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Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
Marta really overstepped. Talking to Bella really wasn't her place. I'm not sure her heart was in the right place. It has been so long for Edward i'm surprised she didn't suck him into a coma.
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
I'd like to know what Marta's problem is, sure she may feel protective or jealous of Bella's intentions but WTF did she think she'd accomplish by confronting her. Edward was bound to find out. If I were him I would definitely be interviewing for a new nanny.
Wow, I didn't expect Bella to take things into her own hands, literally, when she gave Edward his much needed BJ. It probably helped her get past some of her ghosts.
There dinner date should be something!
Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
Marta has some nerve. I know she cares for Edward and Carlie a great deal, and she is trying to protect them both. But B*tch, know your place. Patiently awaiting next week's update:(
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
What the hell was Martha thinking? If Bella is a gold-digger because she is "just a teacher" what about her niece? I'm sure she will not like being told off by Edward and who knows if she doesn't feel like she must inform the school? Please update soon, can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. Will Bella and Edward be able to keep their pants on?
Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
That was sweet. Glad they finally got over that hurdle because heavens knows there'll be other bumps along the way. Carlie is so adorable - a mini Emmett. I love her cheekiness. There's nothing like a few well placed nudges from Rosalie and Alice. I almost feel sorry for Bella. Almost. Great chapter.
Reviewer: Kellie13 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
I love your story. It's so addicting!! I can't wait for more!!! =D
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Wonderful... I loved Emmett hauling Bella over his shoulder. Looking farwarding to Bella and Edward getting to know each other.
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
This chapter sure had a lot of information decided, in it. It slowly is bringing Bella out of her protective shell also. I suppose Edward has one too because he made some great strides with his decisions concerning how he'd like to progress with beginning a relationship with Bella.
Reviewer: cherrypie0192 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
This is a great fic... I think I said that b4 but it's SO true!! Sweet and innocent but could get dirty fast. Can't wait to see how Edward plans on spending more time with Bella!!
Reviewer: Lanaeclipsed (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
love this story!! Looking forward to the next chapter! ;)
Reviewer: LucyLiterate (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
I love that your story is set in St. Louis! I'm from the area and it is nice to read about things I know and enjoy.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Yes, Bella and Edward needed a push to quit overthinking.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
That was cute! Carlie is just too adorable. And Bella and Edward are dating? FINALLY!
Reviewer: twidiehard0302 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
GREAT story, I'm really enjoying it! Wow, E&B are both so forthright about their wishes regarding each other - even at the beginning! Oh well, why beat around the bush, I guess! Carlie is such a doll, and a very smart cookie - well, with a little help from Uncle Em. (The "kiss your girlfriend" comment she made from the car was a total hoot!) So, okay, the show is on the road - more soon, **please!**
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Omg I loved this chapter!!! Em and Carlie together are priceless!!!!!!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
I love Carlie! You do a great job with her character. You do a great job with all of them, but Carlie really sparkles.
Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Love it!!! More please?
Reviewer: punkfox825 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Awwww hes so cute. I want my own DaddyWard to put in my pocket and carry around with me!
Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Cute Cute story! Can't wait to read more! :)
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Thank goodness for Emmett and Rose. I don't think the ball would get rolling otherwise. Leave it to Emmett to get Carlie to do his dirty work. She is too cute.
Reviewer: punkfox825 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
I like. DaddyWard is always hot.
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
This story is very sweet so far! Can't wait or the next chapter.
Reviewer: Geneva Amazon (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Are you from St Louis? I am and I'm really enjoying your story. Make them go to the Muny! (Although that might be torture for E.) Hehe
Reviewer: 98765 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
This is a great story! I am a teacher and enjoyed the classroom tibits. I am eagerly looking forward to updates!
Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Aw, this is sooo sweet :D I love this, keep it up :) Have you considered making a playlist to this story? I think it's really funny when you did "Ms. Bella and Daddy sittin in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!!" Lol. At first I thought they were moving a little too fast, especially with the insistent hand holding from Edward, even if he is totally hot, I'd still be a little annoyed with the possessiveness. But then it got rationalized at the end, so I'm happy again :D
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