Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
Excellent!!!! More please!?!?!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
The sex floodgates have opened! Bella's vagina meet Edward's dick. I'm sure you two are going to have a lifelong relationship :)
Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
Damn, Edward is so smooth and sexy. Please don't take long to update:)
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
Those times were very sexy. Loved hearing about the date! I also loved the feeling of irritation from Edward after Bella and Rose chatted.
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
Edward worked like a pro. Bella should be a very happy girl.
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
hooray for getting back in the saddle! can't wait to read the rest of the day - especially the time with Esme!
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
So, that's the start...let me know what you think. If there's no interest, I'll let go...woefully...
Never let go.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
I thin Edward made the right decision in remevong the nanny temporarily from his household. Bella fits so well with him and Carlie. I can'twait to see those changes in Edward, I guess it will get hot.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
Wonderful chapter.. loved Carlie and Bella going out together.. she is right about not having her dad around for 2 nights in a row.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
I like that Bella wants to spend time with Carlie. I'm glad that Edward pretty much fired the nanny because she's a little on the crazy side.
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
What a wonderful scene to think about. Bella and Carlie shopping together.
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
GACK!! What do you mean there are only 5 chapters!? :'(
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
I thought it was sweet of Bella to offer to take Carlie out.
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
House keeping BITCH! I hope he fires her.
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
It's nice! And I really like that Tanya isn't the Edward's-ex-villian-female this time. It seems like everyone wants to hate Tanya. At least Jessica is a self absorbed twit and deserves to be the ex!
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
That was a sweet chapter. I really hope the day and date go well for them ;)
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
I think that was a really cute chapter! Can't wait to read the enxt one!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
well well fun times for Bella and Edward - great warm up for them ;)
Carlie's hopefully going to have a great time with Bella - and perhaps spill a few "state-secrets" for Bella regarding her Daddy? hehe
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
How about a sour patch kid? lol. Seriously, love all the characters in this chapter and the steamy action that happened on the couch. Nothing like "watching" a movie on Edward's lap ;)
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
I love the relationship you are setting up with Carlie and Bella... and moving E&B slowly. I hope Marta doesn't become too much of a problem. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
he is such a good dad i liked that bella wated to bring carlie out with them .and can't wait till edward and bella get their sleep over lol loved it
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
Edward's going to regret it if he lets Marta stay around. Honestly, it's not HIS problem if Marta has issues. It's hers. Her husband has a lot of nerve expecting Edward to let her use HIS child as her therapy.
Reviewer: joy mattox (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
Oooh. I loved the agnst here. My heart actually raced as edward raced to bella's b/c i just had to know how this chapter was going to end.
As usual, you didn't disappoint. Thanks
Reviewer: joy mattox (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
I am really enjoying this story. I love this edward and the fresh storyline. I tagged you as one of my favorite authors so I was glad to see this new story from you. Keep it coming.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
I think the nanny is a complete bitch and that she is probably the one after the money. I hope he fires her ass. :)
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