Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
wow ..great chapter .. and the baby was a pure genious twist !! love love love this story can't wait for the honeymoon *wink, wink*
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Heartache
I didn't mind the catastophic break up. Each story has it's own tale, and as the reader we must try to follow where it goes. The issue I have is paying Jessica off...again. I loathe when the villian gets what she wants. In this case, the big break up wasn't the problem. Jessica getting the money was. It was hard to swallow. I hope she gets what she deserves in the end. Even if she does, she is still sitting on 1 million that she shouldn't have. She could be disemboweled, but she be a disemboweled chick with 1 millions smackers in her pocket!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
that was an amazing chapter. loved that Carlie could just switch on and off...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Wow the last two chaps have been such a healing change! AMAZING! I look forward to the wedding and wonder without the protection of a condom and Bellas mental healthy was kind of shaky did she ever get back on birthcontrol? I mean what an amazing surprise if Bella were to announce that Carlie girl would be a big sister.
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
I keep holding my breath, waiting for Jessica to pop up again.
Love these two.
Reviewer: jmlwelborn (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Love how normal they are right now!!! Just what I needed!!!
Jane
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
felt a bit jumpy towards the end there, but i can see the usefulness at getting to the destination... Carlie stole the show though - so happy to be able to call Bella "mom"
:)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Loved it!
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Felt rushed, but I enjoyed it. Thank you for making them "not perfect" all the time. That is reality. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
WOW, you always amaze me, just when i think that the story cant get any better, you go and better yourself again and again
cant wait for more
ps i love that carlie is calling bella mum
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Things are definitely looking up for Edward and Bella. Liked the piano-playing and look forward to meeting Carlie's little friend.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Another wonderful chapter! I love how they are getting their lives back together. I can't wait for more!
Take care, Dixie
P.S. Feel free to do a Seth/Claire out take!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Hi
Your right relationship are never perfect. there is always ups and downs. they will make it thou. has long has it is together.. Yeah I would say one BIG issue is SEX,. they have not discussed it. Well I can't wait for another chapter. Excellent as always. Smiles Leona
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
will another major catasrophy happen before or after the wedding? like a pregnancy? will they atleast work on their problems!?
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
love it!!!!
Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Looking forward to the wedding.
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Yeah, glad they're happy, finally. Miss the kinky fuckery, that's all. Maybe, just a little...?
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Great! Lots of happy with just the tiniest touch of angst about the song in the mix. Perfect as always!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
So glad to read a happy chapter..... these three have been through so much it was nice to see them so happy together. Looking forward to the wedding and the honeymoon
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
I'm glad that things are really back on track for them. :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
such is life
Reviewer: kemp17 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Thanks for the update. Glad everything is going smoothly.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
ok now we are picking back up. You know in marriage we all avoid talks sometimes. I have learned in 45 years to just tell him "oh you know we talked about this sometime ago, you just forgot". Maybe that seems mean but it saves arguments on things things he is stubborn about we can not change. Took me 33 years to learn that. I was slow.
Reviewer: padalf2510 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Two thumbs up for this chapter!!! Sweeeeet mommy and daughter bonding!!!!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
This was an awesome chapter. I think that swaping house is a great idea. It saves a lot of frustration. I guess that when you have that much money, it really doesn't matter. I am sure that Carlisle and Esme aren't hurting either. Bella is just going to have to get used to have MONEY!!!!! Wish I had some. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
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