomorrow. Love you. – B

 

~Love u. Muah. – E

 

~Lol. Are u ok? How did this come up in conversation? – E

 

 

 

poor bella reene is evil this story looks really good i think edward think em and bella are together that why he was sad i hope they talk

OMG.  How can Bella live with in a home like that?  All things considered she is pretty sane.  I'm glad you have given her a good support system within her circle of friends and that definitly includes Mrs. C.  That being said I am excited to see where things will go with Edward.

cool.

but what is going on with rose and ali. are lover boy and brother bear the only helpfull ones tonight!!!????

I think Edward might have been a little jealous of Emmett showing up and the fact that she was staying the night with him. Also I fell in love with Emmett in this chapter, he's always been my second love next to Edward of course. I just melt when an author really catches his spirit, excellent job, keep it up! ;)

Sounds interesting, can't wait to see where you take it. ;)

Poor Bella, having to deal with a life like that!  Anxious to know a little more about Edward.  Very interesting plot!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you like the story so far.  I hope to have Chapter 3 up soon.

I really like the description of this story.  Bella's home life is not stellar but I really like her independence and ability to make do.  She is lucky to have a neighbor like Mrs. Clearwater.  I even had to teehee at her introductions of E/B.  Definitely looking forward to Edward's first days of school in Forks and how he will fit in with Bella's friends.  Good grief, one chapter in and I am already afraid of who Edward will chose!

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review.  I am submitting the next chapter today.  You will have to wait a few chapters though to see who Edward chooses.