Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora
i was worried about carlie's reaction! and about if anything will happen with jessica and the adoption!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: Lisre (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora
No I was not suprised. She has been thru a lot, and is a very good kid most of the time. it was kind of refreshing to see her acting out for once. The honey moon was kind of fun. good chapter, looking forward to the next one
Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
I want to go to Bora Bora...with Emmett
Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
Finally! I'm glad they both pulled their heads out of their backsides and talked about their issues. It's a start. I'd love to honeymoon in Bora Bora--it sounds heavenly. Of course, anything sunny and warm would be an improvement over this dull, dreary winter weather. Hope these two remember the sunscreen!
Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
loved Carlie's speech!
I know those arguments that start small and escalate so you both get madder than hell. I've ended up wanting to laugh but instead shout out dangerous stuff, being all pissed and huffy.
Not sure how they could have a serious conversation while Eddie had such a raging hard on - boy, he's got some control lol
Reviewer: beatricebeauty (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
You saying you are a puppetmaster instead of a writer kind of says it all for me.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
Thank goodness they finally talked. I was getting worried there for a moment when he walked away from her and then when she talked about leaving with the family.
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
This was an excellent chapter and I am glad that Bella finally told Edward about the D/s thing. That is why there is chocolate and vanilla. Some people like it and some don't. I am sure that they are going to have a fantastic honeymoon. I sure wish that I was on a honeymoon with Edward (but don't tell my hubby) he he!!!!! THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
I should have expected these two managing to spoil the wedding-night somehow. Thank goodness they came to their senses and made up and talked. Time to enjoy the honeymoon.
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
Nice!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
From a vanilla point of view I am curiouse as to hw they will work in all the kinky fun without the pretense of master and sub. I hope you write a chap that explains how it works for them I think that would be hot! I am glad they talked the whole fight right after tehy weremarried scared the crap out of me I thought ofr sure Bella would run alot further then the couch especially since shes pregnant! Look forward to more AS ALWAYS! Post again soon!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
Loving the honeymoon so far! Carlie's speech was adroable lol
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
Hi..
this was a awesome chapter.. I was a little upset that everyone still blames Edward. It was both of them that left. I wish Calie would stop blaming her dad for everything. I know he is excepted but it is still not fare. But that is just my feeling on it. But other then that I love it. I just want to bitch slap someone they still on him. Honeymoon is sweet. and I glade they got to get over the D/s thing. But diffently got to keep the kinky sex part. haha.
well can't wait for the next chapter. have a great week. smiles Leona
Can you tell me why you have Edward taking all the blame?
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
WOWZA!!!!
I love this chapter
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
well I was certainly pissed about the wedding night! but I guess he made up for it with honeymoon and talking with her. she obviously didn't like the BDSM relationship, just the fun sex, so now they can both be happy. It was another awesome chapter xoxox Tracey
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
good Chapter......
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
aww they finally had the talk that was long overdue :)
Just a little bit ticked at Edward's behaviour on the wedding night, really hard to see how he could do that... getting all you ever dreamed should really make you greatful :S
They sorted it out at least :)
Really looking forward to Carlie's reaction to the news about the baby :)
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
Just a little more kink, please? I've read all the BDSM stories and I'm desperate. They are the best. Anyway, what a wedding night! I was surprised, actually, I didn't think it would happen that way. They're both so stubborn. A good match. You can't finish this story until the baby is born. It's a boy, you know.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
Wow bad first night as husband and wife... But it seems they were able to clear the air and move on tonthe honeymoon. Wonderful chapter b
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
Okay just had to chuckle....Not that they'l have time, but if Edward or Bella see my muse, tell them to have her come back home? (Favorite line during writer's block...'my muse ran off to Bora Bora to chase cute cabana boys'). Love the response to the whole D/s thing.its realistic and thoughtful...
Reviewer: DDL2928 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
awesome!!!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
i must admit that i a am happy with eoc's decision regarding the dom/sub! looking forward to more honeymoon!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
I for one am glad they're done w/ the D/s stuff!
My husband's boss honeymooned in Bora Bora & told us how amazing it was
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)
I thought you handled it perfectly! It's exactly what I would have wanted him to say!
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