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Reviewer: leanie13 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Finally!!
Im so happy things are turning back around! Im so excited for the next chapter i can hardly wait! its killing me how far apart these stories are being put out, even though there less than a week! haha
Amazing chapter cant wait for the next!
Author's Response: Hi leanie13,
Yep, they're finally going to have their much-awaited big talk. Phew! They've got a lot to sort through, but you're right, things are starting to turn around. The next chapter is waiting in the validation queue, waiting for my beta to read and approve. Hopefully it won't be too far away!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: carlyyt (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
Oh and do you have any story recommendations? Something fun and happy is what I need!
Author's Response: Hiya again carlyyt,
Hmm, story recommendations? I most read RPF. Here a few of my favorites that you can find here on Twilighted, although they've all got some sort of angst in them...
*London Rain, by duders79
*Make Me Believe, by FrostysWiff08
*Finding Forever, by CarLemon
*Behind The Lens, by Jakeward
Or if you're into Edward & Bella, there's My Perfect Mr Imperfect by xrxdanixrx.
Hope you enjoy! :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: carlyyt (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
Hmm... I don't know what to think. I don't know how I feel about it. This is all happening so fast!
This story makes me really want to live in California. The weather where I live has been awful lately. I haven't seen the sunshine in weeks! But this story always brightens my day, so thank you!
Author's Response: Hi carlyyt,
I'm not really sure if you're referring to the first chapter (which you left a review for) or the most recent chapter, sorry!
But aw, I'm glad the story always brightens your day, that's lovely! I actually live in Australia... Summer is just coming to an end over here and I'm looking forward to some nice cool days and nights! :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Robstenlover4eva (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
heyyllooo! :-)
ohh I might have to take back what I said last time... this ones my fave hahaha ohh gosh I think it was because rob was in this one, missed him LOL ohh and just kinda sad Marcus and Tom going back to London... hopefully see them soon? ohhh finally get the reason why Rob did what he did? I know its random, but does this mean its all gonna be all happy ending now, no more angsty parts? hehe soo yeah loved this one,, I swear I had a little tear coming up when Rob said he loved her :'-) hehe oh anyways SwimmingBee I love this story and you're an awesome writer ;-)
xoxo
Author's Response: Heyllooooo Robstenlover4eva!
Yay, this is your new favorite!? Thank you, you're lovely! I know, I missed Rob too, despite everything. I think Gemma feels the same way. :)
So yep, Marcus and Tom are heading back to London, at least for a little while. They will be back though, I promise! Marcus won't be able to stay away from Ally for too long. And hmm, they've still got a lot to talk about and work through, so there might be a few emotional parts coming up, but I always did promise a happy ending! They love each other too much to not try to sort things out, so we'll see.
Aww, you had a little tear when Rob said he loved her? You'd better grab a whole box of tissues for the next chapter then! ;)
Thanks so much for continuing to read and review!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: jordan (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Ok...I'm home sick, miserable, laying on the couch, and an update from you makes me feel better! Thanks for that!
I'm torn...they obviously can't have their conversation in a bar but going back to Gemma's appartment ALONE worries me a bit. She's been strong so far (GO GEMMA!) so maybe being at home will empower her to say what she needs to say without melting into a pile of goo at his feet? You know, I think another update from you would probably cure my fever. :) Anxiously awaiting more, as always!
Author's Response: Hi jordan,
Oh no, sorry to hear you're sick and miserable! That's no good. I hope you're feeling a bit better now!
Hmm, going back to Gemma's apartment was always going to be tough, and Rob actually voices the same concerns in the next chapter. (Hey, I have you your own little teaser!) It's difficult though, because where else could they go? As you said, they can't have the big, important conversation they need to have in a bar for everybody to see and hear. And it's better to be at her place than his - she has the upper hand then, and they're both comfortable there. She has been really strong so far - yay! - and she's not about to melt into goo at his feet, don't worry. So we'll see how it all goes next chapter.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and I hope you feel better soon!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: AstridGreenEyes (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
I like how Gemma has handled the situation with Rob. I expect a very emotional chapter 39. Great chapter as always! XOXO Astrid
Author's Response: Hi Astrid,
I'm glad you're liking the way Gemma is handling things. She still loves Rob, of course, but she's not willing to forgive and forget everything just yet. Hmm, Chapter 39 is certainly a big one. They have lots to talk about.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Nice resolution. I'm glad they're going to "talk".
Author's Response: Hi alexandra,
Glad you enjoyed it! I like how you put "talk" in speech marks. Ahem.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: forsey1987 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
great as always glad they are talking at last
did rob sleep with the other girl or did he make it up to push gemma away?
how many more chapters left?
Author's Response: Hi forsey1987,
Hmm, unfortunately yes, Rob really did sleep with another girl. He may have been pushing Gemma away, but he certainly didn't make it up. She knows that, which is why it's all so difficult. We'll find out his reasoning behind it all in the next chapter.
There are 46 chapters altogether - so only 7 left, eek!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: mom23xx (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
I can't wait for the next chapter. This one was a great one with them reuniting.
Author's Response: Hi mom23xx,
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
The next one is coming up soon! :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Pinkcookie (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Well, they do say time heals all wounds... Can't wait to hear his explanation of WHY he did it?!!?!?!?! It better be good.... Pinkcookie
Author's Response: Hi Pinkcookie,
Hmm, very true - time heals all wounds. They have a lot to talk about, and Gemma's not going to forgive and forget too easily. We'll finally get to hear his explanation next chapter, phew.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Can't wait for the next chapter and finally the big discussion.
Author's Response: Hi danimcket,
Yep, we'll finally hear Rob's explanation for what happened. Hopefully the next chapter won't be too far away.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Ok here we go, I think they will have a really good heart to heart and maybe share a kiss or two. Gemma will stop at a kiss but they will end up togeather again. They are so good togeather and he was an ass for doing what he did but we all make mistakes.I hope she can get past this and move on to find that they really belong togeather. They are soul mates and you can't fight mother nature. Great story can't wait for next chapter.
Lilly
Author's Response: Hi Lilly,
Ooh, I love your prediction! They will definitely have a big heart to heart... but my lips are sealed for the rest of it! :)
They really are great together, and they love each other a lot. You're right, Rob was an ass and made a huge mistake, but yep, we all do sometimes! Gemma's not going to forgive and forget everything overnight, but at least they're talking again.
Thanks so much, as always, for reading and reviewing. You're lovely!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: yorkshirelass (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
great chapter - I loved it. Can totally feel Rob's pain - you write it so well. They have to get together again - they have too much love for each other (despite Rob's stupidness) to waste it.
Meeting at her place - bad idea, but I guess for where they need to go in their conversation - it needs to be somewhere where they can both open up without worrying about what other people can see or here. Better her place than his though - Gemma needs to be in control and I guess at her house, she has the upper hand.
Can't believe I have to wait another week for the next chapter ....agh!. Supposed to be going away on next Saturday, so hope it comes in before then!
Great writing Bee!
Author's Response: Hi yorkshirelass,
So glad you enjoyed the chapter, thank you! And aww, Rob really is in a lot of pain at the moment. As is Gemma. They've got a lot to sort through and she's not about to forgive him too quickly, but you're right. They love each other too much to just let it go completely, without trying. We'll see how they go next chapter.
I totally agree about how going back to her place is a bad idea, but then again, where else could they go? As you pointed out, they have some really important, difficult stuff to discuss and he's Robert Pattinson. They can't just go and sit in a cafe to talk about it all. So yes, her place is better than his - they're both comfortable there and as you said, she has the upper hand. Phew.
The next chapter is in the validation queue now. My beta has been pretty speedy latetly, so hopefully it'll be up soon! (There's a teaser in the forums, too, if you want to check it out.)
Thanks so much for your lovely comments and continued support. It means a lot! :)
-SwimmingBee x
PS. Hope you got your PM reply!
Reviewer: beautifulleyess (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Okay Im kind of hating on you right now for leaving it there... But I guess if you hadnt the chapter would have been mega, gigantically long... So I guess your forgiven. As long as the next one doesnt take forever. Lol. With that said I think I like the pace that its going atm... I hope nothing happens until they've talked about absolutely everything. Including what was goin on at R bar (I think that was Roa trying to push Gem away... And they really didnt talk about what happened that night at all) Anyways loved it as usual!! :)
Beautifulleyess
P.s Hope you werent affected by any of the recent disasters here, floods in queensland or vic or the cyclone...
Author's Response: Hi beautifulleyess,
Ooh, sorry for leaving it there! You're right though - the next chapter is a big one with lots of talking going on, and it needed it's own separate chapter. Hopefully the next one won't be too far away. It's in the queue, waiting to be validated. My beta has been very speedy lately, so fingers crossed! :)
They really do have a lot to sort through, and Gemma's not about to forgive and forget right away, don't worry. In regards to that awful night at the R Bar though, they did talk a little bit about it, and Gemma later realised that's when things changed. After that, Rob was really clingy, as though he knew what was going to happen but wasn't willing to admit it yet. So I think you're right - it was the beginning of the end, in a way.
I've been very fortunate to not have been affected by all the recent disasters, how about you? Scary times - in NZ now, too.
Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely review!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Wowww and the big talk beggins, heheheh
Amazing chap.
Xo, G.
Author's Response: Hi G,
Yep, the big talk begins. Eeek!
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Carly1989 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Very amazing chapter! They really do need to talk. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Carly1989,
Great to hear you enjoyed the chapter. You're right, they really do need to talk, and they finally will in the next chapter. Phew! :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: goldeyedsoul (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Hey Bee, ;)
really great chapter. Loved it but..
OMG..what a cliffhanger! :(
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
My prediction: I think Gem and Rob will talk, Gem will forgive him and then they will fall asleep and Gem's bed.:D
xoxo
drea :)
Author's Response: Hi drea,
Yay! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Sorry about the cliffhanger though. Eeek!
Hopefully the next chapter won't be too far away. My validation beta has been pretty speedy lately, so I have my fingers crossed! There's a little teaser up in the forums, if you feel like checking it out. :)
Love your prediction! There's definitely lots of talking ahead, but my lips are sealed as for the rest of it. ;)
Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: dedreader (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Just right.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, dedreader! Glad you enjoyed. :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: miss3 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Hi Bee....you are killing me here. I want them so much to get through this....Gemma needs lots of answers.OK...maybe I need lots of answers. I've started reading from the beginning to get some clues or ideas as to why Rob would do this. and I'm still in the dark just like Gemma was. I'm still angry at Rob, he needs to beg and beg and beg and somehow regain her trust not just by looking his gorgeous self and all the physical attraction but by actually letting Gemma into his life. BTW...I think I just saw Gemma on an add for a new TV show.....I really love Gemma and would recognize her anywhere. Thanks for the fast posting :)
Author's Response: Hi miss3,
You're right, Gemma (and you) definitely need lots of answers! Rob will get a chance to explain in the next chapter, but she's not about to forgive and forget too easily. There is trust to be rebuilt and plenty of issues to sort through. It certainly won't happen overnight, but at least they're talking again.
Hehee, how funny that you saw Gemma on a TV show advertisement! She's Odette Yustman, an American actress. I think she's on Brothers and Sisters at the moment, so maybe that's what you saw? The guy whose photo I used for Aaron (Dave Annable) is her real-life husband (shh!) and he's on Brothers and Sisters too. They're actually pretty adorable together. But not as adorable as Gemma and Rob, of course! ;)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Lavaughn (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
This chapter was great, but not long enough! I cannot wait to find out the details as to why Rob would betray Gemma like that; but who would be strong enough to not forgive him...he is RPattz after all! Of course I'm just a softy where Rob's concerned. I do admire Gem for being so strong though. I am always so excited when I get an email to let me know you have updated. This story has me so engrossed, I can't wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi Lavaughn,
Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely comments!
Ooh, sorry it wasn't long enough! The next chapter is a big one - they've got lots to talk about - so I couldn't combine them into one. Rob will finally have a chance to explain what happened in the next chapter, so we'll see how they go. Hehee, yep, he is RPattz, but he's also just a guy who made a mess of things. Gemma's not about to forgive him just yet, but I know what you mean. I'm a softy too. :)
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: charmtiarn (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
you need to update like everyday i need my gemma and rob fix i am seriously addicted, hurry hurry type type type.
charmtiarn xoxo
Author's Response: Hi charmtiarn,
Ooh, don't worry! I've always finished writing the rest of the story, and the next chapter is in the queue, waiting to be validated. Shouldn't be too far away now! :)
Thanks for reading!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: LC Cann (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Please, no more than talking. He doesn't deserve her forgiveness yet. Gemma needs to dig deep here and make him work for it. How can she ever trust Rob again? His explanation better be really good.
Author's Response: Hi LC Cann,
Thanks so much for reading, and for sharing your thoughts! It's great to hear from you.
Don't worry, Gemma's not about to forgive and forget too easily. They still have a lot of issues to sort through, and she's very aware of that. We'll finally get to hear from Rob in the next chapter, so we'll see how they go then.
Thanks again,
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Hey Bee --
I read this update with much anticipation. I'm not quite ready to review -- I've learned to read your chapters twice!!! :-) So I'll reread and reveiew tomorrow.
But I must say that I have mixed emotions here. On the one hand I hope you have the next chapter in the que, impatient and can hardly wait. But I also realize that one more chapter brings up closer to the end of these two beautiful life-like characters. And that pulls at my heart strings. I hope you have something else coming up right after DLT. I don't know how I would handle not having a SwimmingBee1 on story alert!!:(
You'll always be on author alert though. Jeez, I almost sound like a stalker!!!! Put your hand over your mouth and snicker very loudly --I just did!!!!! He he he he
Elaine - sparkledamnu on twitter
Author's Response: Hi Elaine,
Aww, I'm so lucky to get two reviews from you! Thank you so much! One of your reviews is lovely enough, but two? I'm very spoilt! :)
It was definitely a chapter of mixed emotions. Nerves, excitement, hope... and just a bit of sexual tension thrown in there too. And of course, yes, the next chapter is in the queue! My validation beta has been pretty speedy lately, so I'm hoping it won't be too far away.
I know, only 7 more chapters left! Eeek! As for what might be coming up after DLT, hmm. I have something up my sleeve but I'm still thinking about it. Not quite decided how it will work yet, but I have a few little ideas in my head!
You're so lovely, Elaine. You can stalk me anytime you like. Hehehee! Thanks again!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: daisy45 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
It takes a truly fantastic story to get me to hit the "review" button. Ding, ding, ding. We have a winner! I'm crushing hard.
I love your Rob and Gemma together. Everything about them. The friendship, the humor, and let's not forget the SEX. Please don't forget the sex!
I have to admit... I never saw the cheating chapter sneak up on us and the following one was just painful to read. So sad. But things are looking up and I can't wait to see where you take them!
Sending much love your way and hoping for a speedy update. Can't wait to get Rob back in Gem's apartment!
Author's Response: Hi daisy45,
Aww, thanks so much for your lovely comments! I'm very glad you decided to review. I'm flattered! :)
It's so great to hear you're enjoying Rob and Gemma. I love the way you described their relationship - friendship, humor and sex. That pretty much sums up a great relationship, doesn't it!? Ace!
Hmm, there were quite a few hints along the way from Rob that something like this might happen, but I'm a bit mean because I kind of wanted it to sneak up on you. Bad things in life have a habit of sneaking up on us when we least expect them to. Gah! But yes, things are starting to look up. They've got a lot of sorting out to do, but at least they're talking now. :)
Hopefully the next chapter won't be too far away, it's in the validation queue now. Thanks again!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: Laurie45 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Relax, Breathe
Oh My, finally answers! U just hope they can work things out babysteps and all, try to discuse things like that is nooot easy, I'm dying to see what happens! Please don't make us wait long! Mwah, Laura.
Author's Response: Hi Laura,
Yep, Gemma (and you!) will finally get some answers from Rob in the next chapter. Maybe not the answers to everything, but a lot of things, anyway. You're right, it won't be easy, but Gemma's ready and it's something they have to do. Eek!
Hopefully the next chapter won't be too far away. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee x
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