Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
Wow!! That's a lot of money, but I'm not sure Bella will care. Is Carmen really dead???? Hmmm?? Is there some child somewhere that we don't know about? I hope not.. Update soon.
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
Excellent chapter as always.
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
wow!!!!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
what will edward do with the money?
Reviewer: floweryfaye (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
I don't want this story to end!!!!
Love the kinky getaway, damn they're experimental..! ;-)
Edward is such a sweet daddy, especially with his little girl growing up, it must be so hard for dads, ahhhhhhhhh.
Looking frward to the next chaper. x
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
How can Bella be upset if Edward talks to her and uses these funds to set up something good? Oh wait, we are talking about Bella and Edward - Queen and King of overreacting!
Wow that Carmen bitch was loaded!
Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
Yes, they have grown so I hope dear Bella can get her head out long enough to realize that it is time to forgive and forget and get on with their life. And enjoy being fabulously wealthy for god's sake! Two steps forward and one step back.
Reviewer: rere (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
That was as a surprise. I half expected for Carmen to have secretly have had Edward's child and was now letting him know!
ReRe
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
Someone has to mess with the happy lol
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
Well yeah I am wondering what your thinking? But come on you make Bella look like a bitch. hahah. I never did understand her charter. So can you explain why she got mad about a died person who Edward did not give two shits about. does she still need therpy. Help me understand.. I can see Edward give it to need ppl. thanks . and awesome chapter even if bitchwella is back. hahaha. :) Leona
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
Edward never gets a break does he ,the kinky sex was hot as usual BRAVO!!!!!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
Oh Edward who cares it was before and not after. Bella had a before. If you are so scared then what did you do while she was gone? Screw Carmen? That would get her riled up. Especially since you did NOT mention it when you went back together.
I still don't trust him.
The funds could be used for many things. So good could come out of that.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
good chaper.....
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
Could've definitely done WITHOUT the anal! I have a real problem w/ that, but whatever.
Carmen was a surprise.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
$1.5 billion? I'd never touch my husband again if he didn't take the money! I have scruples, but my mama didn't raise no fool!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
Wow. I wouldn't have been able to turn it down either! No matter who she was!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
I reallly enjoyed reading this update as I truly remember what it feels like to have a toddler. We had a large family room and my hubby put up the "wall of Blaine." It was wood that separated the familyroom to he dining room and kitchen and had a door in the middle. On several occasions, he ran everywhere he went and the "wall of Blaine" came down two or three times. I cannot wait to read about the night out. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
wow, poor edward having to deal with her first period. lol
Reviewer: asbecullenlove (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
damn, you're good. i wanna marry you. lol.
at first i thought your story was you know, normal and is missing some special sauce.
but than BAAMM. you put in the perfect amount of drama. Not too much that i'd feel like throwing up whenever i read it and not too lil that there's practically nothing,
And the best part is, you made me cry, i can count the amount of stories that made me cry and i'm proud to say that this is my 3rd time, mind you, i read a lot :P
anyway, kudos to you and your amazing talent, don't EVER doubt your writing skills coz there are AHMAZING.
and you know you're good if you get a 10/10 from me <3
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
awwww, I really liked this chapter! I agree about fast forwarding to the major points of life instead of everyday. I hope that get to spend a nice night out together, perfect surprise for a mom! I look forward to some juicy lemony goodness in the next chapter ;) ~Tracey xoxox
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
I did start wondering about Carlie's behaviour after it went on so long, she was about the right age to be needing Bella more than Edward :)
Oh, and my little brother used to dance around the house naked as a two year old, especially if the "Test Pattern" and music were broadcasting from the TV stations before they began their official programming for the day :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
poor eddie
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
I don't want this to end!
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
Another really good chapter.
Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
Another good chapter. Poor Edward! I loved all the detail about life with two different aged children in the house. Sadly life can't all be sex and roses!!
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