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Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Sad times and happy times, just like life. Glad to see Bella saw the benefit of all that money and got on with spending it for a good cause. Now everyone needs to get off Carlisle's back and let him have some happiness. Children! Honestly, they need to quit meddling in their parent's lives.

 

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

It was so sad to see Esme gone because she was the glue that held it all together stubborn to the end not telling anybody she was sick and then Bella's crazy assed mom alive and demented doesn't seem fair but life isn't fair I'm glad they got to do some good with the money crazy Carmen left Edward.Carlisle should be allowed to date Esme wouldn't want him alone and suffering so I'll join you with the liquor!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Shame on Esme for not getting treatment & leaving her family in the dark! I find that was out of character; I would've had more respect if something unexpected happened to her.

Also shame on Carlie for making the comment about Edward keeping it in his pants. She wouldn't be there if that were the case.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

i had a feeling that if anyonewent before their time it would be esme... so sad! and edward is being such a jerk!! i wonder if someone is going to hit on bella at the graduation and edward will finally come to his senses! didn't carlisle say he'd divorce esme and marry bella just to keep her in the family? he could do something to get edwards attention too!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

yeah it's life but it sucks!  I like how you moved things along.

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

You shouldn't feel you need to apologize...its a realistic situation of life. and some deal better than others.  I like the whole 'with Elise' bit...including the boys not liking it.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

OK...so you had to say it.   You had to say get the tissues ready, and sure enough, when the time came, I was in tears.    Gahhh!   Esme?   I get it, but it still made me cry.    It is what happens to so many families, and usually it is the woman who puts off her sickness or pain, trying to dismiss it, and then it's too late.   Love to see how the kids are growing.  Keep up the good work!!  Can't wait for the next update...

Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

i quite understand the loss....but you coulda killed off someone else..lol. Just saying hehehe...i loved this chapter...but I see that Edward and Bella are not communicating again...sigh..when will they learn. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

You are absolutely right. Real families sufferer sickness and death. Sad, but true. Another great chapter. Until next time.

Reviewer: dalzieldawn (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2011 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

I love your writing. i started with this story then moved to your other completed work. I can see the growth in your writing as time has gone on and have loved every minute of it. I like how you are getting into a little more detail of edwards naughty side with this story. I have wanted to send you a review for a whole but I couldn't take the time out of reading your stories until now. I hope that we get to see Edward & Bella spend some alone time at the beach house and see what surprises she had in store for him before the Carmen thing happened. I really liked the Dom Bella and hope to see he soon and with a little more detail. Keep up the awesome work and I am looking forward to the rest of this story.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Ummm, I have to say that I wouldn't be too pissed with that much money involved. I don't really get why Bella's mad at Edward. He didn't ask for carmen to put him in her will the stupid bitch did that all on her own. I mean shouldl know that Edward has had nothing to do with the woman.  Now I understand Edward being upset about what carmen told the lawyer by making it out that he was some kind of charity case. I'm thinking he may give a large amount to where Bella used to work in Seattle.

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Carmen is back to put a riff between B&E. Bella could get back by just spending her $$$$. Guess she didn't keep tabs on Edward anyway. Thank you

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Let's just say that I loved their night away from home.  It was just so sexy....I need a night away from home with just my hubby.  I just love the way everyone describes Emmet in every story, big, burly and funny as fuck.  You know what, he should take the money and I am sure that Bella could certainly think of some really great things that they both could do with the money.   THANKS FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

hmm I'm torn between laughing at Carmen's audacity, and being a little sad for her, that even after all that happened, she still had only Edward to leave all that estate to?

I'm hoping Bella surprises us with her reaction once Edward gets all his ideas out of his mouth to her?

 

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Thanks for the kink! Why do the rich only get richer? Do they have any poor (relatively) family members? That much money can be spread around. And why do kinky people always have so much money? I'm referring to other stories about BDSM people (Master of the Universe, for one).  Kind of weird, don't you think?

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip

Does Edward know what he's in store for? I don't think he has a clue as to how many different types of feminine products are out there! lol

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

After that night of hot love and sex Bella should have been in a better mood. Sheis really trying not to enjoy life thoroughly, why does she blame Edward, he didn't beg for this inheritance. Hope she'll come around soon. Let's find out what Edward intends to do with the money, probably some good cause Bella won't be able to resist helping.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Wow!!  That's a lot of money, but I'm not sure Bella will care.   Is Carmen really dead???? Hmmm??   Is there some child somewhere that we don't know about?   I hope not..  Update soon.    

Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Excellent chapter as always.

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

wow!!!!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

what will edward do with the money?

Reviewer: floweryfaye (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

I don't want this story to end!!!!

Love the kinky getaway, damn they're experimental..! ;-)

Edward is such a sweet daddy, especially with his little girl growing up, it must be so hard for dads, ahhhhhhhhh.

Looking frward to the next chaper. x

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

How can Bella be upset if Edward talks to her and uses these funds to set up something good?  Oh wait, we are talking about Bella and Edward - Queen and King of overreacting!

Wow that Carmen bitch was loaded!

Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Yes, they have grown so I hope dear Bella can get her head out long enough to realize that it is time to forgive and forget and get on with their life. And enjoy being fabulously wealthy for god's sake! Two steps forward and one step back.

Reviewer: rere (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

That was as a surprise. I half expected for Carmen to have secretly have had Edward's child and was now letting him know! 

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