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Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

"So, that's the start...let me know what you think.  If there's no interest, I'll let go...woefully..."

HA!!! No interest in your stories?  You've got to be kidding!  I'm so glad I found you again, I've favorited several to re-read/read. You'll keep me going all weekend!  Well, except for when I'm seeing BD Pt2 Thursday night :D

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Bless you for this wonderful story I laughed and cried [alot]  This is the third one of yours ive read and they are all very well written you have talent!! Thank you for sharing it 

Reviewer: shesashyone (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

Marta, you bitch!

 

Reviewer: MelanieHeleyna (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2012 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Just finished reading the story! and I love it (no surprise there). What I love about this story is that it's reality, or is as close to reality as you'll get when reading fan fiction. It's not the typical happily ever after fan fics out there and that deserves recognition! Thank you!

Reviewer: kerrywin (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

ok so i went got your story because of ride of a lifetime. I live near st louis and work in st louis. I love the story and will read it till its finished, because you write a good story

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2012 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

I loved this story!!  There was something for everyone!!   Thanks for sharing!!  Do you plan anymore?

Reviewer: violetvirgo79 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Great Story, thanks for sharing.

~LL

Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Settling In

Wow!  Good Sexin'! Did actually "snort" outloud at the CNN Fair & Balanced comment. Oh, yeah! And Chris Mathews is sane!  Too Funny.

Reviewer: erock281990 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

Edward is gay if any man lets someone put something up there ass they are gay I was very disturbed about that part 

Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Great!  Loved it!

Reviewer: jfc (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

You did a good.

Reviewer: seven9v (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

Oh, that was good. Mmmm... Wet Edward is yummy!!

Reviewer: JensDreams (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Heartache

I know this story was written- least this chapter- was written awhile ago, but as far as the eating disorders being a form of control, you'd be right. I myself have this issue and it started with me being medically obese with a VERY autistic child. It's very hard for me to not use my food at this point as a way to control things around me, and it's been an uphill battle- especially since I'm no longer overweight and it's hard for me to not equate hunger with being in control. You did fantastic with your research, thought you should know. :)

Reviewer: Trouble36535 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hammering out a Plan

Love this story.Only finished with the 3rd chapter,but gets to the point and still keeps it flowing. Doesn't drag out the story line like some others I've read.

Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)

thank you for waking up Edward-----finally.

Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Revelation No.Two (It's a Biggie) (Pt. 1)

what happen to the simple love story???? I overlook some smut but this sidetracks your story------I'm only one reader and not important but I was enjoying it till things changed so drasticly...I know the saying if you can't say something good     don't say anything at alll, I was just let down

Reviewer: Nehnah14 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

Great story, long winded in some parts, but great nonetheless.

I love that they worked hard to sort their issues out, that was very realistic and the rewards were so sweet in the end.

Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: ruthh (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

i enjoyed reading your story, and i was cracking up with the 'who names ruth this time and age?' hahaa

Reviewer: britojhb (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2011 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

I just finished this story, through a bleary blubbering mess of tears, and I miss them already!!!  Great job!  Thank you so much for sharing them!!!

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

What an awesome ride....loved it.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

Rose might have to kick that old woman's ass if she doesn't shut up. Now usually I am against violence, but sometimes you have to make exceptions.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

Hooked after one chapter....I love the flow of your writing, very easy to get caught up in the story when I am not correcting it in my head. That kinda makes me sound bitchy, but really it's a heartfelt compliment.  

Reviewer: miliredo (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

great, great story...i was getting pissed there for a bit w/the whole t.a. thing but i get what you were saying...didnt like it very much but i get it...thanks again!!

Reviewer: miliredo (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Heartache

just wanted to say that eventhough this has been the saddest chapter so far...for me, it has been the BEST chapter as well!!  i teared up and couldn't catch my breath!  great writing and thanks so much!!

Reviewer: erinbythebeach (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

I have really been enjoying your story but I have a concern about the dom / sub relationship. I totally enjoy the kink as long as they still love too and the sex isn't always about control. I loved the way he is with her in the beginning all doting and sweet. Is he going to turn all bossy and demanding like the when he demanded the phone when Jake called? I just need the sweet emotional connection along with the hot sex! Thanks!!!

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