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Reviewer: wendemyre (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Oh no, how could he just leave with out a number... :-) Can't wait for the next update!!!..
Author's Response: Aw, it's okay wendemyre! Rob and Gemma sort themselves out eventually, with a little help from their friends. ;)
Thanks so much for popping in again to say hi.
So glad you're still enjoying the story!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Wow! I feel tipsy and befuddled! How did you do that?
Well, I thought Rob would ask for her number, but at least they are still connected through Ally.
Hey, I have a crush on all of them and yes, I think Marcus will call her at exactly 11:02!
Author's Response: Hey Wilynn, welcome back! :)
Sorry for making you feel tipsy and befuddled. How funny! Or is that a good thing!? Hmm! Maybe when Rob is involved...
Maybe Rob was going to ask for Gemma's number, but she didn't let him. She ran off to get Marcus instead, remember? She's still a bit freaked out by the whole thing, poor girl! But yes, there's still Ally, thank goodness.
Thanks so much for your review!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: Piper1 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Hi SB,
I love your story, looking forward to the next chapter.
I am very visual too so love the pictures, the shoes are sooooo cool.
However, what about a picture of Gemma, I really want to know what she looks like.
Piper
Author's Response: Hey Piper,
Thanks so much for your kind words!
Glad you're enjoying the pictures. I love those shoes too.
Gemma is on the story's banner, with Rob! There's another photo of her coming up in the end notes of the next chapter too, but in the meantime, check out the banner. That's her! :)
- SwimmingBee
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
I can't believe with all that sexual tension and flirting there was not a number exchange! I wanted to reach through my computer screen and throttle Gemma myself! :) Can't wait for more....
Author's Response: Haha! Hi again trixie,
Your review made me laugh! Poor Gemma, being throttled through the computer screen. She's just not very brave, is she?!
Don't worry, she gets braver eventually. Much braver. ;)
Thanks for your review!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: twilight_dancer (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
I think that this was an awesome chapter. It kept me entertained the whole way through. In answer to your questions, I think that Gemma will stop calling him by his full name once he shows her how differently Rob and Robert Pattinson kiss a girl (hint, hint); yes Marcus is going to call at 11:02am and he is somehow going to play matchmaker between Rob and Gemma, maybe by getting her phone number from her friend; and Bobby Long is just too adorable for words. Please post again very soon. I love this story, which is saying something since I am usually a Jackson girl.
Author's Response: Yay, thanks twilight_dancer! I'm so glad you liked the chapter!
Your predictions were very, very good! Gemma seems to be using the "Robert Pattinson" name to distance herself a bit from Rob, huh? So maybe you're right... Maybe some Rob kissing might break down those walls! ;)
Marcus and Ally playing matchmaker... hmm. We shall wait and see, won't we? I like your predictions though!
You're usually a Jackson girl? Hmm! I have to admit, I came out of Eclipse declaring that I was now on Team Jasper. He rocked!
Chapter 3 should be up very soon!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Well I forgot to review the first chapter, but I really like your story. Great job on it very well written and I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for stopping by, robbsweetangel. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story!
I've already submitted Chapter 3, so hopefully validation won't take too long. :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: roxiegirl (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Great job! And yeah, Rob can get Gemma's number from Marcus via Ally. Yes, that's the ticket. Can you believe Bobby Long played in my small town and I didn't get to go see him? My DH was not too pleased when I explained who he was and what the Brit pack is. So I didn't go. Sad panda. :(
Author's Response: Hey roxiegirl! Thanks for another lovely review!
Hmm, Marcus and Ally could come in very handy! Don't worry, Rob and Gemma will sort themselves out... eventually!
Bobby Long played in your town and you didn't see him!? Waaaaah! That's sad! You should have snuck out the window while your DH was asleep. Hehee. Or is that taking it a bit too far?
(I love how you called him Bobby Long, just like Gemma does, by the way.)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: duders79 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
"Did you smell him?" "Did you get tingles when he touched your shoes?" And the knickers line?! Loved it! Gorgeous chapter! That's so funny how she calls him Robert Pattinson continually...so cute! Her internal dialogue is great! This chapter was well worth the wait! Well done! Mwah!
On a side note, I really think Gemma would get on soooo well with Evie, don't you? In an alternate universe, that is! Not right now, because of conflicting stories, i.e. Rob, but do you get what I mean?! Ooohh, rambling! Sorry!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your kind words, duders! You rock!
The knickers line was so British, wasn't it? Gemma calling him "Robert Pattinson" just stems from imagining what I would be like if I ever met him. It would be so difficult to just suddenly start calling him "Rob" to his face, don't you think!? Plus, it's allowing Gemma to put a bit of distance in between the two of them as well. Tut tut, Gemma!
And yes, I think Gemma and Evie would get on very well! They could chat about their insecurities and their hot new famous boyfriend. Oh, hang on...!
But seriously, they'd have fun together. And so would Lily and Ally. And our story Tom's could say exactly the same things to each other.
Heheheee. This is just getting ridiculous now.
Thanks again, duders! :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Man, that had sooo many possiblities, damn tweeters!!! How long will it be before they see each other again? Hopefully Marcus will call and that'll open it up!
Author's Response: Hey sadie_nikol,
I know, those annoying tweeters really interrupted Rob and Gemma's fun evening, didn't they? Grrrr!
It won't be too long before they see each other again, don't worry. Gemma has her date with Daniel the next day, remember? And then... who knows?! ;)
Thanks so much for reviewing. Glad you're still enjoying the story!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
I love this story!!! Very fun and exciting! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you nsturms!
So great to hear you're loving the story.
There's lots more fun and excitement coming up soon. :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Awww...dayum.... I'm gutted for Gemma & Rob! Sounds like they were really hitting it off and then those idiots tweeting him... :( I mean, I love Twitter and all that, but who does that? Crazies....
Glad Marcus has Ally's number which means Rob has access to Ally, who in turn has access to Gem! :P
Author's Response: Hey AussieECfan,
I know, poor Gemma and Rob! They were having such a fun night before the tweeting incident - as were Ally and Marcus!
But... ahh yes, there will be Marcus / Ally / Rob / Gemma contact. You've worked it all out! :)
Your review made me smile. Thank you!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: Ell90 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
great story!!!!
can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks Ell90!
Nice to hear you're enjoying the story.
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: samanthawatts (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
amazing so far has totally drew me in. Sorta wish i waited till there were more chapters before starting though, cause what am i to do now :( hurry up pretty please :) x
Author's Response: Hi samanthawatts,
Thanks for your kind words! It's so nice to hear you've been drawn into the story of Gemma and Rob.
Don't worry, I've written a lot of the story already. Hopefully we shouldn't have too long to wait for the next chapter to be validated!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
*stares at screen in shock*
You DID NOT just do that!! LOL
MORE MORE MORE!!!!
Author's Response: Oh no! Ha! Sorry mizz_music! ;)
You have to have a bit of a build-up between Rob and Gemma though, right?!
Plus, how long could Rob really stay out at a bar in LA? Not very long before he had to run off, I imagine! Poor Gemma!
I've already submitted Chapter 3. Fingers crossed for a speedy validation!
Thanks for your review. It made me laugh!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Loving this story:) Can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Hi jenjan24,
Great to hear you're loving the story! i'm having lots of fun writing it too. :)
More Gemma and Rob will be just around the corner!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Loved it, fab chapter, cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the new chapter, lunaluna!
Next one shouldn't be too far away. I've already submitted it - it all just depends on how long the validation queue is now!
Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks wilson! Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
Hahahahahaha...that's probably what I'd be like too, fantastic start! Can't wait for more!
Sareenna xxoo
Author's Response: Hi Sareenna,
Thanks for your nice words! Glad you're enjoying the story so far. Chapter 2 shouldn't be too far away - I submitted it last week so I'm just waiting for it to be validated by my beta.
I think I'd be like that if I met Robert Pattinson too!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: RobAussieFan (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
loving this story so far! it makes me want to go out dancing with my friends. Gemma is lots of fun and I can't wait to see what happens between her and rob.
more please!
Author's Response: Hey RobAussieFan,
So glad to hear you're liking the story! Gemma and her friends are definitely lots of fun.
I really wanted to write a fun, girly story - I'm so pleased that seems to be coming across to people.
Chapter 2 is ready and rearing to go. It's in the validation queue, so hopefully it should be right around the corner. :)
Thanks for your kind words!
- SwimmingBee
Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
Her shoes are adorable!!! I would kill for him to touch my ANYTHING!!! lOl
Keep it up, hope it updates soon! N E Chance for a sneak peek at Ch. 2? Hmmm?
Author's Response: Hi sadie_nikol,
Thank you for your review! Her shoes are pretty cute, aren't they?!
Rob can touch my anything, anytime! ;)
I submitted Chapter 2 a couple of days ago, so now it lies in the hands of my lovely beta to validate it for everybody to read. Shouldn't be too long, hopefully!
I've sent you a sneak peek of Chapter 2 - check your inbox! :)
- SwimmingBee
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
more fast please!!
and yes if i met rob i would be probably talking nonstop and i would foret the wedding ring LOL.(robs on my laminated list LOL)
Author's Response: Hi twilightmom96,
Heeey, Rob's on my laminated list too! Funny! Along with Jake Gyllenhaal. You'll find lots of little subtle Jake references scattered throughout my story just for fun too. :)
Chapter 2 should be just around the corner!
Thanks so much for your review!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: eryka12 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
I LOVE your spotty shoes!!
I'd likely do the same if I ever met his holy hawtness in person, especially if he initiated contact! I'm so spacially unaware, I'd probably never even notice him until he spoke to me.
This h00r wants more of your awsome story!
Eryka
Author's Response: Hey Eryka!
I'm guessing you came over from RAoR to check out my story - thank you!! Hehee! Gee, I wonder what gave it away...
They're not really my spotty shoes - they're Gemma's! I would quite like some though. They're cute, huh?
Thanks for your review! It made me laugh!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
I'm swooning over this one! Can't wait to read how the plot develops. Great first chapter, very descriptive and I feel like I know them all already. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, AussieECFan!
Glad to hear there's swooning happening. :)
-SwimmingBee
PS. Hey, I'm an Aussie too!
Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
More, More, More.......................................
Author's Response: It's coming, it's coming, it's coming!
Thanks for popping in, lunaluna72!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: roxiegirl (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
I'd die If I ever me Rob! No words would come out at all! Great first chapter. I'm looking forward to chappie two and more Rob!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for your review, roxiegirl. :)
Maybe we'd all need a few strong drinks before we could actually manage to speak to Rob!
More Rob will be just around the corner!
- SwimmingBee
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