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Reviewer: cherrypie0192 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
This is a great fic... I think I said that b4 but it's SO true!! Sweet and innocent but could get dirty fast. Can't wait to see how Edward plans on spending more time with Bella!!
Reviewer: Lanaeclipsed (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
love this story!! Looking forward to the next chapter! ;)
Reviewer: LucyLiterate (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
I love that your story is set in St. Louis! I'm from the area and it is nice to read about things I know and enjoy.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Yes, Bella and Edward needed a push to quit overthinking.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
That was cute! Carlie is just too adorable. And Bella and Edward are dating? FINALLY!
Reviewer: twidiehard0302 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
GREAT story, I'm really enjoying it! Wow, E&B are both so forthright about their wishes regarding each other - even at the beginning! Oh well, why beat around the bush, I guess! Carlie is such a doll, and a very smart cookie - well, with a little help from Uncle Em. (The "kiss your girlfriend" comment she made from the car was a total hoot!) So, okay, the show is on the road - more soon, **please!**
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Omg I loved this chapter!!! Em and Carlie together are priceless!!!!!!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
I love Carlie! You do a great job with her character. You do a great job with all of them, but Carlie really sparkles.
Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Love it!!! More please?
Reviewer: punkfox825 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Awwww hes so cute. I want my own DaddyWard to put in my pocket and carry around with me!
Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Cute Cute story! Can't wait to read more! :)
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Thank goodness for Emmett and Rose. I don't think the ball would get rolling otherwise. Leave it to Emmett to get Carlie to do his dirty work. She is too cute.
Reviewer: punkfox825 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
I like. DaddyWard is always hot.
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
This story is very sweet so far! Can't wait or the next chapter.
Reviewer: Geneva Amazon (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Are you from St Louis? I am and I'm really enjoying your story. Make them go to the Muny! (Although that might be torture for E.) Hehe
Reviewer: 98765 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
This is a great story! I am a teacher and enjoyed the classroom tibits. I am eagerly looking forward to updates!
Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Aw, this is sooo sweet :D I love this, keep it up :) Have you considered making a playlist to this story? I think it's really funny when you did "Ms. Bella and Daddy sittin in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!!" Lol. At first I thought they were moving a little too fast, especially with the insistent hand holding from Edward, even if he is totally hot, I'd still be a little annoyed with the possessiveness. But then it got rationalized at the end, so I'm happy again :D
Reviewer: Kellie13 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
Really good! I enjoyed reading :D
Reviewer: lullaby_2009 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
I really like the story.
Reviewer: KristyDi (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
Yay! Thanks for mentioning this fic in your AN for Georgia. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
just have to say love this new story , i also ove georgia on my mind so i was happy to see anew story from you answered all my questions in the story premise so i just sit back and let it unfold
thanks
elaine
Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
Forest Park, The Jewwl Box, The Hill...sigh. You are making me miss home. Please update soon:)
Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
You just had to bring up Imo's. I'm St. Louis born and raised (right out of U.City). I can't wait to read more of this story just to get the references to my hometown.
Reviewer: Mexkarola (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
Can't wait for the next chapter. I like how you got Edwards backstory out of the way already.
Update soon!
Reviewer: Mexkarola (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
Wow... This seems like it's going to be a really good story can't wait for the next chapter. I like how you made Jessica Edwards ex because everyone usualy use Tanya as the ex. I hope you give Edwards backstory soon because I want to know what happened to him.
Update soon!!!
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