Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
Wow. that was excellent. Your right about how you wrote it. it would be to hard and I know for a fact I would be lost. I 'm still a little lost. But I do hope Bella does say yes. Please.... It was not just Edward it was her too........ Why does he have to take all the blem.. Even she blemes him.. Why? Cam you answear that question? please..
Smiles. Leona
I do hope she says yes. I know I would in a heart beat..... Life sucks.. We just lost a 15yr old boy on the 2nd. do to drug and al. he was close to my son and family it hurt like heal. but you have to move on. The kids were play fighting and he died. on blow and gone. What we do effect our children.. While enough of that. I just hope she says yes and move on with there future..
Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
FINALLY!!!! Something happy!!! Great chapter, I hope everything go well for Eddie this time
Reviewer: badkfare (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
Let me say I appreciate not having to go to every counciling appointment. I do have to say that I didn't like that Bella has all these issues from the past that she's now bringing to light. I mean it's one thing for her to be upset about the way her and Edward ended their relationship but to throw at Edward the choices she decided for herself in the relationship I thought was a low blow. But having said that, you hit her spot on with a lot of woman that I know that have done that to the men in their relationships.
I have one question, since when does Bella have an issue with the BDSM in her relationship with Edward? I mean I know that that is what lead to end of the realtionship but in the counciling sessions she made it sound like the only reason she went along with it was to make Edward happy which doesn't make sense since she was excited and curious about that lifestyle even going so far as to ask for a collar. I didn't know if you were going to address that but I was really curious.
I wanted to also commend you on putting the family in counciling. I mean there seems to be some stigma about needing help and I really like that you continue to show the maturity of these characters. Can't wait to see what's next even though I am sad that this story is almost complete. Enjoy your week and I look forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
counseling was a good decision. I feel bad for Carlie but what is life without angst.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
Emmett is such a hoot, he will make a great Dad some day! I hope rose gives him another chance!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
Great chapter glad to see they are getting counseling to help them get back to where they need to be. Looking forward to the date.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
OMG! I knew Jess would show up, but try to take Carlie? And whats the deal with Mrs. Cope! I would have the woman fired!
Reviewer: DDL2928 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
I hope they still be into the BDSM too
Reviewer: jmlwelborn (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
I like that it took several months... nothing every happens in three weeks!!!
EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!!
Jane
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
I, for one, am grateful that yoou handled this chapter in this way. If people pay attention to the month titles you threw in, they should be able to tell that a lot of time has passed. He found out about the accident on October 15th. It is now June. Eight months is a long time. It can definately be long enough for them to have healed their relationship. They have been living together and raising their daughter and going to therapy. We don't have to have the details of how their relationship has healed. We just need to know that it has.
Great Chapter!
Kat
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
Yes, thank you for not dragging us all through counseling...
Thanks for the update! Still enjoying.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
whew
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
im excited that bella and edward are getting back on track! and did bella refer to carlie as their daughter in therapy?
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
you managed to move the story along nicely. well done! can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
I enjoyed that chapter and felt a good sense of them getting some equilibrium back. I do wonder if he's rushing things by his plans to propose again. I shall watch with interest.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Everytime
Good move Edward! Remember mother knows best! lol
Reviewer: kemp17 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
Wonderful chapter. Hope to see things return to normal again. Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: LucyLiterate (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
Last chapter I reviewed how I didn't understand why everyone blamed Edward. Today I am confused on the who;e controlling thing. What control over Bella did Edward display? Did she not want to move in with him? Date him? Get engaged? I understand it moved fast but I don't remember her putting up any fight or argument. Still am enjoying the story just a little confused with the sudden anger about control coming from Bella.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
I like how you are doing this!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
excellent chapter,i think esme conveyed everything that we'd all been thinking and i'm glad she told him to F#$K off when it came to bath time ...let him know that she wasn't a pushover anymore,seriously though i hope they can get it back i'd love to see them completely reconcile but it takes time and i like bella being assertive and knowing what she wants and i like how we got the important parts of thier counselling without being bogged down in the he said / she said stuff
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
i think you handled it perfect i like bella with a backbone great chapter
Reviewer: kjoyp (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
I need a little more transition between the anger and go eff yourself bathroom scene/counceling control issues and the ready to propose scene if you please. Bella said she's not the same person. I'd like to see how Edward handles the new her.
Reviewer: Nyxastra (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
I'm such a fail at reviews, but trying to do better! I've been reading this story and I really like it. I'm glad Bella's standing up for herself... and I really like that your characters seem so fleshed out and defined. I really hope Edward's really changing. I feel like I don't have enough of a sense of thier new dynamic before he plans to propose... like all I have about how thinga have changed is that she has and he loves her just as much now.
As for the next chapter... I have to say I'm hoping Bella doesn't say yes right away. I hope we get her POV and she thinks about it, more than she has in other parts. I'm not nesecarily hoping she says either yes or no, just that she doesn't answer automatically.
I really look forward to updates.
Reviewer: padalf2510 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
Good!! She is getting better!!! And toughening up!! Go Bella!! Progress!!!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
I get it. I just want them to move along! Looking forward to their outing! Can't wait for the proposal!
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