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Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Bella and Edward's relationship is developing so well, too good to be true, maybe? While I think that there is a good chance that Marta will behave I'm not so sure about Carmen, she's rather inquisitive and to me itseems as if she still sees Edward as her sub, somehow. Let's find out soon, please.
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Did Jake disappear finally?
Reviewer: padalf2510 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Brilliant story!! I'm hooked!! I need to read your other ones too!! Love the characters!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
ohh I think Mrs Cope suspects or knows more than she's letting on, but she is correct in at least chasing up the paperwork :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Wow to the end! I'm taking a non-smoking cigarette break lol. Love the cute moments with Edward, Bella, and Carlie :)
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
I thought it was sweet of Bella to give Carlie her own special space.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
just read through and adore you
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
squeee!!!! Thsi is turning out to be a very hot story! i never even realized I was clicking next until there was no next to click....How did I read 9 chaps in 1 night! ???? WOW this was good post again soon!
Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Great chapter. Why do I feel the need to hum the theme from Jaws? Could there be a little jealousy on the horizon?
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Why did she need a bath for that? He didn't bathe, did he? Maybe just to get her to relax?
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
No words. I am still trying to process all the hot sexing they just had. I did notice that Edward forgot to mention one little tidbit of info to Bella. (ILY)
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
I just love their relationship! I know the angst is coming but I love the love. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)
That was one heck of a date. I like how Bella pretty much let Edward know that she was willing to um well, take care of herself. ;)
The mall with a 6 year old. I have trouble walking through the mall with my 5 year old.
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Still waiting for my own Edward here... Carmen is going to cause a whole heap of trouble with Bella, I can just see it. I have a feeling she is going to make some snarky D/s comments to/about Bella and it is going a very uncomfortable evening come Friday.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Wonderful.. can't wait for drinks on Friday night...
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
I want to know exactly what Marta told Bella. I can't believe that she went off on her not only at the school but while Carlie was around. Maybe Edward needs to look into finding someone else to look after Carlie and give Marta the boot.
What are the chances that Marta is going to rat Bella out to the school?
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan
Man, I just love Em. Throwing Bella over his shoulder and hauling her ass out of her place to the party.
I have to give Em credit for having Carlie remind Edward about kissing. Sounds like my kids aren't the only ones that kick like hell in their sleep. I SO feel for Edward.
Reviewer: siriusyellowlab (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Ah. Nice chapter - very very nice ending!
Somehow, I think that Edward and Bella are going to face some challenges with Carmen and then with the nanny. Hopefully their time together will make them strong enough to face these challenges gracefully.
Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating
simply fabulous so far. love love love it!!
Reviewer: jmlwelborn (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
I get so excited when I see you update!!!
Love your story!!!
J
Reviewer: jmlwelborn (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
I get so excited when I see you update!!!
Love your story!!!
J
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In
I'm with Bella I think carmen is up to something and I have a bad feeling about Friday.
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