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Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
aww her parents and rob are so sweet together. so friggin sweet.
i really want her to meet reese, i think she'll shit lol
dude, next chapter, they better get busy or ima be well frustrated.
AND, and, BRING ON SAMBRAD!!!
love this.
=]
x
Author's Response: Hey RainerNight,
Yay, I'm so pleased you're all caught up! Glad you enjoyed Rob and her parents - it was a fun chapter to write. :)
Ooh, will they get busy next chapter? It's up now, you'll have to go check it out! But erm... sorry if you get frustrated!
SamBrad is definitely in there too!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing as you went. I hope I continue to hear from you! You always make me giggle!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: duders79 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
Bloody hell, Bee! Hit us with a horny text right at the start why don't you?! Wow...Rob...I have no words...kitchen memories...
Meeting the parents. Ooooh! Gemma's parents reactions to Rob's apartment - her Dad's ‘Holy hell!' and her Mum's cheeky comment about taking pics! Yikes!
"We like them scruffy!" Oh, Jane! Brilliant!
Heart stopping visual - Rob's cheeky walking backwards down the hallway beckoning Gemma into the bedroom!! Thud!!!
Heart stopping line - "I'm guessing you're not going to let me fuck you while your parents are right out there in my living room." Thuuuuuuuuud!!! Oh my goodness! That naughtiness in the bathroom was just HOT! Rob and his filthy mouth. Pheweee! And all in just under ten minutes? The boy is a God! And his jerking off in the shower comment...Why oh why does that do things to me?! It does though.
Oh, Sarah does make me laugh! Loved the banter!
Awwww! Cute story with the doorframe! My pillow was Jordan from NKOTB!!! Did I just say that...?
Gemma's parents are absolutely adorable! So lovely! And Rob was just gorgeous with them. Can't wait to hear about the night with Sam!
So, I did it again. I thudded! So sorry it's taken me longer than usual to get to this Bee. I never want to rush reading. It's too good to be rushed.
Duders x
Author's Response: Hi Duders,
Well there's nothing like a naughty text to start a new chapter, is there!? Poor Rob, he was missing his Gemma!
This was a fun chapter to write, with Jane and Will meeting Rob and being blown away by his apartment. I don't think her Mum was really going to take photos... I think she just likes to tease Gemma. Hehee.
Oh yay, you thudded again! It is a tradition, after all! Rob was pretty naughty in the bathroom, wasn't he? Filthy mouth indeed... Although he did put it to use fairly well. Ahem. Lucky Gemma! I kind of liked his jerking off in the shower comment too. At least he made it to the shower and not just the bathroom sink. ;)
Jordan from NKOTB? Oo-er!! Hilarious! My bedroom was covered in Jason Priestley posters. Oh, the 90's! Hehee!
Thanks so much for your review, Duders, and for you lovely comments. I'm glad you enjoyed meeting the parents! The next chapter is up now. I wonder if you'll thud in that one. Somehow, I think not! *runs away and hides*
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 23 - The Party, Part Two
WAY TO GROW PAIR ROB!! YEOWWW!!! so wanted him to motherfuck him. fucking awesome.
-giant grin-
Author's Response: Yayy, go Rob! He definitely told Aaron how it is, didn't he!? So did Gemma, actually. Take that, Aaron! :)
So glad I could make you do a giant grin!
Thank you!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 22 - The Party, Part One
KICK AARON IN THE NUTS GEMMA AND RUN AWAY! RUN TO ROB AND HIS FANTASTIC NUTS! GO GIRL GO!
Author's Response: Ha! Another fabulous quote from RainerNight! :)
Aaron really did deserve to be kicked in the nuts though, didn't he!? Lucky Rob was there to calm her down. Aww.
Thanks again!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Strap Yourself In
squee. they so cuuuute.
id pay a million dollars to meet rosie (the elephant)
okay not actually a million. maybe like...fourty.
Author's Response: Haha! Only $40 to meet Rosie? Aww, surely she's worth $50. Maybe even $55, if Rob was there too. :)
So glad you're enjoying the story! Thank you!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Best Night Ever
sleepy sex is only just beaten by angry sex. just sayin.
uhhh make up sex is also a keeper.
Author's Response: Hi again RainerNight,
Oooh, sleepy sex is nice. Hmm, I don't think Rob and Gemma have had angry sex, have they!? There is a bit of make up sex coming up soon though. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Love
awwwwwww -content sigh-
rob loves gemma and gemma loves rob and i love gemma and i love rob and rob loves me and...oh wait...
Author's Response: Hehehee! I love that comment! You make me giggle!!
In fact, I loved it so much that I posted it on Twitter. Hehee. I hope that's okay!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 15 - The Perfect L.A. Boy
ROB YOU EMOTIONALLY RETARDED MORON!!!!! FIX IT FIX IT NOWWWW -clicksnext-
Author's Response: Hey RainerNight,
Awww, he definitely had a bit of a moron-moment, didn't he? He's just a boy, after all. A bit of a confused boy at times.
Lucky you didn't have to wait to read the next chapter! :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: WhosThat65 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Love
Girl,
Are you the one with story Recommendations? What are you reading now? Please let me know. This was beautiful. xoxo
Author's Response: Hi there,
Am I the one with story recommendations? Umm, I'm not sure! I can give you some ideas of stories I'm reading right now if you like, aside from mine of course! They're all RPF and can be found here on Twilighted...
* London Rain by duders79
* Make Me Believe by FrostysWiff08
* Return to Coda by Newydd
* Finding Forever by Carson1
Hope that helps!
Glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reading!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 14 - The L Word
mmmmm fic-rob oral. boys got some mad skillz.
Author's Response: Aww, well of course he has! He has his awkward moments, but his oral skills have never been questioned. Lucky Gemma! ;)
Your reviews crack me up. Hehee. Thank you!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: duders79 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Questions
Save me a spot here please! ;0) I plan to devour and enjoy every single word of the two chapters I need to play catch up with this weekend for the story that is written by the wonder that is Bee! xx
Author's Response: Aww, thanks Duders. And now you've reviewed that chapter twice! :)
Thanks for reading, as always!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Paparazzi
uhh throwing up in front of robert pattinson. always a highlight ha.
Author's Response: Oh dear. Never a good idea to try and keep up with two British guys in the drinking stakes, Gemma! :)
Thanks, RainerNight!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Just Wait and See
OH FUCKING TOM!! lol cock blocker!! goh, wow, im a little nervous for the arrival of tomstu. hope he likes her.
Author's Response: Augh, Tom! I know!! He really did arrive at a bad moment, didn't he!?
Thanks again for reading!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Chocolate Soufflés and Text Messages
oh goodness. im so torn. i woulda been so mad if he showed up on my doorstep at 4am. but yeah, i still woulda let him in.
Author's Response: Hi RainerNight,
Oooh, I know. He was a bit arrogant and silly to show up at her door ar 4am, but how many of us wouldn't have let him in? I mean, really. ;)
Thanks so much!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Brave
God, I love this story so much. Just started reading it last night. I can't help but feel as if they're both being so brave being so handsy with one another in such a public place, even though it is a VIP area, y'know. I don't think I could be that brave haha. But if you have to ya have to I guess.
Author's Response: Hey RainerNight,
Whew, I've finally gotten around to replying to your reviews! I love new readers! Reading your reviews was a lovely way to remember the beginning of the story. :)
But yeah, Rob and Gemma were pretty "handsy" with one another in this chapter, at Marcus' gig. I think they just couldn't really help themselves! Eek!
Thanks so much for reading!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: roxiegirl (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
Great chapter Bee! Rob is just so damn sweet! Why do I think the Eclipse premeire is going to be the cause of some serious angst? She won't be invited for starters since no one knows about them. And then of course Kristen will be there and we know how handsy they were! Angst, oh so much fun!!
Author's Response: Hey roxie,
Yay, so happy you enjoyed the chapter! Rob did a lovely job with Gemma's parents, didn't he!? Very sweet indeed!
Hmm, the Eclipse premiere is a long, long way away, don't worry. I've already written about it, and you might be a bit surprised! There is a bit of angst in the next chapter though - it sounds like you might like that! :)
Thanks so much for your lovely review!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Twidult2771 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
What a chapter!
I know I mentioned a past chapter as the best but, this one was amazing.
I am one who really enjoys fluffiness in stories like this ( the family interactions and what not.)
Rob winning the hearts of Gemma's parents. Inviting them to the set, talking golf with Will, suggesting he come with Gemma back to Connecticut.
I also loved her parents reactions to his apartment. Both of them being flabbergasted, and Jane wanting to take pictures.
Jane dropping the hint that maybe Rob would become her son-in-law some day. I know I would love to see Rob and Gemma get married. ( Any plans on a story about that? :) ).
Now that Rob has been introduced to the Taylors and has been all but adopted into the family, will Gemma get to meet the Pattinsons?
I would love to see Gemma fly to London with Rob for a week or so. To spend time with him when he's not being hounded by the pap and fans. You didn't, perhaps put something like that in there did you?
Can't wait till the next chapter.
Mara
Author's Response: Hi Mara,
Wow, I'm so pleased you thought this chapter was the best yet! Yay! That's exciting, thank you. It was a fun one to write, getting to know Will and Jane a bit more and having them meet Rob. :)
Yep, they really were both flabbergasted by Rob's apartment! The dinner went really well though, despite Gemma's slight concerns. She really had nothing to worry about - her parents are both pretty laid-back and trust her to make her own decisions, even if they do want the best for her. Of course they do - she's their daughter!
Oooh, you're so sneaky with all your questions! Will Rob and Gemma get married!? Ha! And will Gemma meet the Pattinsons? And will Rob and Gemma go to London together? Hehee, you make me giggle! I'm so bad at keeping secrets. Must... not... tell! ;)
I have my fingers crossed that the next chapter won't be too far away. Sorry I haven't put a teaser over on the forums, I've had a bit of a crazy week! I'll catch up with you over there soon though. Are you on Twitter, by the way? If you are, come play! I'm SwimmingBee1 over there. :)
Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing too. I really appreciate it and love hearing your thoughts!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
The dinner….truly excellent! The entire chapter was excellent…but then again, when is it not? Is it me, or do these two reside in a perpetual love haze when they are together? They only questions things when they are away from one another and that needs to stop. Will and Jane are super cool and classy people. Putting Sarah into the mix added just the right touch of lightness to the evening. Naughty, naughty Rob and Gemma….I couldn’t believe they got it on with her parents in the next room! Can you imagine her father walking in on them…LMAO! Oh, you know what I absolutely loved? The way that Robert joined the others barefoot after his shower! It was a small little detail, but it did wonders for the relaxed ambience all the same. I LMAO @ Robert getting Will drunk! He really didn’t do it on purpose and was probably only being a good host, but was oh so funny! I also liked the way that her parents surreptitiously gave them a bit of alone time with one another. I awed at Jane referring to Robert as her future son in law. So very sweet. The dinner was a complete home run.
Intense…wow, that is the absolute perfect word to describe this chapter. Robert may be all kinds of fucked up, as I so often like to tease, but one thing he is perfect at, is loving Gemma. The intensity of the love between Gemma and Robert is phenomenal. Jane's gentle warning to Gemma was absolutely the right thing for her to have done. It is her right and duty as Gemma's mother, to urge her to show some caution of the situation she is now facing by virtue of her relationship with Robert. No matter how much Robert and Gemma may wish it to be, their relationship isn't the typical everyday relationship between a man a woman. This relationship will forever change Gemma's life and kudos to Jane for having the courage and wisdom to point it out to her. I didn't take her warning to Gemma as a possible dislike of Robert at all. On the contrary, I saw it as an attempt to help them by peeling away the surface layers keeping the problems buried. She spent a day and evening in their company as an outside observer, and was able to gain invaluable insight into Rob and Gemma’s relationship. As an objective person on the outside looking in, she probably saw and understood a lot more than the two of them combined. She also happens to be Gemma's mothers and seems to know her daughter quite well. Jane more than lived up to my expectations of a woman and as a mother... I really, really like her. It is quite clear where Gemma gets her adorability from, LOL. Her gentle acceptance of Robert and of his importance to Gemma are very apparent. I really hope that Jane’s acceptance was able to ameliorate some of Roberts feelings of unworthiness. I understand the questioning of the intensity of their feelings for one another based on the incredibly short amount of time that they've been together. One month is indeed short but then so what? Does that invalidate their love for one another? Why should they slow down and take things slow if they honestly love one another the way that they both appear to do? What good will progressing at a slower pace do? In my opinion, the one month duration of their relation is of zero importance if they really love one another. Gemma was with Aaron for almost her entire life and look how that turned out...time makes no difference at all. Love, respect, honesty, and passion are what matters. Why should they have to wait to be happy when they already are?
I love all of the questions that are going through Gemma's mind. They needed to be considered and should really be addressed with Robert before they proceed much further in their relationship. When they are together, Gem and Robert has the tendency of getting lost within one another....lost in their very own Robert and Gemma bubble where the outside world and their problems just magically cease to exist. They really need to start being more cognizant of their many yet to be acknowledged issues. Will was right to wonder about the end of summer vacation. How will Gemma and Roberts’s relationship survive when they are both juggling very busy schedules? What about the Eclipse premiere? Is she going to be his date? If I remember correctly, real Robert's family attended the premier with him, are you going to keep to that as well Bee? And if so will Gemma meet his family at that time? I'm dying to find out! My vote would be for Gemma to be his date, but we shall see how you play it. I have absolutely no doubt that you will make it brilliant, no matter what you decide.
You wrote Will brilliantly! You made him behave in the manner in which a "real" father would. Thank you very much for sparring me the gun toting, physical violence threatening, Hollywood cliché of a father's first introduction to his daughters love interest. Loved Will's calm and smooth manners. Not every father goes around disliking and mistreating his daughter’s boyfriend without cause. I'm very happy that Will is giving Robert an honest chance at proving his worthiness For Gemma’s heart.
Robert blew my mind when he confessed how much the intensity of his love for Gemma frightens him. Their love for one another seems to get stronger with each passing day. Robert especially appeared to be overwhelmed by his love for her. He seemed really lost without Gemma, hence the marathon of dirty (HOT) texts he sent her way. You did a wonderful job portraying Robert’s need and desperation to be with Gemma. It’s quiet telling how out of sorts he was spending a few days apart from her. With each day that passes, I really believe Robert is coming to realize that being alone after having loved Gemma, is no longer an option for him. Gemma’s love for Robert is also very strong and intense, but I think she’s still holding back a bit. I loved Gemma’s last line, where she says “We loved each other completely.” I think her insecurity came into play when she then asked the question “What could be wrong with that?” The answer is, nothing. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the intensity of their love for one another. That question might have very well been meaningless, with zero intent…but, I still wonder :) Gemma was wonderful during the set visit. She handled her sorrow over being introduced as “My friend Gemma,” as opposed to “My girlfriend, Gemma,” very, very well. Big ups to her for that one. I wouldn’t have been half as classy had I been in her shoes. I know Robert is only trying to protect their privacy…but it’s still a bitter pill for her to swallow. I also felt bad for Robert when he had to decline Will and Jane’s offer of joining them for dinner the following night. His desire to accept the invitation was very obvious. I know that it wasn’t intended to be funny, but Jane’s question on whether or not Robert and Gemma would continue to hide their relationship after they were married with children had me LMAO. As you can tell….I REALLY, REALLY love Jane, LOL! She is like an older version of Gemma :)
Favorite Lines
"It's intense. I don't know. It's scary, but it's good."
"It's not even that I just want to make love to you," he said. "Although I do. Of course I do. But I just miss you being here. I miss waking up with you and I miss feeling your little body in bed next to me. It doesn't feel right when you're not here."
"First of all, Mom, no. You're not showing photos of Rob's apartment to Margaret. And second of all, he's not your son-in-law!" She put an arm around my waist and squeezed me. "Not yet, sweetie."
I realized I didn't say I love you. So... I love you, Gem. Call me tonight after dinner and we'll make arrangements for tomorrow night. Lots and lots of love, Rob.
"He loves you, Gemma. And you love him. That's what matters."
"No, it wasn't," I said quietly. "Plus, I couldn't hold his hand. I wanted to, but I knew I couldn't."
"I'll be okay. I need to take a shower though. And maybe jerk off a little bit too."
"Tomorrow night, Rob. One more sleep."
"Oh look, a clown!" I held her hand and laughed. "Stop pointing, Mom. They're real people under that make-up, remember?"
"Any man who makes you smile like you were smiling tonight is a good man in my books, kiddo."
"You look after our girl now, won't you?"
"Of course. I just wonder... in the future. What will happen? Will we see you on the front cover of magazines with him? What if you get married and have babies? Surely that can't be kept a secret."
We loved each other completely. What could be wrong with that?
Till next time, Kari
P.S, I forgot to mention, but Daniel does NOT come across as being gay at all. It was just a random fear that entered my m
Author's Response: Hi Kari,
Another epic, amazing review! Thank you! :)
Before I forget, let me say how much I love that your very last sentence is sometimes cut off. It makes me giggle. It's as though you've written so much that you just can't bear to finish your last thought and your hands just stop working. Hehee!
Back to the chapter... I'm so glad you liked it! The dinner was definitely a success. Gemma really had nothing to worry about - her parents are pretty laid-back, despite wanting the very best for their daughter. You're right, I don't think Rob meant to get Will drunk really; he was just being a good host and probably trying very hard to impress him! Aww, I love that you always pick up on the little details. I liked how Rob was barefoot too. It was meant to be a casual dinner, and that was part of it. Plus, barefoot Rob = always a win!
Jane definitely gave Gemma some interesting things to think about, didn't she? As you said in the beginning of your review, Gemma and Rob live in a perpetual love haze when they're together. Everything else pretty much ceases to exist - including Rob's crazy life of Twilight, fans, paparazzi, etc. Which could be a good thing, because they have fun and they relax each other, but it also means they've got a bit of talking and thinking to do. At the moment everything is fine, but as Jane pointed out - what happens later? When Gemma goes back to work and Rob travels for filming or heads back to London? They struggled to be apart for just a few nights. What's going to happen after a few weeks? Hmm. So yeah, they do only question things when they're apart, but they really need to start talking about them when they're together. You're very perceptive! :)
You're so right about it not being an issue that they've only been together for a month. It really doesn't matter! They adore each other and know each other inside out. I think the issue is more along the lines of what I just wrote about above - that they've only been together a month and there's still a lot they need to get through in the future.
Hmm, the Eclipse premiere! I've written it, and ummm.... I can't really tell! Sorry. I think you might be a little bit surprised though! Eep!
I'm so happy you liked Jane and Will. I like them too! They're lots of fun to write. Gemma had to get her girly side and her calm side from somewhere, right!? And hehee, no. I didn't want to make Will the nasty, protective father. In my mind, Gemma has lived away from home for at least six years and she's been through a lot. So yes, they'd still be a little bit protective of her, but they also must trust her to make her own good decisions.
I think you summed it up well when you said how "out of sorts" Rob was without his Gemma! They've gotten so used to being with each other in such a short time, and yep, he really struggled. She relaxes him and he's come to rely on that to settle him down. So without her, he just wasn't operating properly. Aww. That's gotta freak a guy out a little bit, right? Especially an intelligent, crazy busy guy like Rob. That's why the intensity of it all frightens him. We may get to see in the next chapter how he deals with that. Hmm. Remember how much you really, really like Rob at the moment? Bear that in mind in the next chapter, okay? Okay! :)
As for Gemma's insecurities coming into play when she asked the question, "What could be wrong with that?" Well... yep! You're right again! She was worrying about things just a little bit too much again, and that also plays a bigger part in the next chapter. Eek, you're not going to want to read it now, are you? I hope you still do!
Wow, so many favorite lines!! Out of all those, I think I like... "You look after our girl now, won't you?"... Aww, Will. It's implying such a strong trust towards Rob there. Good for him!
Hehee, it has been suggested by a few other readers that Daniel might be gay, actually! I think that's what happens when there's a really nice, single guy around - women automatically think he must be gay. Hehee. But nope, he's not. He just didn't have much chemistry with Gemma.
Kari, thank you so much again for your wonderful review!! I always do a happy dance when I see you've reviewed, and allow myself a good ten minutes to read it and take it all in. Love it! Thank you! :)
Until next chapter...
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
I am really loving this story and am quite sad that its not complete :( Oh, well... just keeps me on my toes waiting :)
Author's Response: Hey Dijah,
Don't worry, there's a lot more to come! I've already written the first 47 chapters! My chapters tend to be validated about once a week. Hopefully you won't have too much longer to wait for the next chapter. :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.
- SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
So I was pleasantly surprised about the whole meet the parents thing - this was a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks boomerand!
So glad to hear you enjoyed it. The parental visit really went well, didn't it!? :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: kimjhill (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
yeah-been wondering what will happen when Gemma has to go back to work!! And also will they come out at the Eclipse premiere as a couple???cant wait for next update :)
Author's Response: Hi kimjhill,
Hmm, the past couple of chapters have definitely posed some new questions for Gemma, haven't they? She and Rob have been so happy in their little bubble that she hasn't really thought about what would happen next. Time will tell! :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: RobAussieFan (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
Another fantastic chapter. I love the way Rob and Gemma's parents got on so well. It seemed like a fun, easy night for them all. Their private bathroom moment was hot! I feel some trouble brewing after Jane's talk. They've been apart for a few days and need to reconnect and talk things over but I'm sure they'll be fine. Can't wait to meet Sam! Thankyou SB.
Author's Response: Hi RobAussieFan,
So glad you enjoyed the chapter. It really was a fun, easy dinner, wasn't it? Gemma's parents are pretty accepting - and Rob getting Will drunk didn't hurt, either! Hehee.
You feel some trouble brewing? Hmm. Time will tell! They really do need to talk about a few things though... At the moment, they're all whirring around in Gemma's head and she needs to chat to Rob about them. Let's hope she can soon.
Sam's coming up next! Hopefully the next chapter won't be far away. Thanks so much for reading!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
Loved the chapter Bee. Sexting and bathroom naughties *phew,* I would say get a room, but you know, lol. Soooo funny, Sarah's knowing looks and 'I took the nachos out of the oven for you.' smirking, yeah and the rest all that innuendo, love it.
I'm glad that Gem's parents like Rob and he wants to go back to her home town with her, sweet. I bet he just wants to see the baby pictures, lol.
I can understand Jane's (may I just say, cracking name, lol) concern for Gem that she and Rob don't get to do normal dates and that they have become so close so quickly. Sometimes relationships start full on and then once things calm down the real getting to know you starts, maybe they could have a date in Connecticut as no-one will be expecting him to be there? I am sure that once their relationship is public that Gem will be able to hold Rob's hand in public and of course he will introduce her as his girlfriend, but for now that's private between them, their friends and families whilst they still get to know each other. Probably still no dates though, unless he brings her to the UK, he gets less hassle here, lol, ooooh London Rob and Gem.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Jane x
Author's Response: Hi Jane,
Aww, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you! Your comments are always so lovely. :)
It was a fun chapter to write - especially with all the cheeky Sarah comments you pointed out. Rob was just as bad though, really! Hehee. Their bathroom naughties were pretty raunchy, especially with her parents in the next room. Naughty Rob! He seemed a bit more relaxed afterwards though!
Jane posed some interesting questions to Gemma at the end of the chapter. Knowing Gemma as we do, we know she'll think about them - possibly too much. You're right though - this is really just the first phase of their relationship. They already know each other really well, but the next step will be how to deal with everybody else knowing about their relationship. Maybe a trip to Connecticut will help. Time will tell!
London Rob and Gem? Well, you never know! For now, we might have to live vicariously through London Marcus and Ally. :)
Thanks again Jane!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Intense
Renee definately gave her some things to think about. I'm glad Rob got along so well with the parentals.
Author's Response: Hey maizeandblueinvalpo,
Gemma certainly has some things to think about, doesn't she? (Renee is Bella's mother! Hehee. Gemma's mother is Jane. But don't worry, I knew who you meant! It made me giggle.)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Let's Do This
Hands down... Rob is the choice... I mean seriously... the man makes her melt without even trying... thats something that the other guy can't even compare with...
Author's Response: Hi Dijah,
Yep, of course Rob is the choice! Gemma knew that too, don't worry. She was just feeling a bit overwhelmed about meeting "Robert Pattinson" at that point and found it difficult to accept that he might actually really like her. But we know better now, don't we?! :)
Thanks so much!
- SwimmingBee x
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