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Reviewer: 4everintwilight (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

He's an idiot. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

1 - definite interest in this story Lisa :)  will keep reading, while I hope u keep writing LOL

Reviewer: Little71099 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

I am in tears right now!!!  Please update soon.  I understand why Bella feels like she does, she just got away from Jake and her mom treats her like shit then Assward says the one thing she's feared all along.  This is a great story!

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

yeah, you better hide...

Reviewer: punkfox825 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

Ok I was laughing so hard I was crying at this line

"She will. Your daddy will be sleeping in the study, I'm certain, but Bella will be here when you get up. If I have to, I'll divorce your grandpa, and he can marry her to keep her in our family,

and :-0 you end it with a swift kick to my fanfiction nuts......wow...can not WAIT for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Kittyinaz (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

Yeah you better be hiding after that!!  But thanks for not letting Bella leave or come back to Edward just because he said sorry. He needs to learn that he can't snap his fingers at her.

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

First of all, if you know about Osmonds' Christmas Specials, you're older than I thought. LOL  That was flippin' hilarious!

Second, the necklace from Emmett to Rosalie made me cry.  Really cry, and I'm an cynical old heifer.

Third, Edward needs his behind kicked.

Loved it!

Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

love this story please update sooner theres nothing good on thi site to read anymore.

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

What the hell was that?  Every freaking story I read is going through major angst right now and I have just about had it!

Please update soon and fix this!  I swear to god I am calling off my families christmas!

Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

wow that is a mess lol i would have left him to

 

jules

Reviewer: Velvetwhispers (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

UGGGGGGGGGGG....... i hope you are over there hiding behind bullit proof glass....lol cant wait for thenext update

Reviewer: siriusyellowlab (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

Edward had it coming. It seems like he keeps messing up, then apologizing. He doesn't seem to learn from his mistakes. What will it take for him to make a real change?

Reviewer: jmlwelborn (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

Wow... not expecting any of this... wow... don't hate you, just update qucikly, intrested to see where you are going with this little drama.

 

Jane

Reviewer: Motherthing (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

I can't be angry with you!  That was an extremely well-written chapter.  It all can't be sunshine and lollipops or there would be no story, no dramatic tension, which is what drives a plot.  Edward isn't even close to perfect, not even SM's.  If he were I might just puke or die of sugar overload.  I have loved the ebb and flow of your story ever since I started reading it.  I will be greedy and ask for even a short response because I find your characterizations and thought processes fascinating.  I'm a registered user so sending me an email should be easy.

Motherthing

 

 

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

Great Chapter....

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

I enjoyed this chapter and all the promise it has brought.  And I love Esme with her great intuition.

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

seriously i can see both side of the story but i can only draw one conclusion they're both idiots ,she pushed and didn't like what he said which was cruel and hurtfull and what did she do she ran i'm not saying that she should be his doormat but really she could of got space in another part of the house did she really think he mean't that ,she's been given emmett all the advice about how to communicate with rose she should of cooled of and then taken her advice and how could she just walk out on that precious little girl and why was it the other getting her and not edward ,i think these two need a good hard look at themselves it all fun and games until someone gets hurt and this time it was the three of them it's easy to act like an adult but not actually be one i thinl carlie has more sense sometimes

ok rant over please update asap

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

drama!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

oh my goodness, what a rollercoaster ride.  I can totally empathise with the anger, the self loathing, the wanting to laugh hysterically but not wanting to give in.  Yeah, trouble is in my case I don't have the Cullens to make me see sense!!

Let's hope they kick Edward's arse and give Bella a chance to cool down.  He'd better tread more carefully in future and mustn't take her for granted.

Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

Hmmmmm...........sooooooo...........is dinner ruined? 

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

Omg Edward was such a dickward. I sure hope bella makes him stew for a very long time. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

Holy shit. You weren't kidding.

Please update soon!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

wow edward is dumb... he better make it up to bella in a big way!

Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

You are so thrown under the bus for this one. But I know you will make it right. You have to. I'm still waiting on that "backdoor" action that Bella and Edward talked about a couple of chapters ago.

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 19 Have Yourself a Merry Little Breakdown

I promise, i won't kill you.  AFter all, if i did that, you'd have no opportunity to make it right, now would you? Course, i DID laugh my backside off when i read that Esme said she'd divorce Carlisle so he could marry Bella to keep her in the family....HA!  (and emmett's retort? even better!) *snickers* more please?

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