Great chapter. I understand somewhat why the breakup-they really were scared about the truth coming out. I just wish it wouldnt have taken so many months and something horrible for Edward to suck up his pride and go and apologize. Cant wait for next update.

ok, still not happy. but i'm getting there.

I love this story! Saying that I do have to say that these two really need to stop over reacting everytime times get hard. I mean I get that they didn't want Jessica (Who I hope is gone for good) to get custody of Carlie but Bella didn't have to leave St. Louis. Plus I love Emmett and the way you write him is wonderful. I can't wait to see how these two work out their issues and I have total faith in you that these two knuckleheads will get their acts together. I love your writing and I have been a fan since I stumbled upon Georgia on my Mind. In fact I even went back and found Laws of Attraction which I loved! Can't wait for the next update and have a great rest of the week!

Wow.   I said I  would not read it, until things got better.  But hunestly I love your story.  She is going to need a lot of help.  Edward too..  Wow.. 

Smiles. Leona

I love this story and can't wait to find out how it ends. However; not all of this is Edward's fault.  I think Bella screwed up just as badly as he did.  She could have stayed and fought instead of being a coward and running.  Yes he should not have let her go, but she didn't need to run either.  I hope she can come to terms with her part in this whole debaucle just as much as Edward.

Thank you for allowing us to read such a heartfelt story.  I hope my comment are taken as just that, comments.  Just an opinion.

Prozac Princess

 

I've been reading your story for a while but I don't think I've left any reviews before. I think it makes the story better that they broke up. I've read your other AH stories and I think what you have done here gives it a different edge than the other stories. I haven't read what other reviewers are saying but am sorry to find out they are less than positive.

i have to say that i was glad to see edward get a good hard look at the life bella was leading after their breakup and while i agree with others in saying that not all the blame should be laid at edwards feet i pose that he could of done something sooner and not wait until he heard she'd been in an accident to do something,another reviewer said that they should of stood united and fought jessica together i tend to agree i think it would of made for great reading i only wished they had stood back for few and really thought about how to beat jessica, in the end it happened anyway why didn't he go to her sooner?i hope they can recover emotionally and for bella physically as well and perhaps counselling will help.i find edward to be a very weak man away from the bedroom (i often think of little men with big cars) when you put him in everyday situations he can't cope so i think i just answered my own question as to what took him so long to go to bella ,i do think his comment to bella about paddeling was cringe worthy it's like he assumed that everything would go back to normal i think this relationship will take time to get back on its feet i hope it will and i hope they will work it out, i still stand by what i said in my last review but now is the time them to grow up

Totally realistic...

Whew....that was a lot to take in this chapter.  At least they are heading in the right direction.  It will be a long road for them I'm sure.   I must say, if you lose readers because they don't like that the lead characters have shit happen to them and make stupid decisions, maybe those readers should check out the children's section at the library.  I'm sure they can find some nice, sunshiny stories there containing very little conflict.  Shit happens and poor decisions are made that destroy people's lives everyday...then you learn from it and move on, just like Bella and Edward are doing.  (clearing my throat as I step down from my soapbox)

This story is good the way you are telling it.

I agree there is no way she could just walk back and forgive what has happened. They are both to blame for the way things ended. They need to talk before jumping off the bridge though.

As a mum i can totally see why they reacted that way, i would do anything to stop someone threatening to take my kids away.

Keep up the good work, i love that you don't make ua wait to long to updates, i look forward to my Wednesdays(Well its actually Thursday in Australia before i get it) and the week ends. Keep up the good work

I cannot tell you how excited I get when I get a new chapter notification for your story!  I have been addicted since the first chapter and just cannot get enough.  It has the right amount of angst, lemons, etc.  Keep up the good work. I'll be waiting impatiently for the next update!

I started reading the story a few days ago and I'm not sure what others have said but I like it.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I'm sure it will be a hard road but hey that's life.