Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
Glad Bella gave Edward and Emmett a swift kick in the ass! Everyone's growing up :)
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
Thank god you're not killing off JJ. I was worried a bit there.
Reviewer: DDL2928 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
I still don't like that you killed of Esme!!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
good chapter....
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
I really enjoyed this chapter...I like how you have Carlisle disconnecting from his family, because of how it reminds him of Esme
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
This family is just to much like my own!
Will miss this story sooooo much!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
I'm glad Bella solved the Carlisle/Elise problem. Daddy C and his sons used to be so close, they need each other. You're right, Edward is growing up still, but Emmett seems to be a lost cause, poor Rosalie who has to deal the most with this big child. Too bad the night of hot love was cut short so abruptly.
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
That was funny has hell and sad all at the same time.. you got a ture family going here. awesome always.
I "m sad for Carlisle is sweet man. and for Bella she awesome.... smiles Leona
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
i really liked this chapter! it showed the family in a different light, more down to earth real. i hope that someone locks emmet in a room somewhere, naked with a horney bull! that idiot!
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
I always love the fact that no matter what happens they still love each other
Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
You freakin had me crying in this chapter, you wench. LoL. It was a nice chapter though. I just feel horrible for Alice, Jasper, and JJ.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
great chapter!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
still with you
Reviewer: As Hearts Collide (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
Great chapter! You're writing is very fluid and sophisticated. Great Job!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
Poor Carlisle! I understand how Edward and Emmett feel but Carlisle deserves to be happy. Esme would want him to be. My moms been gone for 24 years now and I wish my dad would have found a nice lady friend to ease his loneliness.
I love the jumps in years. Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
1.5 billion? Hell yes take the money and have fun!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
Wow you keep shocking me with just about every chapter. :D I hope that Edward and Emmett are at least polite to Carlise's "friend". I'm surprised Edward has been able to keep his hands off Bella for as long as he with the sex-bargo. LOL!
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
great chapter!! I was crying when I read about Esme getting cancer, then bawling when she died. I am actually mad you did that (sigh) things are moving so fast, just like life. so many sad & happy memories! ~Tracey xoxox
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
gotta say it was a great chapter!! all of it ;) so $1.6 billion huh? I could imagine a few charities that could benefit from that lol. I am very curious why you brought her back & look forward to how you will play it. looking forward to next chapter ~Tracey xoxox
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
some serious times there, but also good to see Carlie growing up :)
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
That was just heartbreaking ... I will miss Esme. Thanks for a wonderful update
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
*Sob* That was so sad, losing Esme like that.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
I'ts sad that Esme had to die, a sudden unexpected loss is always worse than when you are prepared. There's a lot of change in the family dynamics caused byher death, Carlie's growing up and independent, Carlisle "befriending" the neigbour.
The thought of Carmen's urn rotating is quite amusing though as well as Bella being on the receiving end of a sexbargo because of some ridiculous reason.
Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
Poor Esme! And I know that she would have wanted Carlise to be happy, but I am on the same side as Edward and Emmett. 2 years isn't all that long, especially when you look at how long they were together and and the fact that they didn't know abut Esme's illness all that long.
Also I can't say I blame Edward for him not wanting Carly to go off to Europe I mean look what he got into when he didhis broad thing. AT the same tme he needs to have more faith in his daughter
Can't wait for your next update!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
Esme passing away broke my heart.
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