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Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Really good!!!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

They're getting more and more out into the open with their relationship. I'm sure Carlie will be delighted to have Bella move in. Liked Edward's slip of the toungue, he's right though, Bella acts like Carlie's mother when she's not at school.

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Loved the slip of the tongue--both of them. ;o)

Reviewer: padalf2510 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Good chapter!! :)

Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Awesome chapter even though it wasn't very eventful!  I really enjoy the flow of your writing.  It's funny to think that Bella and Edward are off living their happy lives and Carmen is back in Spain pining over Edward.  Ha!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

I'm diggin' Kinkward :)

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Great chapter....

Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

So, what's going to happen with the other teacher, the one who's into her but playing it safe with Victoria?  Will Bella's mom be a bitch?  Can't wait to find out...

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

whoopsie

Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

I don't have much to say on the chapter, it was good as always. I just wanted to comment on the banner. I like it, it's really nice.

Reviewer: punkfox825 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

awesome like always cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Edward and Bella need a playroom, don't you think? Maybe the basement?

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Mmmm...I like kinky Edward! He's so HOT! Love twists and turns too. Great story, looking forward to the update!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Does the other shit have to do with Jessica?  Great chapter, loved the bit with Jane & Heidi.  Thanks doe the update... looking for to the next one.

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Ah, can't wait to see how this Renee plays out!

Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

How I wish you could update faster. I love this story. Kinky Edward and Bella are such a turn on. The party was really funny. Can't wait to find out what's in the bag. Everytime you update, I miss my hometown more and more.

Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Good chapter. The only thing that bothered me was how Edward said he was going to "force" Bella to call her mom. It's the bitch in me that would have kicked him the balls for saying something like that.  :-)

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Well that was some slip of the tongue wasn't it!  Well I can't wait to see how Edward deals with that!

Great chapter, I really can't wait for the confrontation with Renee, that is going to be something else!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

OMG Great chap!!!  I was so going to kill you when you had the split in the chap one minuted Edward cavemen me you bedroom now then ext shes in the shower but her metal replay saved you lol   Great chap hot hot hot I can't wait to find out about the slip of the tongue hehehe  and about the bag post again soon

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

im worried that james saw what was going on between them at the party, and maybe he has been stalking her and knows what's going on?! would he use that to blackmail her?

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

Great chapter, as always!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident

I think maybe Emmett had more fun than even Carlie with the Trick or Treating? ;)

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident

Love this story and love bossy Edward even more. Thanksgiving with mama Renee should be interesting. Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: cherrypie0192 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident

LOVE THIS FIC!!! Thank you so much for sharing it.....that bitch Jessica is gonna show her ugly mug soon isnt she!??! She's gonna wreck everything!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see how u play it all out!! Waiting patiently xoxox

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident

The make-up-sex was a great idea to ease Bella into Edward's preferences. No need to be jealous for Bella, he asked her to move in and wants to meet her mother ... Loved Emmett as the beast - funny!

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